1. Are you aware of the four major problems in children's composition?
Second, do you understand the meaning of advanced room?
Are you willing to help the child get on the horse and let him ride it?
Fourth, can you feel that composition is a word game?
5. Are you willing to set a goal that the child can achieve by jumping according to his reality?
6. Do you understand the function of imitating composition?
7. Do you know the steps of learning composition's rigidity, solidification, strengthening and optimization?
8. Do you understand that oral composition is a "too good" method?
9. Do you understand the essential difference between "Apple" and "Apple Story"?
Now let's get down to business. "Symmetry" originally comes from "right" in "Li Weng to the Cloud". "Dai Li Weng", needless to say, is the author's nickname; "Right" is symmetry; "Rhyme" means rhyme. Let's look at several groups first: "The sky is against the ground, and the rain is against the wind. The mainland faces the sky. Mountain flowers are to the sea tree, and the sun is to the sky. The thunder is weak and foggy. The sun sets into the sky. The wind is high and the moon is white, and the rain is red. " Of course, there are longer sentences in "Rion Duiyun", so you can look for them. Through this, we can see that there are symmetrical words and symmetrical sentences in it. In the book to be published in the future, we will talk about "four symmetries": one is symmetrical words, the other is symmetrical sentences, the third is symmetrical blocks, and the fourth is symmetrical paragraphs.
Why do you want to talk about "symmetry" with children or people who have just "entered the church" instead of complicated rhetoric? Avenue to Jane, back to Jane. This is the only purpose. In other words, talk about what children can understand and feel. Starting with "Li Weng to the Cloud", we can see the enlightenment of melody. Thousand-character prose, study tour in Qionglin, three-character classics and disciples' rules are all symmetrical expressions. In other words, the enlightenment of tone, Li Weng's rhymes, thousands of words, Qionglin, Sheng Amethyst, disciple rules, etc., are all equivalent to the primary school textbooks in the past. In these books, the most important feature is symmetry, which is suitable for children's cognition.
So, is there any way or reason to explain that "symmetry" is a simple practice? Say the words first. Is black and white symmetrical? Black and red, blue and blue, Tianya and Haijiao, Zhang Guan and Dai Li, white clouds and blue sky, walking clouds and flowing water ... Are these symmetrical?
Recognize symmetrical words, expand them, and we also recognize symmetrical words. So, what role do they play? You can tell your child that this is a "word game" and you can use it to make up the numbers. How can I put it? For example, we will write: No matter where you are, I will miss you. Can we write to emphasize that no matter where you are, I will miss you. We can also play word games like this: if you are in the end of the world, I will miss you; If you go to the Cape, I will miss you, too. Similarly, we can also change the word "missing" to: I will miss you at the ends of the earth, and I will care about you at the ends of the earth. Another example is "weather". It is crisp in autumn today. Let's expand it. Can you write this way: It's crisp in autumn and cool in autumn. This expression, one is full, and the other is to increase the rhythm of the article.
Ambigrams, a symmetrical word, is easy to understand. What about symmetrical paragraphs? Where's the symmetrical block? This is also easy to understand. For example, if we call one paragraph A and the other paragraph B, and consider A and B as one word, will there be symmetry? For example, in a short essay entitled "Gratitude", there is a paragraph called "Gratitude First" and a paragraph called "Gratitude Second". Is this symmetrical?
Ok, let's ask again: are black and white symmetrical? It is symmetrical from the word point of view, so how do we understand the symmetry of a paragraph or block? For example, when writing about my mother, can you write "mother's shortcomings" at the beginning of A and "mother's advantages" at the beginning of B? A is black and B is white. Is this symmetrical?
Understand this, let's take a look at the Yueyang Tower: In the spring of four years, the son of Teng (téng) (zhé) guarded Baling County. In the second year, the government was harmonious and everything went smoothly. Is to rebuild Yueyang Tower, add its old system, and engrave Tang Xian's poems on it. It belongs to (zhǔ) to (yú) Write a composition and remember it.
Yu (fú) Baling wins the case in Dongting Lake. Holding the distant mountains, swallowing the Yangtze River and making endless soup (shāng); It's sunny in the morning and cloudy at night. This is the grand view of Yueyang Tower. What the predecessors said was to come prepared (yǐ). But the northern martial arts, the Antarctic Xiaoxiang and the poets who moved abroad will all be here, and they will look at things very well.
