●The Sapphire Case·Guiwei Daojian
Li Zengbo
The crow of the crow breaks through the dim smoke in the forest, waking up the traveler from his dream.
Take a fierce photo of Zhengan and ascend the small ridge.
The peaks and turns are turning, the moon is bright and people are quiet, creating a cool and refreshing environment.
The horse's hoof trampled Qiong Yao's shadow to pieces, leaving the veil untied by the dew.
Look at the faint clouds on the front mountain.
Deep in Cuiwei, if anyone has a home, I would like to use firewood to ask.
Appreciation of Li Zengbo’s poems
This is a night poem, full of youthful atmosphere.
When writing about night travel, start in the evening. Traveling during the day made the poet fall asleep on the horse. "The crow crows through the dim smoke in the forest, awakening Lu Meng and Er." The crow cries incessantly, breaking the silence of the forest shrouded in the dusk mist, and Lu Meng is suddenly awakened. It was getting dark at this time, and the poet became nervous all of a sudden, so he "beat Zheng'an and climb the small ridge". "Shooting" is an urgent action when Tianwan is in a hurry. "Xiaoling" may be a place name, or it may refer to a low mountain. From here, we can see a kind of motivation to climb.
The "small ridge" is not small. "The peaks turn, the moon is bright and the people are quiet, creating a cool and refreshing environment." The peaks overlap and the mountain roads are twists and turns. At this time, the moon rises, and the mountains and fields are silent, like the darkness of the evening. , Noisy in sharp contrast, making people feel as if they have entered another world. The previous film uses the technique of line drawing to quietly express the reasons and state of mind of walking in the mountains and forests at night.
The next film will continue to write about the fun of night walking. "Horse hoofs trample Qiong Yao's shadow to pieces." Qiong Yao refers to the moonlight. This sentence is adapted from Dongpo's "Moon over the Xijiang River": "It's a pity that the wind and moon on the stream can't break through Qiong Yao." The horse walking on the scattered moonlight is indescribable. "The veil is not neat and tidy when exposed." "Wei'an" means not wanting. It was late at night, the wind was blowing, and the dew wet the turban without even bothering to tidy it up. The cool dew soaked the headscarf and moistened the cheeks, which was pleasant. According to the word pattern of "The Sapphire Case", this sentence should have seven characters, but here it is eight characters, with the lining character "Ren" added. With the addition of the word "Ren", the writer's sense of comfort and satisfaction becomes even more prominent. The best scenery is also "greedy to see the faint clouds on the front mountain". The Qianshan mountain surrounded by light clouds under the moonlight is an even more attractive place. The more this kind of scenery is shrouded in light clouds, the more attractive it is under the moon, urging people to move forward. "Deep in Cuiwei, if there is anyone's home, I'll hit the firewood door and ask." "Chaihao", Chaimen. In a densely forested area, he found someone's house and "tested the firewood." "Testing", I want to knock, I want to ask, but I don't really mean it. In fact, whether there are people or not will not affect the poet's interest in walking. It ends with the discovery of others, which is similar to "Moon on the West River" in Jiaxuan's Night Walk on the Yellow Sand Road. Jiaxuan's poem is: "In the old days, by the forest of Maodian Society, I suddenly saw the bridge over the creek when the road turned." But the emotions contained in the two are different. . Jiaxuan expresses his surprise and intimacy when he suddenly encounters the "old thatched shop" when it rains, and the night walk ends here; the careless "testing of firewood" here is just a small episode in the wonderful night walk, and the interest It seems quite profound.
This word describes a night walk. The road turns around and beautiful scenery appears one after another, and there is a lot of fun. It really has the artistic conception of "the mountains and rivers are full of doubts and there is no way, and the willows and flowers are bright and there is another village". The writing is light and lively, corresponding to the author's joyful mood.