Composition evaluation model essay 1 1. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible.
This article is based on real life, which is appropriate, innovative, clear, natural, interesting and readable.
3. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.
Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read.
5. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
6. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
7. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.
8. The full text is lively, the language is fresh, and it is always humorous and interesting to read.
9. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and smooth, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
10. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
1 1. The author is ingenious in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
12. There are many excellent sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
13. Enrich the characters' language and actions and set off their ideological quality. The article is reasonable in conception, natural and vivid, compact in structure and outstanding in natural coherence.
14. The language is humorous and interesting, the plot arrangement is tortuous and vivid, and the first and last echoes are clever. Although the length of this article is short, the content is vivid, the specific paragraphs are clear and the language is easy to understand.
15. In this article, a series of verbs representing the actions of characters are used accurately and appropriately.
16. The process of this article is detailed and clear. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description to fully express it.
17. The narrative is clear, the verbs are used correctly, and the metaphor is appropriate and vivid. Give advice and suggestions, and you can get education from it after reading it.
18. Simple and natural childlike innocence is reflected in the article, which makes the article exude a fresh and lively atmosphere.
19. With concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style, this paper expresses sincere admiration for the beautiful mind.
20. The beginning is concise, the natural structure is clear, and the psychological description truly reflects the author's good language control ability.
Composition evaluation Fan Wen 2 Today, our friends from Xiangyang Volunteer Online participated in the activity of "Martyrs Tower Picking up Garbage". I think this activity can not only protect the environment, but also exercise. It not only brings us closer to nature, but also gives us beautiful scenery.
We picked up rubbish on the steps. There is not much rubbish on the steps, only some toilet paper and cigarette butts. At first we felt relaxed, but not far from the top, there was more garbage, especially on both sides of the steps, with many white garbage plastic bags. So, we were divided into two groups, one on the left and the other on the right. With everyone's efforts, we picked up all the plastic bags. One scene touched my heart: a five-or six-year-old girl followed her parents and leaned down from time to time to pick up garbage fragments with her little hands. We all applauded the little girl and paid tribute to her parents, but her parents said that this was what they should do and an interpretation of protecting the environment and caring for their homes. They said they would stick to it and join us when they have time.
We all live under a blue sky and breathe the same air, so every citizen should firmly establish the concept of protecting the ecological environment and earnestly fulfill the responsibility of caring for the environment. Consciously start from me, start from small things, respect nature, conform to nature, enhance environmental awareness and ecological awareness, and develop good living habits. Inspire the whole society's lasting enthusiasm for environmental protection, take action to improve air quality and realize the beautiful Xiangyang with sky blue, green land and clear water. I also hope that more friends can join our Xiangyang volunteers online, so that more care can merge into a love, moisten your heart and my heart, touch you around, repay the gift of nature and work together for our beautiful home.
The teacher commented that this narrative tells the story of our participation in the garbage collection activities of Martyrs Tower, and expresses the enhancement of middle school students' awareness of environmental protection. The article is typical in material selection, concrete in narration, fluent in language, simple in writing style, clear in conclusion and clear in viewpoint.
Composition evaluation model essay 3 1. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
2. The article has clear clues and prominent themes, and the poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
3. Meticulousness and appropriateness are the two characteristics of the coexistence of truth and reality ... the content is richer and more vivid.
4. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.
5. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
6. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
7. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
8. Pay attention to specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is success.
9. The article integrates emotions into the scenery, describes the scenery, expresses emotions, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete.
10. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, smooth, coherent and natural.
1 1. Based on real life, the material selection is appropriate and innovative, the paragraphs are clear, the transition is natural, interesting and readable.
12. The full-text language is fluent and the writing is free and easy, which is a relatively successful work.
13. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate, vivid and emotional, and it is really enjoyable to read.
14. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, and hit the floor's reading makes people excited.
15. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and vivid language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
16. This article describes the events of … in the order of development. The language is fluent and the level is clear, which seems to be enjoyable from beginning to end.
17. The full text has a bright rhythm, fresh language and always full of humor. Reading is interesting.
18. The full-text narrative is concentrated, flourishing, concise and fluent, and sincere and touching.
19. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, which makes people fondle it.
20. The author's conception is ingenious, and he is good at choosing points to spread the ups and downs of his writing, which is intriguing.
Model essay 4 1 for composition evaluation. It is fresh, lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have vitality.
2. The article will be presented to readers with rich imagination and colorful language.
3. The article is concise and clear, and the language is plain and simple.
4. Careful observation, rich imagination and vivid use of personification metaphor have aroused readers' interest.
5. It is very distinctive to borrow scenery to express feelings and hold things.
6. The article is based on folklore, reasonably imagined and vividly described, and deduces a wonderful fairy tale, which is interesting to read.
7. Clever use of foreshadowing is a major feature of the article. The first paragraph of the article laid an excellent foundation for the development of the whole story. This idea is very clever and can be used for reference.
8. The design of the work is ingenious and concise. Imagine bold and creative articles, novel and strange, which are very attractive to read.
9. imaginative and innovative. At the beginning, introduce yourself into the following article. The language is concise and humorous.
10. The article is not long, but the process is clearly described and the activities of the characters are concrete, real and interesting. The full text is compact and complete, and the writing is smooth.
