The object of description: character description, scenery description, scene description and detail description.
Description angle: front description and side description.
Methods of describing characters: appearance (including expression), language, action and psychology.
Environmental description (scenery description) is divided into natural environment and social environment.
Methods of describing scenery: static and dynamic combination (writing static and dynamic), generalization and concrete combination, from far to near (or from near to far)
Describe the perspective of the scene: vision, hearing, taste, touch and smell.
Classification by content ● Role description
1. General description, 1. Portrait description, 1. Language description, 4. Action description, 1. Psychological description, 1. Detailed description.
7. Expression description
Scenery description, static and dynamic, objective and subjective, contrast and contrast.
Classification by characteristics
● Sketch The so-called "sketch" refers to a writing method that grasps the main characteristics of things and outlines the image of things with concise language. Mr. Lu Xun is very good at using sketching techniques, such as the introduction of Mr. Fujino in Mr. Fujino: "At that time, a dark and thin gentleman came in with a moustache and glasses, holding a pile of books, big and small. As soon as I put the book on the podium, I introduced myself to the students in a slow and depressed tone. My name is Fujino Genkuro. ? The language is concise and impressive.
● Detailed description. Fine description refers to the meticulous carving of things, which can also be called meticulous painting, as opposed to simple drawing. For example, A Lei's One Side writes Lu Xun in more detail than Lu Xun's Fujino: "His face is yellow, black and white, and he is worryingly thin, like a person who has recovered from a serious illness, but his spirit is good and he is not depressed at all."
2. Writing skills and methods 1. Improve the ability to understand and express things. Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator in China, pointed out: "Writing anything depends on knowledge and experience. What kind of knowledge and experience can make you write something. On the other hand, if you don't have the ability to express understanding, you can't write a good composition. "
Second, take the cognitive structure as the core of the composition, including learning knowledge, observing accumulation, memory storage, training thinking, enriching imagination, cultivating emotion and exercising will; From talking about writing, scrutinizing and revising, reading more books and writing more.
Third, set up a big composition concept and combine listening, speaking, reading and writing organically.
First, we should pay attention to the examination of questions; The second is to make clear the purpose of writing and be innovative; Third, the selection of materials should be based on evidence; Fourth, we should pay attention to writing skills and arrange the structure of the article; Fifth, we should pay attention to the segmentation of the article and list the subheadings and composition outlines in advance; Sixth, we should pay attention to the writing and usage of the article; Seventh, we should use language skillfully and use thought to schedule language. Learn five ways to conceive: praise people with things, express their feelings directly, reason with things, touch the scene and express their feelings with things.
Fourth, the composition goal is broken down year by year:
First-grade words, second-grade sentences, third-grade fragments, fourth-grade chapters, fifth-grade synthesis, and sixth-grade improvement.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) carries out five trainings.
According to the principle that cognition is the core of composition, around the core of developing students' psychological mechanism, five trainings have been carried out in a down-to-earth manner:
(1) word training. Learn to master many words. Master the golden key to using words: contact with things you are familiar with; Contact your own life reality; Contact your knowledge of language and writing. Use the method of "ten quotations" to combine word learning with oral training. The "Top Ten Quotations" are: 1, analyzing glyphs; 2. Use teaching AIDS; 3. Look at the pictures and learn words; 4. Word formation and expansion; 5. Choose words to fill in the blanks; 6. collocation of words; 7. Adjust the word order; 8. Words used to move the scene; 9. Word classification; 10, conjunctions into sentences. Enrich the content of oral training, so that I can accumulate a large number of words that I can speak and use, and lay a solid foundation for writing.
(2) Sentence training. As long as it is a sentence, it includes two aspects: one is about people, things, things and scenery, and the other is about purpose. However, some teachers do not use pictures and things to seriously teach students the methods of observation, understanding, analysis and expression when instructing students to say a sentence. They just take out a picture or something for students to say and write a sentence. Students don't know why to say and write a sentence, how to say and write a sentence, and what sentence patterns to say and write, which leads to a single, dull and lifeless composition tone. Students can be taught to speak and write a sentence with four complete elements, four sentence patterns and nine sentence patterns, according to pictures, things, dialogues and exercises. Students will use different sentence patterns and sentence patterns to express different thoughts, feelings, attitudes and purposes in their compositions.
