How can I write a good description of scenery?

Landscape description

Scenery is often described in composition. What is scenery description? The description of scenery and surrounding furnishings is called scenery description. Generally speaking, there are two forms to describe the scenery. One is that the whole article mainly describes scenery, such as Guilin landscape. One is to insert scenery descriptions in writing people, taking notes and discussing, such as In the Rain.

How can I write a good description of scenery? The most important thing to describe a scene is to grasp its characteristics. The scenery in the world is varied and has its own characteristics. For example, flowers, some colorful, some fragrant; For example, water, some surging, some level as a mirror. How can I write the characteristics of the scenery? The key is to be good at observing the colorful world. We are familiar with Wang Mian's Study of Painting, and it is through careful observation and profound experience that we can draw such a vivid lotus flower. Imagine that if a person has never seen the sea, it is impossible for him to write that the blue waves of the sea are constantly rolling and changing, so observation is the premise of describing the scenery.

What aspects should we pay attention to when observing the scenery? First of all, we should observe the whole process of scenery change. From beginning to end, all changes should be carefully observed. For example, trees have their growth laws all year round, when new buds sprout, when they flourish and when their trunks are bare; For example, plants have different characteristics in their germination, flowering and fruiting stages. If you carefully observe the whole process, it is easy to grasp the characteristics and describe them. Everything in the world has its own characteristics, and it is these characteristics that determine the difference between things. Without these features, we can't describe a specific scene realistically. The legendary Song Dynasty painter Wen attentively observed the bamboo in the scorching sun and the bamboo forest after the downpour, so that the whole body and mind melted into the ocean of bamboo, and truly achieved the goal of "having bamboo in mind", thus being able to draw the most outstanding and distinctive bamboo.

Secondly, we should be good at capturing the color and posture of the scene. The colors of nature are rich and colorful, and everything in nature has its own form. When observing, you should be good at capturing the color and posture of the scene. For example, in the lesson "Huoshaoyun", the author captured the rich colors and instantaneous changes of Huoshaoyun in his mind during the whole process of careful observation, and then wrote such an unpredictable and magnificent cloud.

Only on the basis of grasping the characteristics of the scenery and careful observation can we have a vivid description. When describing the scenery, we should use the skills of film photographers to arrange the description order reasonably. Like the landscape writing articles we usually see, we should have a sequence, a long-term view, a close-up view, a distinction between primary and secondary, and a distinction between upper and lower. Always write first and then write separately. Write static first, then dynamic, or a combination of static and dynamic; Write the shape first, then the color, sound and smell ... In short, observe carefully and describe it in a certain order and angle.

It is not enough to do the above, and lyricism is often indispensable in the description of scenery. Any scenery writing article is not just about scenery writing, and the scenery described must always be endowed with thoughts and feelings. A beautiful article can better express the center of the article and accurately express the author's feelings only if it permeates the author's true feelings. In addition, when describing, it is necessary to blend the scenes, the scenes are affectionate, and the artistic conception is beautiful. The so-called "touching the scene" should try to use metaphors and personification in rhetoric, so that the scenery depicted has human characteristics and related things. At the same time, lyricism and scenery description should be infiltrated and integrated, and the combination of realism and imagination should be paid attention to in description. Only in this way can we increase the appeal of the article and arouse readers' * * *.

On scenery description

The role of description is mainly to contrast and render the atmosphere, and also to provide an activity environment for the characters in the article.

Let's look at some wonderful scenery descriptions.

At this time, a magical picture flashed through my mind: a golden full moon hung in the deep blue sky, and endless green watermelons were planted on the sand by the sea. Meanwhile, a boy of eleven or twelve, wearing a silver ring around his neck and holding a steel fork, tried his best to stab a horse, but the man twisted and ran away from his crotch.

This picture shows a young man stabbing a melon on a moonlit night. Through the description of "deep blue sky", "golden full moon" and "endless green watermelon", a handsome and lively teenager leaps over the earth.

In the boundless darkness, clusters of bonfires are burning. Soldiers who have been rolling in the mud for several days in the wind and rain are talking and laughing around this raging wildfire. A layer of fog rises from wet clothes, and wild vegetables in foreign porcelain bowls are ringing. ...

This description of the environment highlights the happy mood of the Red Army soldiers after the bonfire party, and shows that the unknown soldiers played a great role with seven matches saved by their lives, bringing warmth and strength to the troops and comrades, thus praising the revolutionary quality of the unknown soldiers and highlighting the central significance of the whole article.

