1. Write an essay to learn from it
The weather is really like a child’s face, it changes at will, which is really incomprehensible. We have been in hot weather these days. Suddenly, it rained. Suddenly, I felt much cooler. Maybe it was an unexpected gift from God.
I like rain, because the air after the rain is very fresh, and the rain is also fertilizer for the grass!
The rain silently cleans the earth's coat, and the rain silently cleans the willow tree's beautiful hair.
The rain slowly moistens the earth and the whole world, making this wonderful world more beautiful and charming.
Sitting on a chair by the window, watching the rain falling and listening to the crackling sound of the rain hitting the ground, I feel that it is a beautiful piece of music it has given to the world. It makes the world pure and clear. The flowers are immersed in the gentleness of the rain, and it seems that every drop of water falling on the flowers carries a hint of fragrance and a hint of coolness. The grass seems to be playing with the rain, like a beautiful girl, listening to the rhythm of the rain accompanying her, she can't help but dance. Make the whole world more alive.
Suddenly, it rained heavily, and pedestrians were running on the road holding colorful umbrellas, swaying like little mushrooms that had just sucked nutrients. Heavy raindrops fell down like broken pearl necklaces. The water drops hit the soil, and a refreshing fragrance floats, giving people a refreshing feeling.
Rain is weak, the lightest thing in the world, and cannot knock the heavy reinforced concrete building. The tile house is different. Raindrops tinkling on it, making a pleasant sound immediately. People in the hut have the blessing of being close to nature in the rain. When the rain falls rapidly, the sound becomes louder and louder. As the rain slows down, the sounds also weaken, flowing gently into your heart. They play dutifully, and endless affection fills the hearts of those who listen to the rain.
People like to sit quietly and listen to the rain when their hearts are filled with nostalgia and sighs. The old man with lofty ideals has the ambition of "lying down at night listening to the wind and rain, and the iron horse glaciers coming to sleep"; the passionate poet has the reverie of "listening to the spring rain in the small building all night, selling apricot blossoms in the deep alley in the Ming Dynasty". Rain has become a messenger for people to modify their feelings and express their wishes.
There is a poem: "The young man is listening to the rain song upstairs, and the tent is dark with red candles. The mature man is listening to the rain in the boat, the river is wide and the clouds are low, and the broken geese are calling the west wind." Different life circumstances lead to different feelings about listening to the rain. However, listening to the rain is all about listening to the conversation of souls, listening to the rush of true love, and listening to the gurgling flow of time. What the sound of rain hits, apart from the echoes of the years, is also the unbearable regrets of the past and the melancholy that cannot be expressed. It seems that only in the gentle sound of rain on this tiled house can the soul breathe and life can continue.
The sound of rain is still ringing, like my real heartbeat... 2. An 800-word essay on the topic of reference
There will be surprising ideas every time, and there will be different things every day. I am good at learning from other people's ideas, always thinking that this can make me better.
In life, I am always very concerned about external affairs, and I feel that other people's words and deeds have a great relationship with me. , whenever I learn about other people's ways of handling interpersonal relationships, I will study hard and practice it, and sometimes write it down in my notebook to remind me all the time. I will clearly remember other people's seemingly wrong words. So, whenever ***When something happens, a message will pop up in my head: This is wrong, you can’t do it. I will stop my behavior immediately.
When I realize that I have done something wrong, I would think: there is nothing much that can be done to improve if you know your mistakes. I quickly admitted my mistakes instead of "unyielding to death". My parents and teachers said that I was a well-behaved and sensible child, but I felt that I just learned from others. Just thoughts.
In terms of study, I often learn from the practices of my predecessors, so I bought a lot of notebooks at home. Why? Of course, it is for taking notes. I often hear people say: "You need to preview before class, take notes in class, and sort out the notes after class." Therefore, one or two notebooks are needed for one subject alone, from morning to night. , I buried my head in organizing my notes every day, but when I got to the exam zone, my study not only failed to improve, but actually regressed. I couldn’t figure it out, so I asked around and went online to find another good way to study. I was ecstatic to try it out. , but it always ends in failure. I think: Is it useless for learning?