(3) Paragraph training. Combination of eight segments: the development of things is a sequential segment, time is a sequential segment, and spatial transformation is a sequential segment, a general and substructure segment, a causal segment, a turning segment, a progressive segment, and a parallel segment. In order to understand the law of occurrence and development of objective things. No matter what kind of paragraph, it describes the development of things and people's understanding of things, that is, the content and the center of the paragraph. Like a sentence, it is also a description of people, things, things and scenery, and it also expresses a meaning. Just to make a sentence clearer and deeper.
(4) Text training. A chapter consists of paragraphs. Through the knowledge and methods of examining topics, making ideas, selecting materials, planning articles, defining methods and terms, through the four expression methods of narration, description, lyricism and discussion, the methods of beginning and end of articles, transition and echo, and the knowledge and methods of various article genres. Learn to write narrative and practical articles with clear center, complete meaning and appropriate details.
(5), life on-site training. Use on-site training to better understand writing from the content. Through various composition teaching activities such as "centering", "selecting materials", "composition consultation meeting", "Xiao Zhuge grade examination meeting" and "wonderful word competition meeting", we can learn composition knowledge and writing methods vividly and concretely from the activities. In addition, you can also carry out various activities inside and outside the school, such as skipping rope, tug-of-war, kicking shuttlecock, ball games, endorsement competitions, etc., and learn how to write competition compositions; Carry out voluntary labor inside and outside the school and learn how to write labor scenes; Hold poetry recitals and lectures to learn how to write conference scenes and experiences; Learn how to write travel notes and travel notes by visiting and browsing places of interest. Learn to observe methods and pay attention to things around you. "Pay attention to everything and you will learn. The cultivation of human feelings is the article." Through on-site life composition, I further realized that life is fertile ground for composition. So as to learn something, express the true feelings, cultivate the sentiments of truth, goodness and beauty, and cultivate a good style of writing.
Implement "mutual evaluation and mutual reform" to cultivate students' thinking independence and creativity. After students write their compositions, organize group comments. Learn the advantages of other people's compositions first, and then point out the shortcomings in their own compositions with critical eyes and suggestions for improvement. Rewrite on this basis, so that students can learn something from each article they write.
Write down your truth.
"Write your honest words" is what the old educator Mr. Ye Shengtao said. It aims to create a colorful "independent" composition world. The so-called "autonomy" means that students are free to think and write without being restricted by rules and regulations. "Independent" composition means "speaking from the heart", acting spontaneously, showing self-style, and embodying distinctive personality.
3. How to quickly master the method of writing well and how to improve the writing ability of middle school students 1. Writing must be accumulated first. Reading is a way of "accumulation", and what books to read varies from person to person and from time to time.
You can't know whether a book is suitable for you until you finish reading it. In fact, any reading material may have a great influence on you.
So I suggest you read as many articles as possible and write some targeted reading notes. Second, writing is a process of accumulation, and it is a process of releasing accumulation for a period of time.
The deeper the accumulation, the more exciting the release; The more scientific the accumulation, the more effective the release. Third, so we say that the accumulation of thoughts, knowledge and life is the source and foundation of writing.
It requires the writer to have the following abilities: 1, the ability to find and collect materials; 2. Ability to read, analyze and digest; 3. Ability of classification and induction; 4. Ability of data sorting and document management; The so-called "ability" here is actually to master certain skills and methods and use them flexibly. So finding and mastering the method that suits you is the key to the problem.
Fourth, we must first know the four major parts of the writing process: 1. Summary analysis II. Creative thinking. Composition writing 4. There are different methods and techniques for laying out and cleaning up each part. Secondly, you should know which part of your writing process is insufficient.
This is the hardest. This is the truth that "people are expensive and have self-knowledge".
Third, we should choose a writing method that suits our own characteristics. Usually, the lack of writing ability stems from the wrong writing method.
Fourth, choose the necessary writing tools. Sharp tools make good work.
Choosing the right tools to make up for your own shortcomings can greatly improve your writing ability.
4. What kind of composition books are good in primary schools? You stressed the need for method-based tutorial books. I think it is better for children to read more synchronous composition selections. If the child is very capable, he might as well read excellent works in the second year of high school, mainly to learn other people's writing skills.
I advocate reading more excellent works of my peers, especially the excellent works in the examination room. Because what peers think, discuss and write easily resonates with students.
This same or similar "context" is easy to find a bosom friend. Thereby eliminating strangeness and shortening reading distance.
Naturally, it will be kind and convenient for them to learn from. Reading only books on methods is boring, and it is difficult for children to cooperate.
The following is my experience for your reference. Children in lower grades begin to read synchronized compositions, which can be imitated.
