Leaning alone in front of the windowsill.
Looking back on the bumpy road,
Sorrow is like a curtain of rain.
If you don't follow the rules, it's a limerick. This work is about melancholy, with drizzle as the scene, and it feels good as a whole. The implication is a little dim, but it doesn't deviate from the subject.
Personal understanding, the effect is this:
The sky was dark and drizzled like cotton. Sometimes there is a diagonal wind and the rain is flying. In the eyes of people with worries, it increases troubles and worries. Leaning alone in the attic window, looking at this annoying rain curtain. In a trance, I can't help but recall my own experience. What a bumpy and thorny journey this is. Sadness and joy, joy and sadness, the feelings in the world, I am afraid that someone will eventually feel and experience. And I happen to be such a person. Thoughts wander, the rain gradually rises, and screams at the window bring people who are lost in thought back to reality. Tears and sad silk also flowed down like curtains.
This work is about melancholy. In the analysis and appreciation, there are several words that are better used, namely, Lian, Gu, Si and Curtain. It also reflects the author's melancholy at that time.
Gorgeous and picturesque. Suggestions can be modified according to the rules, which will be a better work.
My humble opinion, I hope it suits my mood.