The twinkling stars in the sky are like jewels on a black curtain. They are so close to us! Black mountain peaks stand in front of us like giants. The surrounding mountains surround the valley like a well. There are several fires up and down, and comrades who are awake from the cold are whispering around the fire. In addition, it is silence. My ears are full of unpredictable sounds, some are far away and very close, and some are extremely heavy and thin, like spring silkworms chewing mulberry leaves, like wild horses galloping on the plains, like mountain springs whimpering, like rough waves.

Write what you see first, and compare all three kinds of scenery. Stars are compared to "gems decorated with black curtains", peaks are compared to "giants standing in front of them" and valleys are compared to "a well".

Then write and listen, the sound is difficult to write, and the metaphor is very intuitive: "Like spring silkworms chewing mulberry leaves, like wild horses galloping across the plain, like mountain springs whimpering, like rough waves."

Strange mountain scenery, how beautiful! what is the purpose? In order to set off the optimism of the Red Army soldiers.

The following is a description of the environment in a classmate's Remember a Disaster Relief Activity.

On Sunday morning, I opened the door after getting up and saw that the sun had not yet come out. After a while, a piece of red appeared in the east, and gradually a little red appeared, and then it became bigger and bigger, and the red was very big, and the earth was completely bright. At noon, the clouds became thicker and the weather became sultry. In the afternoon, suddenly thunder rumbled, and lightning flashed across the sky from time to time, and soon it rained heavily. It rained for about three hours. The rain stopped, the weather was much cooler, and the river surged.

An urgent notice came from the radio: the Sanliwan dam burst and the flood rolled. ...

In this section of landscape writing, there are some places where landscape writing is purely for landscape writing. The scenery should have a clear purpose, one is to contrast and render the atmosphere, so that the characters in a specific environment, the image is more vivid. The second is to pave the way for the following and lead to the following things. So the scenery that has nothing to do with the purpose must be cut off.

The following is a description of the modification of the scenery.

The rainstorm lasted for more than two weeks. Ghost weather, at noon, the clouds gradually thicken and the weather becomes more sultry. In the afternoon, suddenly thunder rumbled, lightning flashed across the sky from time to time, and soon it rained heavily. The river has risen.

An urgent notice came from the radio: the Sanliwan dam burst and the flood rolled. ...

How to write a good landscape

Students often describe the scenery in practice, and some fragments practice writing the scenery; Travel notes such as spring outing and autumn outing should write scenery; Some proposition exercises also require description of scenery. However, some students often write that spring is "spring is beautiful, flowers are blooming, birds are singing and flowers are fragrant" when they encounter scenery descriptions in their usual practice. When it comes to flowers, they always "open their smiles, and when the wind blows, they are like dancing butterflies, emitting bursts of fragrance". Still empty talk, what "how beautiful the scenery here is!" "The beautiful scenery in front of us is so charming!" In fact, in March in the north, there is still no green, some flowers are not fragrant, and some don't know how beautiful and charming the scenery is. So, how to write a good landscape? I think the most important thing is to grasp the characteristics of the scenery and write it out. Here I want to give some targeted guidance in this regard. Make students master the characteristics of scenery and write the basic methods of scenery.

First of all, learn several methods to grasp the characteristics of scenery.