Training children to tell stories is good for writing. Senior children.
Be sure to practice your pen frequently. How to write a good composition? 1, a good article comes from life, write what you see and hear; Write your own personal experience; Write your true feelings, so that the article will be vivid and touching.
2. Writing is not accomplished overnight. But in the face of today's exam-oriented education, we might as well learn some skills.
For example, recite more paragraphs at ordinary times, with a good beginning and a good ending. To prepare for the exam.
3. Read more, study hard and learn from it. Good articles, good words and sentences, learn to accumulate.
4. Create a novel and unique article title. Sometimes you can get twice the result with half the effort.
5. Keeping a diary can not only practice writing, but also accumulate materials. 6. Learn to quote famous sayings and immortal poems to make your article more convincing.
7. Usage of good words and sentences. Good words and sentences used in the article can add color to your article and sublimate it. But it should be just right, not too much, too much will appear flashy.
8. apply what you have learned, that is, the ability to change, and change with the same. 9, close to nature, go out for a walk more during the holidays, see more and learn more.
10, being close to nature can also make your collected materials more colorful. References:
I hope my answer can help you, and I wish you progress in your study.
5. Ways to improve your composition. Hello, I'm a Chinese teacher. I can teach you some methods.
1, reading, reading is a necessary way to accumulate, but it is not the only way.
2. Writing should start with writing landscape notes. For example, scenery, describe the scenery you see, such as white clouds in the sky written on paper first, plus blue sky and soft white clouds.
Remember, remember is to remember people. Because only people can happen (except animals), make clear the general meaning of a thing and then join the people who make it. Among them, people's hearts, demeanor and portraits should be described. The cause, process and result of the event.
3, the accumulation of vocabulary, in fact, the simplest way is to form words, and then find synonyms, antonyms. You can also make words within an understandable range. For example, training is simply training from a business perspective. Therefore, the key to the quality of words lies in the angle of your writing.
4. read books. You really want to write an amazing article now. Then you can ignore the works of the sixties and seventies, but you can look at the essays of some famous writers. You can quote some classic sentences in the article.
5, learn to associate, your current composition is still in the proposition composition. So to give you a topic, you should think of another thing. I remember that in 2005, the composition topic of Tianjin senior high school entrance examination was self-proposition, but it was about "root"
So you can think of a lot. Therefore, a large part of the inspiration for writing lies in associative imagination.
Well, that's all I have to say. You can ask me again if you don't want to.
6. The most important way to write a good composition is to have true feelings, which is very important. If you write on an ordinary basis, you can get a lot of points as long as you have feelings and intentions. In fact, the selection of materials depends on your discrimination in composition. For different types of compositions, we must find the best material. Sometimes we can write different articles on some topics in life that can be searched carefully. This is what some writers are good at. I can't expect to say that if I tell you a secret, you can write hard and specific immediately. After all, it takes a little time to improve your composition. Don't worry, it will work. This is a good way to enlarge your vocabulary. Read more optimistic composition books at ordinary times. So what's wrong with not writing the central figure? I tell you, the three basic points of writing are true. It is your own. People with poor composition should not argue or put on makeup. You have to be yourself and be as small as possible. Don't write empty words and big words. Write only your true feelings. So you should know a lot of articles. If you want to highlight "I", of course, you can have me for nothing. For example, writing about teachers can set off the greatness of teachers through their own promotion. Write about yourself, but don't digress. Those who need to stand out must remember three words: true self and ego. I used to write a low composition, but after being taught by the teacher, my composition rose rapidly. It can be said that no one in the class is better than my composition. As for writing a landscape composition, it mainly focuses on what kind of comfort or feeling the landscape brings to you, and it is necessary to add a little more "tricks". This is a description. Description requires you to have a large vocabulary, so it is very close to what I said. I'm afraid you won't insist on writing. If you insist on writing according to my method, it is only a matter of time before you make progress. You can also learn to have unique ideas in your composition that are different from others. When writing, others can use the first person to write' or the second person to highlight their differences', which will add a lot of points' if you have a wonderful beginning and end, it will be better. Generally, teachers in large-scale examinations read too many compositions, and generally only read the beginning and end once. You should take good care of it. Having said that, we really need to act. When your composition is finished, you will find that writing is no longer a headache. The number of words you write will increase as you express your feelings. ! Growing up, we have an infinite dream, but others say it is always too far away from us.