In a political class a few days ago, I realized that it is a good thing to learn from others, but you cannot learn from everything, otherwise you will lose your own characteristics and potential.
In the process of learning from others, you need to add your own thoughts, because everyone's own cultivation is different, and other people's successful methods may not work for you. We should choose our own path based on our own different characteristics.
You must always remember that borrowing is just a tool for borrowing other people's things to dig your own path. This road to success still needs to be walked and completed by yourself. 3. Writing essays in the third grade of elementary school can learn from those excellent people Composition?
Of course, you can learn from it, but you must not rely too much on it, because the requirements for composition in the third grade of primary school are not particularly high. It mainly tests children’s basic expression ability, and in excellent compositions, except for events and other novel things, In addition, many of them are based on better writing skills and better use of rhetorical techniques, but these cannot be done by learning from others. When my son was in third grade, he was sent to Zhongyuan Road for composition classes because he was not good at composition. The reason why I went there is that it is not far from my home, and also because his family is quite strong in Chinese. According to my observation, during class, the teacher pays great attention to the accumulation of students' materials and the expansion of extracurricular reading. How to use it in situations, students You can naturally write excellent compositions, lz this is the truth~. 4. Reprint: How to write a good composition. You can learn from it
1. Improve the ability to understand things and express things.
Mr. Ye Shengtao, a famous educator in my country, pointed out: "Writing anything depends on knowledge and experience. Only with what kind of knowledge and experience can you write what kind of things. On the contrary, without the ability to express knowledge, Nor can I write a good composition."
2. Take the cognitive structure as the core of composition, including learning knowledge, observation and accumulation, memory storage, training thinking, enriching imagination, cultivating emotions, and exercising will; from speaking to writing, revising carefully, reading more and diligently Write. 3. Establish a concept of great composition, and organically combine listening, speaking, reading and writing. First, we must pay attention to reviewing the topic; second, we must clarify the purpose of writing and have a new idea; third, we must have a basis for selecting materials; fourth, we must pay attention to writing skills and arrange the structure of the chapter; Fifth, we must pay attention to the paragraphing of the article, and list subtitles and composition outlines in advance; sixth, we must pay attention to the writing method of the article and use it according to the context; seventh, we must use language wisely and use our thoughts to mobilize the language.
Learn five ways to formulate ideas: praise people with things, express your feelings directly, use things to describe things, touch scenes to evoke feelings, and use things to express your ambitions. 4. Grade-by-grade breakdown of the composition goals: first-grade words, second-grade sentences, third-grade fragments, fourth-grade chapters, fifth-grade comprehensive, and sixth-grade improvement.
5. Implementation of five trainings Based on the principle that understanding is the core of composition, and around this core of developing students' psychological mechanisms, five trainings were carried out in a down-to-earth manner: (1) Word training. Learn to master a large number of words.
Master the golden key to using words: connect with things you are familiar with; connect with the reality of your own life; connect with the language and word knowledge you have learned. Use the method of "Shi Yin Shuo" to combine word learning with speaking training.
, adjust the word order; 8. Use words that touch the scene; 9. Classify words; 10. Connect words to form sentences. It enriches the content of speaking training, enables you to accumulate a large number of words that you can speak and use, and lays a solid foundation for writing essays.
(2) Sentence training. As long as it is a sentence, it includes two aspects: one is the person, thing, object, and scene it talks about, and the other is the purpose.
However, when some teachers guide students to say a sentence, they do not use pictures and things to seriously teach students how to observe, understand, analyze, and express. They just take out a picture or thing for students to say. When writing a sentence, students do not know why they should write a sentence, how to say a sentence, and what type of sentence to write, resulting in a monotonous, dull, and inactive tone in the composition. Instead, students can be asked to use pictures, look at objects, have conversations, and practice speaking and writing a sentence with four complete elements of time, place, person, and event, four sentence patterns, and nine sentence patterns.
Only then will students be able to use different sentence patterns and patterns in their compositions to express different thoughts, feelings, attitudes, and purposes. (3) Section training.
Combined with eight types of paragraphs: development of things as sequence, time sequence as sequence, spatial transformation as sequence, summary and sub-description structure paragraph, cause and effect paragraph, turning paragraph, progressive paragraph, Parallel sections. In this way, we can understand the occurrence and development laws of objective things.
