Be sure to write down your personality and characteristics, that is, what makes you different from others. Let me give you a few sample essays to take a look at: Me Do you want to know me? I am an ordinary junior high school student. Although I am a girl, I don’t have the girl’s delicate cherry mouth, coquettish temper, or the love to dress up. Like ordinary people, I have good facial features. Compared with my peers, I am a bit taller than them. God has given me a pair of big, watery eyes, as bright as two pearls. My mother named me "Zhenzhen". In fact, the first "zhen" here is "real" and "zhen". My mother hopes that I will be a serious person. Although I only have one guarantee, I have more than one name. Those classmates who loved to joke gave me many "names", let me introduce them to you one by one. I always love to laugh so much. A joke will make me laugh so hard. In addition, I also love to tell jokes, so my first "name" was born - "Laughing Fairy". It's no wonder, no matter what Whether during recess or in class, everyone can hear my giggle. In class, the teacher tells a little joke and I laugh for a few lessons. This will inevitably lead to misunderstandings about me from teachers and classmates. Once, I sat at the same table with a classmate who also loved to laugh. In math class, the teacher asked a strange problem: "One hundred monks..." Somehow, we both laughed. The teacher saw it and criticized us severely. My face turned red and I swore never to laugh again. But the situation is easy to change, and the nature is hard to change. I still can't change my tendency to laugh. However, laughter also has its benefits. When quarreling with others, a naughty smile can avoid a "war". I am very competitive and like to compete in everything and win or lose. If I lose, I will be very unconvinced. Thus, my second "name" was born - "Little Baiyang". After every exam, I always have to compare myself with others. I remember one time when I was in the fifth grade of elementary school, I got second place in an exam and I was very unconvinced. After carefully searching for the reasons, I found that if I was more careful, I would catch up with the first place. So, I actually ran in front of the first classmate and said, "Congratulations on your first place, but I believe I can surpass you next time." The classmate looked at me doubtfully, and I felt that I was indeed Somewhat reckless. But once the words were spoken, it was difficult to take them back, so I redoubled my efforts. Of course, I beat her in the second test. I love to compare with others in all aspects, including grades, moral character, etc. I want to be an outstanding middle school student. My personality is like a boy, very crazy. My mother called me a "wild child", and my classmates called me a "tomboy". The name "tomboy" really didn't sound good at first, but I didn't care. "Tomboy" is just "tomboy", what's wrong with being more lively? Calling me a "tomboy" made me "not ashamed, but proud", which made me even crazier. In the second semester of the second grade, I made a bet with some girls and boys: on the blackboard newspaper at the back of the classroom, boys would run one issue, and girls would run one issue, to see which issue would be better and more innovative. Both issues have come out, and when I compare them, they are really good. The handwriting written by girls is neat, the layout is good, and the content is novel. The teacher praised us. My crazy energy came back again. I was jumping and making noise in the classroom, shouting for the boys to admit defeat. The teacher said we were crazy. Naturally, I, the number one person, was invited into the office. Do you think I look like a "tomboy"? I have many hobbies, including singing, dancing, reading, and especially playing badminton. I remember last year during the Spring Festival, I played badminton with several friends of similar age. We were sweating all over and didn’t go home until dark. I can also be said to be a badminton fan. As the saying goes: "Smile and save ten years." It not only puts me in a good mood, but also makes me full of hope for the future. A strong desire to win makes me work hard! My complete "tomboy" character makes me stronger. I am such a lively and cheerful girl, and I am happy about it. Comments: The article uses lively language and humorous writing style, selects materials that can express the essence and characteristics of the characters, writes about "my" personality characteristics, thoughts, interests, hobbies and specialties, and highlights that "I" love to laugh. , the character trait of not admitting defeat. At the beginning and end of the article, the transition is natural and the connection is tight. A nickname is used as a clue to connect interesting things together. After reading, a cheerful, lively, strong and competitive girl appeared in front of me. Masterpiece 3: Written for myself You made a fool of yourself again in today’s physics class! You have never been willing to study hard and always just dabbled. You don't take the problems you encounter in your studies seriously at all, and you never fully digest those questions. As soon as you figure out a little bit of clues, you don't know where to fly. You are already 15 years old, quite an adult. Why are you always so pale and simple in your mind? You are very carefree and don't care about anything. On the surface, others think you are pretty good and very talented, but in fact, you know yourself best. You have no knowledge but pretend to know everything. That behavior is really annoying! You are a guy who talks too much and talks too much but refuses to do anything! You clearly know your mistakes and you really want to correct them. You have made a lot of plans and imitated a lot of celebrities, but you still can't correct them. You can't control yourself, you are a complete wretch! You have no idea, but you are jealous of others and envious of others, but you just don't take action. You are always doing nothing all day long, only asking for things, not knowing anything in return, not knowing how to make progress, not knowing true feelings, and living in emptiness and boredom.