It's just that in our childish hearts, we've been looking forward to a dream miracle. Time pushes us towards adulthood step by step. As adults, we are closer to maturity, and we understand the difference between reality and dreams.
I also know that dream and reality are two parallel lines that can never intersect. When we recall our childhood dreams, we just think that they are some nonsense, and no one will say it again. We will continue our dream.
When I grow up, the string of dreams follows and floats into the boundless ocean of time and space. Where did it go? I don't even know my own soul. Some people say this is a symbol of maturity.
However, with maturity, why do we become more confused about our past life and lose our direction on the way forward? That's because there is no light in front of us. Without the guidance of this light, we are just lost children.
So, we must install a lamp. What about your dream? Did you lose it? If you lose it, you have to bring it back and clean it, and it will shine.
You hang it on the road or at the end not far away. As long as you look at it, you will feel as safe as I do. If you really despise your childhood dreams, then you must always have a goal.
Such as buying a house, a car, or being with a beautiful wife. Even smaller is a book and a delicious dinner. These can also be a bright light, some you can touch close to, and some you can only hang there forever.
But one thing is, you will look at this lamp and say, I fought for it, I fought for it, and I shed blood and sweat for it. I also put my life into it and attached my heart to it, so I have no regrets.
This is the history of my life. I know a young man who is diligent, but he never gets along well in his work.
He doesn't know what his problem is. I mentioned it occasionally when I was talking to him once. I asked him, what do you need? I didn't expect that he wouldn't answer such a simple question.
He groaned for a long time and didn't spit out a word. I have met several other boys like him, all of whom are full of ambition and seem to have some ambitions.
But they just don't know what they really want, and they are actually very disappointed about the future and life. I told him that you should always know what you want and then pursue it.
If you don't know what you need, how can you pursue it? Your so-called struggle and struggle every day are just scattered into pieces and scattered in the ocean of your life. Set a goal, even if it is illusory, and let it shine on your way forward.
At least it means that you are still looking at this lamp, in fact, you have been slowly approaching this lamp. Its distance will not get farther and farther away from you, but will only get closer and closer.
Even you can't say it's not unattainable at all. It is the pursuit of reality, not a dream. When dreams become your job, you will feel so close to them.
To give yourself a lamp is to set a goal for yourself and leave a realistic hope for yourself. Whether you succeed or fail.
In front of this lamp, you will only look forward to the glory of life. You won't feel helpless in life. These helplessness and pain are flowers on both sides of the road, and they will also give a touch of color to your life.
From now on, set up a lamp for yourself, and let it guide you forward, and then move forward. You can also use this lamp to slowly forget the disappointments in life, because you have already pursued.
You'll put your.
7. Ask to write a short composition about reading methods of about 300 words. My reading method.
Instructor: Wuqun: Primary school senior upload time: 20112/213:12: 01Author: Tu Yuchen School Name: Nanchang Baisong Primary School Click Times: 2309 My reading method is bright. People all say: "Reading is like breaking thousands of books, and writing is like being a god." My reading club will extract good words and wonderful fragments, expand my knowledge, recite them and use them in my composition to improve my writing level. In my composition, there are many sentences and words that the teacher uses red strokes, which the teacher thinks are good. Every time I write a composition, the teacher will read my article in class, which is the reason for reading. I will read and think at the same time. Once I watched Animal World on TV and saw giraffes sleeping standing up. I'm a little confused. Go to my small bookcase to check the information. I am in "100,000 Why?" I found the answer and solved the puzzle, which is also the reason for reading. I will watch it again and again, and then think about what the story is mainly about, why the story is written like this, and why the author writes like this. On second thought, I will write down my feelings about reading this story and post it on my blog. In fact, I really should thank the book, which not only gives us endless knowledge, gives me the power to write, but also tells me a profound truth and lights up a bright light for my life. I love books!
8. The writing skill book wrote this article because the new book potential list is divided into two lists, which gives newcomers more opportunities to show.
However, many newcomers have taken stimulating measures, and many newcomers still don't know what their problems are. So it's still useful for newcomers to write something.
According to the writing strength of the first author, I can probably be regarded as the middle and lower position of the second-line author. Maybe it should be the top author among the third-line authors.
As far as the quality of writing is concerned, I think many newcomers are better than me. But as the deputy editor of the starting point editorial department, Shanda Entertainment? ; The editor-in-chief of the novel is also a participant in the formulation of many systems at the starting point. I think I have been watching the development of the starting point objectively in recent years, watching a large number of works at the starting point, and also watching the mistakes that newcomers often repeat.