No matter which paragraph type is used, it all records the development of the narrative and people's understanding of things, that is, the content and center of the paragraph. Like a sentence, it is also a description of people, things, objects, and scenery, and it also expresses a meaning.
It’s just to make a sentence clearer and more profound. (4) Chapter training.
Articles are composed of paragraphs. Through the knowledge and methods of reviewing topics, conception, material selection, article planning, formula and terminology, through the four expression methods of narration, description, lyricism and argumentation, the beginning and end of articles, transition and echo methods, and the knowledge and methods of various article genres .
Learn to write narratives and practical essays that have a clear focus, complete meaning, and appropriate detail. (5) Live on-site training.
Use real-life training to better understand writing essays "from the content point of view". Through various composition teaching activities, such as "Determining the Center Seminar", "Material Selection Seminar", "Composition Consultation Meeting", "Xiao Zhuge Question Review Meeting", and "Wonderful Word Competition", we can learn composition knowledge vividly and concretely from the activities and writing methods.
In addition, you can also carry out various activities inside and outside the school, such as rope skipping, tug-of-war, shuttlecock kicking, ball games, and endorsement competitions, so as to learn how to write competition essays; carry out voluntary labor inside and outside the school, and learn how to write about labor scenes. ; Hold poetry recitations and lectures, and learn how to write about meeting scenes and experiences at meetings; learn how to write visit notes and travel notes by visiting places of interest and historical sites. Learn how to observe and pay attention to the things and events around you. "Paying attention to everything is knowledge, and mastering human feelings is writing."
Through on-site life composition, we further realize that life is fertile ground for composition. In this way, you can learn to tell things, express true feelings, cultivate the sentiments of truth, kindness and beauty, and cultivate a good writing style.
Implement "mutual evaluation and mutual modification" to cultivate students' independent thinking and creativity. After the students have finished writing their essays, they are organized to be reviewed in the group.
First learn the advantages of other people's compositions, and then use a critical eye to point out the shortcomings in each other's compositions and point out suggestions for improvement. Re-write on this basis, so that students can gain something every time they write an article.
Write your own honest words "Write your own honest words" is what the old educator Mr. Ye Shengtao said. Aiming to create a colorful world of "independent" composition.
The so-called "autonomy" means not being restricted by rules and regulations, allowing students to think freely and write freely. "Autonomous" composition means "speaking from the heart", acting spontaneously, showing one's own style and reflecting one's distinctive personality. 5. Write an essay based on the lessons learned from life.
Life is like writing. Articles about the past are nothing more than "phoenix head, pig belly, and leopard tail".
The same is true in life, everything is as clear as words. Start bright and exciting.
Life begins when you are born. But human life is always facing a beginning.
When the wood dies, you will see the green buds, that is the beginning; when the flowers fall, you will see the fruit germ, that is the beginning; when the cocoon breaks, , you will see the gorgeous dancing posture of the butterfly, that is the beginning; when the star falls, you will see the burning hope, that is the beginning. The beginning of life is to raise one's head high from the loss and confidently write a wonderful moment in the book of life again; the beginning of life is to get up from the place where one fell and firmly take a flying step on the road of life again.
The process should be rich and fulfilling. Life continues through the repeated division of cells, but life is by no means a simple mechanical repetition.
You will see the joys and sorrows, which are the words in the text of your life; you will see the ebb and flow of clouds and sunshine, which are the punctuation points of the text of your life. Your steps that are neither hasty nor wasted will gradually enrich and enrich the text of your life at your own pace.
The scenery of life that you have seen will overflow in the writing of your life. The ending should be loud and powerful.
Every feast has an end, every article has an ending, and every life will come to an end. In the face of this established fact, there is no need to escape or resist.
We can feel love and forgiveness in the residual heat of the sunset. At the end of his life, Mr. Ba Jin sounded a loud and powerful bell for us with his words.
Perhaps, we will not be able to be that great because of our own limitations, but this does not prevent us from using our lifelong experience and understanding to write a resounding and powerful ending in the text of life. Life is like a text.