In fact, you also know that it is wrong to do so, but you still continue to do it without hesitation, so that you are stuck in it and unable to extricate yourself. You don't want to rein in the cliff and find your way back. What should I say to you? Your little bit of "dignity" seems to be as heavy as Mount Tai, but in fact it is as light as a feather! Is face really that important? Can you stop fantasizing about those futile things? Fantasy comes and goes, but you make no progress at all, but instead continue to deteriorate. You don't have to be taciturn and pretend to be deep. This does not mean that you are mature, but more exposes your naivety and shallowness. There is a saying: "If you don't have long-term worries, you will have immediate worries." If you have no ambition, no direction and plan for struggle, and no thoughts of your own, then you will be troubled by the trivial things in front of you. Over time. You will feel that nothing you see is pleasing to your eyes, and nothing you do is satisfactory; you will feel that life is very tired, you can't see flowers, you can't see sunshine, you can't see hope, you just feel that everything is complicated and vast in front of you. Hey, you are a 15-year-old little adult! It is impossible for you to live your life again, so you have to start from now on. Don't be pessimistic and disappointed, and don't be a giant in words and a dwarf in action. Sincerely, try your best to paint a picture of your future life! Comments: This is a lyrical essay about self-exposure. Writing about yourself is actually dissecting yourself. The author has made a comprehensive and profound reflection on himself in the form of a spiritual monologue. Show your shortcomings without concealing them, such as impetuousness, vanity, chasing fashion, poor self-control, mediocrity, etc. Only by being sincere can you understand yourself deeply and cut through the tumor quickly and without mercy. Only in this way can you be thorough. Only by overcoming shortcomings can we make real progress. After reading this article, I think readers will have a correct attitude towards their own shortcomings. Excellent work 4: Hey, I know my geography score. -92. ——That's too exaggerated! Did you make a mistake? ——No. You didn't answer an 8-point question. To tell you the truth, the person who didn't answer the question seriously is the handsome and graceful monitor. "Why are you laughing? Why are you laughing? I have never seen the class monitor not doing the questions! "I flicked my long hair and struck a very cool pose to seduce a group of people - oh, they were intimidated. Alas, there is nothing you can do about being beautiful. Then, I walked lightly and learned the words in the opera." "Qingyi" "floated" into the geography teacher's office and shouted in an extremely loud voice: "Report!" "The teacher looked up from behind a pile of homework books, thought for only one hundredth of a second before roaring: "You, come here, look at your papers! "I walked over tremblingly, and when I was still in shock, the teacher fiercely threw a paper over. I looked left and right, up and down, and hey, there is no fork? I was puzzled. "Here! here! You can't even see so many words, thank you for being the squad leader! "The teacher suddenly yelled. I quickly squinted my two eyes, which added up to 1.0, and "scanned" it. Ah, it turned out to be a picture-filling question! I stood helplessly in front of the table, waiting for the "answer". Next, As usual, it was a lecture of criticism and advice. I thought to myself, if this goes on, dinner will be ruined. So, I used a tone that was three points sincere, six points false, and one part enough to make a stone cry. With the richest emotion in his life, he said: "Teacher, I know where I went wrong. "Then, I squeezed out a few tears. Haha, the teacher was indeed fooled. She waved her hand and sighed: "Go back! "I was about to run away as if I had been granted amnesty, but I heard a shout from behind me: "Come back, copy the paper twice tonight, I'll check it tomorrow! "Oh, my God! I screamed secretly. If I had known this, I might as well not have read the paper. Alas, poor and careless me! In fact, this is just a small pain I suffered because of my carelessness. My dear friends, please Continue reading. The weather is sunny, the temperature is moderate, and there are a few big white clouds in the sky. It is a wonderful day. I am wearing a white dress and holding an extremely beautiful certificate in both hands. I walked forward gracefully in the breeze, like a fairy descending from the earth (although this fairy is a bit narcissistic), so excited that I almost lost my eyes. Don't look at this certificate, it is my hard work for three years. In return, I walked home happily, as happy as a little mouse. Unexpectedly, there was a sudden gust of wind, and the certificate "suddenly" floated up. I am enough, I am enough, I am enough. Enough, enough... Unfortunately, the altitude was not enough, so I was frustrated and had no choice but to follow closely behind the certificate. “Ah, no! "Seeing my beloved certificate falling into the puddle, I screamed in pain. At this time, I, who had always liked physics, suddenly hated the gravity of the earth. My certificate, my poor certificate! I wanted to Without tears, I carefully "rescued" the wet certificate with one corner missing, "Ah, I'm home. "I took a deep breath and put the certificate on the table, hoping that it would be ready soon to show off to my parents. My eyes began to search the room. Wow! I am really a genius! It's too late to tell. , at that time, I took out the electric iron as fast as I could in my life, wiped the wet certificate with a dry towel, carefully laid it on the desk, and ironed it with the electric iron. At this moment, it was really dry! A classmate came and insisted that I accompany her to play. I had no choice but to refuse the kindness. We were having a great time, but we saw a puff of white smoke rising from the desk. There are gods! "I was so frightened that my two legs were fighting and I almost wanted to run away. No, it was a certificate! I jumped up all of a sudden.