When I say who I am, I don't want to show off. But to show that this identity makes my reading at the starting point more targeted.
When I look at a work, I don't just look good or not, but see if it has commercial value. I will write some thoughts on the topic selection, outline, role shaping, plot rhythm, working methods of the starting point editorial department, the effect of various lists, and how the author can develop better at the starting point, hoping to help the new author.
This introductory guide for online writers is aimed at business writers who like to write and want to exchange their writing for a stable and good income. If you want to write a masterpiece, prose and poetry, this article is useless to you.
I dare not say that what I wrote is of great help to a new author, but even if the new author can benefit from it, it is worthwhile. A few years ago, I was so poor that I could hardly write.
But thanks to the help of enthusiastic friends on the internet, I have weathered the storm, and now I have a good working environment and a good income. Therefore, I firmly believe that friends who like writing, work hard and have writing talent should not work hard, but they cannot get proper material rewards.
Network writers, we should also get material rewards for writing, which is our right. This article is dedicated to new friends who work hard by writing.
The first article of network writing: conception. Intention, that is, choose a topic, choose the theme you want to write.
Many authors neglected the topic, but recently they read a book and liked it very much, so they wanted to write such a topic. But the topic selection is the basis of the author's writing.
Any writer has his own writing style. Moreover, this style will have a considerable impact on the popularity of the work because of the topic selection.
For example, Mr. Jing Lan's writing is beautiful and complicated, and he uses a writing style close to the translation style. His knowledge of European medieval history and culture made his writing style complement other European, China and medieval theme structures.
Among the online works, Mr. Jing Lan's works can best describe the political and cultural atmosphere in medieval Europe. His writing style has not been imitated by the author on the internet at present.
So even though he used coral, he still wrote thief. But any reader who has seen his works can recognize the author within a few chapters.
Mr. Hong Xue is the most popular writer at the beginning, and his works are characterized by novelty and boldness, just as diego maradona is for fans. This freshness will always make readers feel refreshed about the protagonists of the same type as others in his works. But in his works, whether ghosts, dragons, evil spirits, China people, foreigners, ancient people and modern people, the protagonists always seem to have the same personality feeling.
Today, many new authors still hold the view that Mr. Hong Xue just wrote too early and got lucky. If I had written a rebellious work and written it so fast, I would still be popular. This mentality, as director China always said, gives me so much money, I can also shoot the Lord of the Rings Star Wars.
But our best director can only shoot indefinitely after taking the money. Let's digress a little bit and go back to the topic. How do newcomers choose the theme that suits them? Theoretically, the theme is not suitable for newcomers, but only for authors.
Did not say what the old people are suitable for, and what the new people are suitable for. However, for new writers who aim at business writing, there are still some topics that are not suitable for them who have just entered the business.
Personally, for newcomers who don't have certain writing experience and confidence, the first book should not touch the three categories of martial arts, science fiction and reasoning. Most readers grew up reading martial arts books.
Martial arts pearls and jadeites are in the forefront, and there are countless classics. But most importantly, the routines and role-building of Wushu are familiar to most readers.
I understand that all newcomers have a martial arts dream. After all, Jianghu is the eternal dream of China people. But it is too difficult for newcomers to write martial arts well, especially long martial arts.
If you really can't let go of your martial arts dream, pack your martial arts. For example, the essence of Zhu Xian is martial arts romance, but it is packaged in Xian Xia.
"Ultimate Hell" used online games to package martial arts, and all of them achieved remarkable success. Another shortcut to writing martial arts is to write well-known works. The advantage of this writing method is that the author does not need to spend too much energy to describe the characters because the characters in the book have been clearly printed in the readers' minds.
And the love of the original work and the expectation of the role will also make it easier for the work to gather a large number of readers. Whether it is the famous "Young Qiao Feng" before, or the "Young Here" named after shooting sculptures in Jiangnan.
In other words, Random Thoughts of Eight Dragons, I am Zhang Wuji, and The Legend of Datang Shuanglong, which have gained a good popularity on the Internet, are all representatives. But the biggest problem with this kind of works is that they are all the works of the same artist. To tell the truth, it is illegal to use the works of the same artist to gain commercial benefits.
The older generation of martial arts writers generally ignored the comparison of their online peers, which has actually become a tacit behavior. Although the starting point is a martial arts fan work, it is generally allowed to join VIP.
But if you recommend publication, don't count on it. The allowed fans are basically limited to early martial arts works and Huang Yi.