In our longing and anticipation, the crest of the crest is already brilliant and beautiful; when we are not paying attention, the pig belly is already rich and substantial; when we are recalling it with nostalgia, the leopard's tail is already loud and powerful. So, let us pick up the pen of choice and write a chapter of life without regrets. 6. Learn from several compositions
You can also submit your article on Xiaohe Composition Network. One day, I was staying quietly at home and was very bored, so I went to the room to find something to play with to relieve my boredom. .
I suddenly saw a piece of clothing that my mother hung on the back of the door, which reminded me of my mother who had been on a business trip for a week. Xiaohe Composition Network My mother is short in stature and has an oval face that is white and rosy, like a peach.
She has long, shiny black hair, hanging down like a large black waterfall. A pair of watery eyes had long lost their luster.
The originally small and exquisite body turned into a fat bear. He suddenly looked ten years older.
Xiaohe Composition Network My mother cooks, sweeps and mops the floor, sends me to and from school every day, she is almost omnipotent. In the spring, my mother taught me how to fly a kite in the park. I don’t know how many times she taught me to fly a kite. I learned it for almost a month.
In the summer, I often couldn't sleep when I told stories under the shade of the big banyan tree every day. My mother told them one after another without fear of getting tired, but I felt that my mother's stories were too few. In autumn, my mother took me to play in the orchard.
In winter, I would rather have my hands turn red from the cold than let the cold wind blow into my body. My mother paid a lot for me, a lot.
Xiaohe Composition Network, you can also contribute. When I was three years old, I started going to kindergarten. On the first day of school, my mother sent me to school.
When we reached the intersection, my mother began to give her first warning. She held my hand and stroked my head, very solemnly and solemnly, "Child, please remember to be careful when crossing the road. !" I agreed to my mother's request with a smile on my face. Now, I am in the first grade of elementary school, but every day when I go to school and come to that intersection, my mother always gives me patient instructions.
I showed a very impatient attitude: "Mom, please stop talking, I can even recite your sentence! Are you annoyed?" Mom listened to my words. , a little surprised. In the next few days, my mother still insisted on giving hard instructions every day when I went to school.
One day, the anger in my heart suddenly gathered together and burned, and I finally couldn't help it anymore! When my mother warned her earnestly, I immediately became furious, my eyebrows became an inverted figure, and my face turned pale and white, as if I had applied white powder on it. I shook my mother's hand away hard, "You are so annoying. How many times have you said this! Even if you don’t bother me, I’ll be bothered too!” My mother was startled and looked at me with a surprised and confused look, as if I was a stranger. From now on, my mother won’t either. Give it to me again. One day, during the last class in the afternoon, I didn’t hear a word the teacher said.
Because today's "Windmill" was about to start at 5 o'clock, I looked around, and finally waited until school was over. Before the teacher finished saying "get out of class is over," I was already like a Rushing towards home like a rocket. When we reached the intersection, I had already forgotten my mother’s instructions and rushed to the other side desperately.
Just as I stretched out one foot, suddenly, I heard an anxious shout: "Be careful when crossing the road!" As soon as I heard it, I quickly retracted that foot. Only a second or two later, a big red Ferrari was running towards me at a speed of 80 kilometers per hour, and passed me with a "shu" sound.
"It's so dangerous!" I was secretly happy. I thought about it carefully and realized that the voice was my mother! I saw an anxious and familiar face opposite, ah! It's mom! When my mother saw me, her anxious heart slowly relaxed.
The invisible wind also made me feel shivering, not only with lingering fears. ah! I finally got it.
In fact, every day before school is over, my mother secretly follows me on the other side, guarding me silently every day, and I never feel relieved. Mom, how great and selfless your love for me is! Mom, when you get off work, I would like to turn into a basin of warm water to help you soak your feet and wash away the fatigue on your body.
Mom, in the hot summer, I would like to turn into a glass of cool ice water to make you feel cool; in the cold winter, I would like to turn into a stove so that your red hands will no longer be frozen. . Mom, I am willing to work tirelessly and travel across mountains and rivers to Changbai Mountain to pick that ten thousand-year-old ginseng for you to eat, so that you can live a long and healthy life! I love you mom.