On this day, Master Tianwang was in a good mood. Look! Looking up, the weather is particularly sunny. Looking down, the grass jumped out of the ground. We hummed a little song, walked briskly, felt comfortable, smiled and walked on the way to Xiaoyu's house, holding a gift-"Grenade" in our hands. I secretly chuckled: Xiao Yu (a classmate of mine, the birthday girl today) is ready to catch the bomb!
When I arrived at Xiaoyu's hometown, I saw a fierce German shepherd as soon as I entered the door. The German shepherd dog stared at us with its cruel eyes. Although he was locked in a cage, he still scared the daylights out of us. He Qi (classmate) dared not look, and fled back to his room like a ghost. Although I was uneasy, I took courage and took a tentative step forward, but at this point, the German shepherd barked desperately, and I was so scared that I ran away. I finally got up the courage and ran to Xiaoyu's small room in his hometown like crazy. ...
Xiaoyu's hometown is like a big farm, with chickens, ducks, dogs and cats. We have everything, and we are overwhelmed. Chicken-cute kitten-funny, puppy-woof, duckling-quack. We smiled with our bellies in our arms. ...
Time flies, and my stomach cries mercilessly, as if to remind us that it's time to eat. We took a bus to the door of the hotel and looked up. "Wow!" Magnificent and magnificent, let us admire!
We went straight in and saw an old pavilion with a paper lamp hanging on it. Sitting in the pavilion, looking at the artificial stream below and the fake forest above, my heart is warm. ......
In that comfortable situation, we finished a delicious meal. Can't wait to go to Xiaoyu's new home.
"Wow, it's so big!" On entering the door, everyone said in unison that after visiting the house, everyone scrambled to eat the cake, and the lights gradually went out, as if telling the New Year wishes in bright candlelight. ......
After only a few minutes, we peeled off the skin of this delicious cake, and then, with the laughter from the game room, we spent this sweet night by candlelight. ......
Xiaoyu, happy birthday to you, piggy. When can I see your bright smile again?
I waited for 365 days from beginning to end for the birthday composition, just to wait for this annual big day, which is enough to show that this day is extraordinary.
When I was a child, there was still a month before my birthday, but every day I talked about how many days before I could eat delicious birthday cakes and open birthday presents.
When the colorful candles light up slowly, the small hands will hold tightly. After making a sweet and unknown wish, all innocence and happiness will bloom in an instant.
What a beautiful day
The beginning and end of the birthday composition are expected to be 365 days. This annual big day has come, which is enough to show that this day is extraordinary.
When I was a child, there was still a month before my birthday, but every day I talked about how many days before I could eat delicious birthday cakes and open birthday presents.
When the colorful candles light up slowly, the small hands will hold tightly. After making a sweet and unknown wish, all innocence and happiness will bloom in an instant.
What a beautiful day ...
I am ten years old.
Every birthday is a beautiful memory as long as I can remember.
Mom and dad always do their best for my birthday.
Today is my mother's birthday. I want to give her a birthday present.
In the morning, I asked my father to buy a cake and my mother was shopping.
In the evening, we held a birthday party for our mother.
Dad opened the lid of the birthday cake, and the four bright red characters "Happy Birthday" made people warm.
I carefully inserted two digital candles into the cake. Dad turned off the light first, then picked up a lighter to light the candle.
In the room, it suddenly lit up, and the candlelight swayed, pulling our figure long ... Mom stood up happily and blew it gently, and the candle went out.
We all clapped our hands to congratulate. Then I sang Happy Birthday.
My mother cut me a big cake and said, "Study hard, son."
""I'll be obedient and I'll study hard.
"I bother to nod.
After dinner, I said to my mother, "Mom, you have worked hard at ordinary times. I'll help you do things today. "
"So, I began to clean the table.
Dad said, "This is the best birthday present my son gave his mother."
"My mother looked at me with a smile and said," Today's birthday is my most unforgettable birthday.
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My birthday composition has a good ending. Today is 65438+1 October1,the first day of the new year. On this day, there are two happy events in our family, one is Chinese New Year, and the other is Grandpa's birthday. We came to grandpa's house excitedly.
As soon as I arrived, I rushed out of the car and ran upstairs. On the stairs, I kept shouting, "Grandpa, Grandma!" " "However, because grandpa is a little old, I can't hear you clearly. I have to call grandpa twice. My grandparents were happy from ear to ear. For them, the happiest thing is to see their grandchildren and children visit them.
My grandmother held me in her arms when I went upstairs. I didn't know how lonely my grandparents are these days until I saw them. When I saw it, my heart ached. My grandmother saw the gift in my hand and asked me what it was. I just smiled and said, "Hehe, it's a secret.
"This let grandma heart more than a question mark. She wanted to know what it was, so she chased me. I can't stand her questioning, so I have to tell her a little clue: "To tell you the truth, this is a gift for grandpa.
""a gift? " "Yes.
"Grandma smiled happily:" It turned out to be a gift. Grandpa will always laugh when he sees it, haha.
"I think so too. Grandpa, a person who loves to laugh, can you not laugh when you see the gift?
Expand the end of all the first words, then the beginning.
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells".
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think twice.
"Like the beginning, the end is also very important.
It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending.
People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.
Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily.
That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized.
Empty slogans.
Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.
3 sloppily.
The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions.
1, natural beam.
No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".
It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination.
The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce, so we should not pay too much attention to "form" and "law".
As long as you are rich, you can play freely and you can fully express your feelings. However, paying attention to "nature" does not mean being arbitrary and hasty, but ending the overall situation along the natural trend of literary development.
There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end.
The end should echo the beginning, write a sentence that echoes the beginning, and don't simply repeat it. This way of ending is a common way of ending all kinds of articles.
This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail.
For example, A Precious Shirt says, "In my house, there is a white shirt, which is really cool.
Finally, I wrote: "I have carefully collected this precious shirt for four years, and I have never been willing to wear it once."
Praise the end of the poplar and the beginning echoed at a distance: "I want to praise the poplar loudly!" " 3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style.
This way of ending is to express the theme clearly at the end of the article, relying on the content of the full text and using concise language, or to explain the writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this way of ending is also called "making the finishing point".
For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it said, "Changing nationality does not mean changing national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are.
At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties.
-Remember the spinning wheel.
"4. Famous aphorisms.
Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life.
It often appears at the end of essays, narratives and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".
At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere.
"5, lyrical discussion.
Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
This way of ending is mainly used in narrative, explanatory and argumentative writing.
There are various forms of the ending of lyric discussion, so the ending is more free. A good lyric discussion ending will inevitably bring true feelings and give readers a sense of reality and sufficiency.
For example, at the end of "Flower Market", it says, "She stands smiling among flowers, like a flower, like a graceful and elegant orchid.
"Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Missing Mother, which is a typical lyric ending.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable.
The end of a composition is the same as the beginning, although it is different, it also has its own rules to follow.
The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the students' solid training at ordinary times, in the candidates' improvisation and in the candidates' "extra-poetic merits".
Please look at the end of a candidate's composition: If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it. Why can't we take actions to protect green and the environment, so that we can always have green?
At that time, green would sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If life is no longer green") Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then launches a topic around "If life is no longer green". The article starts with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow"
Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which triggered thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination.
Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma.
If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on.
Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect.
In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training The ancients said, "A good end comes to a good end. ...
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