Test analysis:
First, the examination guidance
This is a topic composition with materials, so you should stick to the materials when reviewing the questions. As can be seen from the materials, sparrow, rooster and quail are one type. They are short-sighted, narcissistic and enterprising. Xiong Ying belongs to another type, lofty, ambitious, insatiable and aggressive. There are many ideas from different angles. You can also start with the overall meaning, which means "the stage is as big as the heart" and "you can see far only if you fly high".
Secondly, this paper analyzes the composition test.
From the given materials, we can extract two key things: birds, represented by sparrows, symbolize short-sighted people in the present society; Birds, represented by larks, symbolize visionary and ambitious people in today's society. Therefore, it can be seen that the two kinds of birds symbolize two kinds of people in society, and the reason why the realm is completely different lies in the different positioning of life.
Third, the direction of this composition.
1. Criticize the low living height and advocate the high living height.
2. Praise the lofty height of life.
3. No matter whether it is a low life height or a high life height, you don't directly express your position and come to the conclusion that the life height that suits you is the most beautiful.
4. From the perspective of a bystander, objectively comment on the short and high attitude towards life.
Fourthly, how to make good use of materials in writing.
Material-based topic composition, the given material is useful, it not only leads to the topic, but also determines the direction of the article. When writing, you can't put the material aside, but deduce the material from time to time and click on the topic.
Comments: "two unforgettable" is the premise of writing a good topic composition: First, don't forget to try to figure out "hints". Prompt is the material that leads to the topic, the trajectory of the proposer's thinking and the starting point of the examinee's examination. "Hint" has both enlightening and limiting effects on candidates' thinking. Writing thinking should start with "hints". Candidates should read the tips carefully and not abuse or even expand the tips. The purpose of trying to figure out the hints is to find the internal connection with the "topic", understand the theme from the connection, and then screen out the most suitable material for the composition. The second is not to forget to stick to the "topic". "Topic" is the core of the composition, the limitation of the proposer on the scope of the composition, and the basis and standard for candidates to choose materials. To stick to the topic, we must first assemble and select materials around the topic and buckle the essence of the topic. Sticking to the topic should start from the examination of the topic and run through the whole process of composition.