When I took away the electric iron, my poor certificate had already been "sold away". With a "bang bang", my mother came back and shouted loudly as soon as she entered the door: "What the hell are you doing again!" I knew that I was "doomed". Then come one, five, ten. Immediately afterwards, I burst into tears and promised there would never be a next time. Unexpectedly, my mother didn't like this, her eyes were wide open, like a tiger with makeup, and she sang loudly: "Follow the old rules!" Then, I was violently "Ked". Alas, although I suffered a lot because of my carelessness, I still can't change this problem. "What can't be changed?" Oh, this is terrible. Mom is here. Please do me a favor and beg for me! Comments: The exercise uses humorous language and typical examples to portray the image of an innocent, lively but careless middle school student. Reading it makes people feel like spring breeze blowing on their face, refreshing. The person in the article is very personal and distinctive, making people feel like seeing him and hearing his voice when reading. Proper selection of materials, ingenious conception, and vivid language are the keys to getting full marks for this article. Excellent Work 5 It is raining half outside my window. The continuous rainy weather is the most annoying. Through the glass window that has not been wiped for a long time, it is gray outside. The cold raindrops hit the back of the hand through the half-open window. It is so cold! The classroom was dark and gloomy, but I could still see clearly. There were fifty-five tables and fifty-five chairs, but there were only fifty-four and a half people, because I was no longer a complete me—only half of me was left. Teachers, parents, and school leaders all want students to look the same: wear the same clothes, wear the same hat, and even have the same test scores. If you are originally a square, then they are like a file, grinding away your original edges and corners bit by bit to make you rounder. Over time, all the students turned into circles without exception. They are not God, but they do the same thing as God. Originally rectangular, I had to cut off part of my body and become a circle. 1. The birth of the first circle Lu Xun once said that the first person to eat crabs is a brave man. But the birth of the first circle was not glorious, and no one knew the mystery. This first "circle" is our little teacher Y. As the saying goes, if the teacher is a teacher, then the results will be effective. Perhaps for this reason, many students have become her loyal followers. But Teacher Y’s talent is still slightly higher than that of her students. Once the words of the school leaders come out of Teacher Y’s mouth, they become more noble and sacred than the president’s speech. In my opinion, she is not only the first to become a “round person”. ", and it is a circle as smooth as jade, incomparable and unprecedented. 2. Say goodbye to yesterday. I must say goodbye to my favorite rectangle and start a long and monotonous "evolution" career. Teacher Xiao Y called this "stepping into a perfect circle". I can't imagine how to survive and develop after the transformation. Perhaps if you have a few more circle theorems and inferences in your head, you can replace all the memories of squares, bid farewell to yesterday's noise, and reluctantly choose silence and loneliness. Maybe, I have begun to deform, goodbye! No, it's goodbye, my rectangle. 3. Life begins to feel boring! I drew large and small circles all over the white paper, but I still couldn't see how beautiful it was. Maybe it was because I hadn't mastered my kung fu yet. Teacher Xiao Y said that the circle is the most beautiful and softest shape in the world. Yes, I'm starting to think so too. In fact, making a circle is very easy. As long as you find the trick, it will be no problem: what the teacher said is right; what the parents said is right; what the principal said is right. What if it's wrong? That's right too - that's the way of the circle. 4. The music of Yuan Half I was walking on the street, looking at the people on the street, and felt that they were so ridiculous, and how could they compare to me - Yuan. When I walked into the video store, half of me laughed wildly while watching "Tang Dynasty" and "Beyond". Then I took a lyric CD, paid for it, and walked out of the store. Only then did I remember that those bands were my favorites before, but now But he used the horoscope to laugh at them: vulgar and without melody. It's as if the CD in your hand is the supreme thing - this is the music of the circle. 5. Escape from this boring life is driving me crazy. Half of me seemed to be a little fox fairy with little knowledge. It didn't take long for my tail to be exposed. Little Teacher Y scolded me every day that "rotten wood cannot be carved." He didn't even know there were thorns on a circle. On the way home, the autumn wind blew over, so cool! A leaf fell from the tree. It turned out to be very green. The wind blew it around. Without dust, it was still itself - a leaf whose destiny was not under control. Suddenly, I seemed to understand a lot. I ran to the music store and bought a lot of "Beypnd" tapes and CDs. I became the perfect me again, and I finally escaped from that round world. 6. At the end, the rain was still falling, washing the windows clean, and everything was so bright; the sky was high and blue, and the air was fresh. I took a deep breath and suddenly became energetic. Looking at the people in the round pond, I laughed loudly, tearing away the shackles of the circle, and I was a complete me. After the rain, the sky cleared. I shook the water drops on my head and smiled happily! Comment: The title of "Half of Me" immediately attracts readers' attention. After reading it carefully, it turns out that "half of me" is a "circle" with its edges and corners polished off. This article uses the birth of "circle", the characteristics of "circle" and the fission of "circle" as the composition idea, revealing the author's contradictory inner conflict, and using the image of "circle" to express the human personality under the constraints of the current education system. The state presented is quite satisfactory. At the end, it ends with the return of a "complete me". Rather than being a gratifying result, it is better to say that it is just the author's good and innocent wish. Because, in the face of an education system that shackles individuality but determines your destiny, who dares to say "no"? Maybe Han Han can, but more people still have to face it helplessly. This cannot help but cause us to think deeply.