1 1. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is smooth and lively.
12. You are very good at grasping the characteristics of things, describing them in detail, and showing the emotional infiltration between writing and writing.
13. The use of accurate and rigorous words, plain and natural language, personification and other rhetorical devices makes the article even more icing on the cake.
14. The main feature of this composition is to describe specific details, describe vividly, and use rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to express love for it.
15. The language is concise, the concept is clear, and the writing level is clear.
16. It is really commendable to write the inner activities of the characters very vividly and leave a deep impression on people.
17. The reference center at the beginning and end of the article is clear and complete.
18. The article is well-founded and persuasive, highlighting the transition of characters' personality and context, natural coherence, taking care of the ending and highlighting the central idea.
19. The author is innovative in observing and describing the vivid expression of delicate language in detail.
20. The full-text language is concise and natural. The article is well-structured and echoes from beginning to end.
Fan Wen 5 in composition evaluation is a thin old man with calluses on his hands and broken front teeth-he is my favorite grandfather.
Like everyone else, he is not great, but he can shelter me from the wind and rain; He is not a master of humor, but he can make me laugh. Although he is not strong, he is as reassuring as a tall pillar.
Every day, I put on my schoolbag, get on my grandfather's electric car, squint on his back, listen to the wind blowing by my ear, and watch the scenery on the road flash by before my eyes. So happy! Yes, grandpa is like my exclusive driver and never goes on strike. Even in hot summer and extremely cold winter. He will never keep me waiting for half an hour.
I remember one winter, my grandfather waited for me by the car as usual, and I picked up my schoolbag lazily. As soon as I opened the door, the biting cold wind blew relentlessly at me. Ah, cut a loud sneeze to protest to me. Reluctantly, I got on the bus and thought to myself, winter is really cruel! Along the way, the cold wind blew my face like a knife, and my poor little hand was numb with cold. I don't know what happened to grandpa's hands, but I think they must have cracked with cold. After a while, grandpa suddenly said, "What's the matter, is it cold?" I grinned with cold, and it took me a long time to come up with a word: "cold." "Then put your hand into my clothes to keep warm." Grandpa continued. I looked at my hands frozen like carrots and thought, I'm saved! So he put his hand on grandpa's back without saying anything. Wow! Suddenly, a warm current came to my mind. Grandpa's back is so wide and warm, as if he had given me timely help. I asked my grandfather, "Aren't you cold?" Grandpa pretended to be cold and said, "Hiss, you little girl, I'm so cold." I was amused by my grandfather's expression, laughed and got to school soon. I stood at the school gate, looking at my grandfather's distant back, and thought to myself: Thank you, Grandpa.
I love grandpa, and grandpa loves me more. In my eyes, grandpa's back is the widest and warmest.
Comment: This is an author-centered narrative. At the beginning, the little author sketched a portrait of grandpa, which was lifelike and lifelike. Then select typical events to show the character and love for me in the detailed narration. The language is lively, very consistent with the identity characteristics of the characters, and very infectious.
The main features of essay evaluation model essay 6 are concrete narration, true details, vivid description and true feelings. It uses rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification to write … vividly, and at the same time expresses … love for ….
The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
The article has clear clues, prominent themes, and focuses on …. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read, love to read and reluctant to let go.
Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article. `
The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a beneficial way, which is the success of this paper.
This article is novel in material selection ... It is full of rural life and children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it.
This paper is based on real life, with appropriate materials, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
The full text is lively in rhythm, fresh in language, full of humor all the time, and enjoyable to read.
The vivid and meticulous description of … is the daily feature of this article, which also reflects the author's keen and meticulous observation. This is a major factor in the success of the article.
The content of this paper is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
This paper is a mature narrative work, which shows the whole process of the experiment with accurate and fluent language, ups and downs, full of fun. The little author carefully observes and narrates in order.
The description of experimental phenomena can be pertinent, detailed and comprehensive. The article embodies the interest and knowledge of natural science and is very interesting to read.
The beginning of the article is very clear, which plays a leading role in the full text. The last few sentences show the author's lofty ideals and firm confidence in exploring the mysteries of science, which is inspiring.
The three successes of this paper are as follows: first, pay attention to choosing the best fragment to write; Secondly, the words are accurate; Third, the structure of the article is compact.
This paper organizes materials around the center of … with accurate, vivid and vivid language and extremely rich and specific content, which is a successful work.
Model essay 7 1 for composition evaluation. Unreasonable conception, full of loopholes in content, can not reflect the truth of life.
2. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
3. The metaphor is vivid, the ontology is similar to the metaphor, and the interest and persuasiveness of the article are greatly enhanced.
4. Appropriate use of comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.
Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
6. Clever use of personification makes the objects in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, human thoughts and feelings, and makes them reflect the spiritual course of the hero in the text from the side.
7. Be able to choose typical themes in life, and the events are more representative.
8. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry.
9. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.
10. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.
1 1. The selection of materials from many aspects and angles fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full of personality.
12. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative to some extent, and the old themes and old ideas are unremarkable.
13. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and mining.
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15. the article is miscellaneous but not chaotic, but it can be detailed and focused.
16. This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
17 ... is practical and contains simple and profound philosophy. It is refreshing and emotional to read.
18. This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
19. The case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.
20. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.