Students, different places have different characteristics, and different environments have different characteristics. Therefore, it is necessary to observe the scenery carefully, grasp the characteristics, and write specifically, so that people feel immersive. Please look at the following clip and think about how the author grasps the characteristics of the landscape. 1. Show me "At noon in summer, white clouds are floating in the blue sky of Wan Li. Some of these white clouds are connected together, like silver waves rolling in the ocean, like mountains and mountains. Sometimes there are clouds of different sizes and shapes floating on a large silver-gray cloud, just like coral flowers blooming on an island reef. " The author of this clip describes the shape and size of white clouds. Please read the following clip again to see how these authors grasp the characteristics of the landscape. (1) "The flaming clouds in this place vary greatly, from red to gold, from purple to yellow, from gray to lily. Grape ash, pear yellow, eggplant purple, these colors are all in the sky, and some can't be said or seen. " The author of this clip captures the colorful features of luminous clouds and describes them, thus embodying the beauty of luminous clouds. (2) "In the distance, several oak trees did not move, and herds of antelopes and ostriches walked around. A winding river flows slowly southeast, and clusters of beautiful flowers are blooming on the shore. " The author of this clip captures the number of oak trees, antelopes, ostriches, rivers and flowers to describe. At night, frogs croak and woodpeckers peck at tree trunks. Beetles buzz. Yanko lay by the river and listened quietly. "The author of this clip captured and described the sounds made by frogs, woodpeckers and beetles, reflecting the young musician Yanko's love for music. 3. Besides describing the shape, size, color, quantity and sound of the scene, what other aspects can be used to describe the characteristics of the scene? You can also grasp the charm and dynamic changes of the landscape to write. For example, it is the season of lush foliage. This big banyan tree seems to show us its life. There are so many green leaves, one on top of the other, leaving no gaps. Green is shining before our eyes, as if there is a new life trembling on every leaf, this beautiful southern tree! " The author of this description captures the charm of the big banyan tree in its lush branches and leaves, which makes us feel that she is full of vitality. ② Fragments of the "burning cloud" described above. The author has grasped the characteristics of many and rapid color changes in a short time, reflecting the beauty and strangeness of glow clouds. (3) "In the early morning, the river is extraordinarily calm, blue waves are rippling, silver light is flashing, seagulls spread their wings and fly on the river. At this time, I always like to stand on the river bank and look at Wusongkou in the north. The endless river is connected with the water and the sky. As soon as the breeze blows, I take a breath of fresh air and feel relaxed and happy. In the Woods beside the river bank, the clear calls of birds come and go. A group of old people were walking by the river, hitting Tai Ji Chuan ... When the sun shone all over the river, the river began to boil. You see, boats of all sizes only come and go. The motor sound of motorboats, the whistle of big ships and the impact of river waves are intertwined, playing a magnificent symphony. A whistle of "whoops". The 10,000-ton ship is from far to near. Wherever it goes, there are two rows of huge waves in the shape of eight, like two white dragons rolling on both sides. The waves beat against the rocky beach by the river, splashing clusters of white flowers ... In the evening, the sunset reflected the river red. At this time, my friends and I always like to catch crabs on the rocks by the river. You can catch twenty or thirty in one night. At night, the boiling river was calm again. At this time, the 10,000-ton ship docked on the dock was brightly lit, reflecting the stars in the sky and making the river beside the ship red. The gust of river wind dispelled the summer heat. " The author of this clip captured the changes of the river from morning till night and wrote the unique beauty of the river. There is a tunnel between our classroom and playground, and there are two rows of buttonwood trees on both sides of the tunnel. Spring breeze gives it branches and leaves, a little yellow and a piece of green. In summer, a leaf is a green slap, holding a burning sun. A tree is a beautiful sunshade, and the breeze is blowing gently under it. The Indus River is beautiful in autumn. Every day after the Mid-Autumn Festival, there are several autumn rains. Several autumn winds dyed the leaf rust red. At this time, the software center of Blue King Horse Computer Company is high above, the autumn sunshine is faint, and the white trunk and red crown of the phoenix tree are particularly quiet, enchanting, elegant and solemn. Walking in this aisle, immersed in painting, immersed in a comfortable atmosphere. It's a pity that the northwest wind blew away all the leaves overnight. Isn't it a symbol of this golden harvest season? In winter, the thick trunk and bare branches of the phoenix tree stand there tenaciously, fighting the cold and snow. Seeing it, people who shrink their necks and raise their hands will stand up and stare at its figure, and they will feel respected. The author of this clip captures the different characteristics of buttonwood in each season, which reflects the author's love and praise for buttonwood on campus.

Second, summarize several methods to grasp the characteristics of the scenery.

Students, these fragments tell us that to write a good scene, we can describe it by grasping the shape, size, color, quantity, sound, charm and change of the scene. Only in this way can we grasp the characteristics of the scenery and let readers feel immersive. Of course, we should not use the above description method when writing every scene. We should choose the description method according to the characteristics of the scene and develop rich associations when writing. In addition, we should pay attention to describing the scenery layer by layer in a certain order. Some write according to the distance of the scenery; Some write by orientation; Some are written according to the relationship between the whole and the parts, and so on. But you can't write down all the scenery like a list, you should grasp the characteristics and write with emphasis. Finally, I want to say: No matter what scenery you write, you should write your own true feelings.