(yín) Heavy rain (fēi), the moon does not open, the evil wind howls (háo), and the turbid waves are emptied; Sun stars are hidden (Yao) and mountains are hidden (Qi á n); If business travel is not good, it will be ruined. Twilight is boundless, tigers roar and apes crow. When you go to the temple building, you are homesick, sad, sad and sad.
If it is spring, the waves are quiet, the sky is up and down, the sky is clear (qǐng), Ji Xiang, Sha Ou, and you Jinlian; On shore, ZH (ZH ǐ) TΡ ng (Tó ng) is blue and green (qóng). Or the long smoke is exhausted, the bright moon is thousands of miles away, the light is shining, the static shadow is sinking, and the fishing songs are answered. How happy I am! When you arrive at Dunsi Building, you will feel relaxed and happy, forget the humiliation, and leave the wine in the wind, which will make you feel happy.
Oh, honey! Is it to taste the heart of the ancient benevolent, or to do something different? Don't be happy with things, don't be sad with yourself; If you live high in the temple, you will worry about the people, and if you live far in the rivers and lakes, you will worry about the king. It's worrying about going in and going out. But when will it be fun (yé)? It must be said that "worry about the world first, and then enjoy the world." Hey! Wes, who are we going home with?
September 15th, six years.
One is about rainy days and bad moods-a; The other one is about having a good mood on a sunny day-B, is this symmetrical? Well, in order to further enhance our perceptual knowledge, let's look at Lu Xun's "San Tan Yin Yue":
1, needless to say, green vegetable fields, smooth stone wells, tall Gleditsia sinensis trees and purple mulberries; Needless to say, cicadas are singing in the leaves, fat wasps are squatting on cauliflower, and the swift call to the son of heaven (lark) suddenly rushes to the sky from the grass.
2, just around the short mud wall, there is unlimited interest. Oil flies sing here and crickets play the piano here. Turning over broken bricks, sometimes I meet centipedes; There is also Mylabris. If you press your finger on its spine, it will smack and spray a puff of smoke from behind. The vines of Polygonum multiflorum Thunb and Manglietia are intertwined, Manglietia has the fruit of Lotus House, and Polygonum multiflorum Thunb has swollen roots. Some people say that the roots of Polygonum multiflorum Thunb. are human-shaped, and they can become immortals after eating, so I often pull them up, and I have participated in the continuous pulling up, which has broken the mud wall, but I have never seen roots like people.
3, if you are not afraid of thorns, you can also pick raspberries, like small coral beads, which are sour and sweet, and the color and taste are far better than mulberry.
Do you see symmetrical words, symmetrical sentences and symmetrical squares? Because this is a complete natural paragraph, we regard several relatively independent sentences in a natural paragraph as "blocks". At this point, have you suddenly realized?
Is it clearer to see this mind map? Make a simple analysis first. Let's look at the first block, needless to say … needless to say … this is the first symmetrical block; Two "needless to say", formed two small pieces. The first sentence: Vegetable field, Sedum, Gleditsia sinensis and Mulberry are four kinds of plants-are they symmetrical? The second sentence: cicada, wasp and son of heaven are three bugs-are they symmetrical? Let's look at the second block again. The second piece is about the area around the root of the mud wall. This area is divided into two small pieces. The first piece: oil flies, crickets, centipedes, Mylabris, four kinds of insects-are they symmetrical? The second piece: Polygonum multiflorum Thunb and Manglietia, two plants-are they symmetrical? Let's look at these three blocks as a whole. As we said just now, if we can't understand them, we should regard a block or a paragraph as a story or a word. Then, let's simplify it now: the first natural section is called "Rough Grass Garden", the second natural section is called "Fine Grass Garden" and the third natural section is called "Short Grass Garden". Is the writing thick, thin and micro symmetrical? So we say, look at the structure not from the number of words, not from the superficial phenomenon, but from the internal essence.
When we usually write one thing, don't we also "rough write", "fine write" and "skim"? But "rough writing" is a rough observation; "Fine writing" means careful observation; "Skimming" is a small supplement, an observation after observation, and a glimpse after looking back. Is this full? Imagine what it would be like if one of them was omitted. Similarly, when we look at a person, do we always look at a person's big appearance first, and then look at a person's face to evaluate whether this person is handsome or beautiful? Finally, I will pay attention to some small details, such as whether the lipstick is not well painted, whether the tie is not properly tied, and whether the buttons or zippers under men's pants are not pulled correctly. Did you smile knowingly when you saw this? If you smile, it means that we have a tacit understanding, and you will understand what we are talking about today.