The article begins with emotion: the beauty of mountains and rivers has existed since ancient times. It is a great pleasure for people with elegant taste to taste the beauty of mountains and rivers and communicate their inner feelings with friends. The author regards Xie Zhongshu as a friend who can talk about mountains and water, and expects to make a comparison with Lin Shi through the ages.
In the next ten sentences, the author described the beautiful scenery of mountains and rivers with clear brushstrokes. "The peak goes into the clouds, and the clear water flows to the bottom", trying to describe the height of the mountain and the clearness of the water, and practicing with a pen, writing two perspectives of looking up and looking down, white clouds, mountains and flowing water, and the realm is fresh. "The rock walls on both sides of the strait are colorful. Green forests and green bamboos are available in all seasons, and the perspective is far and wide. The green bamboo and wood show a splendid atmosphere against the colorful rocks, adding vitality to everything on the refreshing and pleasant picture scroll. " The morning mist will rest, and apes and birds will sing; The setting sun is about to sink in the west, and the fish scales are ups and downs ",from the description of static scenes to dynamic scenes. The songs of apes and birds came to my ears through the mist that was about to dissipate in the morning; In the afterglow of the sunset, fish are playing in the water. These four sentences add vitality to the picture and convey the breath of life through the activities of creatures in two specific periods in the morning and evening. The author of these ten sentences chooses representative scenery to combine, so that readers can have a complete and unified impression of mountains and rivers.
At the end of the article, I sighed with emotion, "the fairy capital of the real world" is really a fairyland on earth! No one can appreciate the beauty of Kasper? Lingyun, but the author can find endless fun from it, and he has a sense of pride, which is beyond words.
Wang Guowei said: "All scenery words are love words." In this paper, the scenery is not just the scenery itself, but the soul of the scenery, that is, the vitality of all things in nature. Through the change of height, distance and movement, and the stereoscopic feeling of vision and hearing, the author conveys his joy of life in harmony with nature, and embodies the author's enthusiasm for nature and interest in seclusion. Clear pronunciation and mellow voice, without modification.
"Thank you for writing a book in Chinese" expresses the author's pride in enjoying the beautiful scenery with ancient and modern bosom friends. There are straightforward sentences in this article. The article begins with "the beauty of mountains and rivers has existed since ancient times". The word "beauty" is not only the objective form of landscape, but also the author's aesthetic feeling of landscape-pleasure, "the fairy capital of the real world", which will undoubtedly show his complacency in landscape. "entertain yourself, there is no wonder." No one can appreciate the beauty of Kasper? Lingyun, but the author can find endless fun from it, and he has a sense of pride, which is beyond words.
This landscape sketch, only 68 words, summarizes the ancient and modern times, including the four seasons, taking into account the morning and evening, mountains and rivers, vegetation, birds and animals, lyric comments, everything, it can be said that the scale can accommodate thousands of miles, words can be convinced. The success of this paper is mainly manifested in the following three aspects.
Beautiful artistic conception. The beauty of natural scenery itself constitutes a beautiful artistic conception. Writers reproduce with their own unique artistic feelings and emotional language, arousing readers' aesthetic interest, thus forming the artistic conception of literary works. The author of this article starts from the following aspects to make the article elegant and picturesque. First, the beauty of mountains and rivers. Mountains without water are boring, and water without mountains is boring. Accompanied by mountains and rivers, it looks fresh and affectionate. This is the "peak into the sky". Peak, that is, steep; Into the clouds, into the sky. At the foot of the mountain is the "clean bottom". The water is crystal clear. The peak is high and clear, and the dynamic potential of water adds vitality to the mountain. The reflection of the mountain covered the water with extraordinary splendour, which set each other off into interest. Second, the beauty of color matching. Although mountains, water and green are quiet and elegant, the single color makes people feel cold and lonely. Here, "the stone walls on both sides of the strait meet in five colors" and "the green forests and bamboos are always ready". There are hundreds of rocks standing on the wall, which are colorful and dazzling. In addition, there are green forests and bamboos mixed among them, just like colorful brocade dotted with jasper, which has become a spectacle. The two banks are like hanging two brocade baskets, with the blue sky as the background, flowing water as the foil, and the reflection into the clean stream, the scene is more beautiful and moving. Third, the beauty of change in the morning and evening. In front of it, I wrote a scene common to the four seasons, and in the four seasons, the morning and evening of each day are different. In the morning, white fog fills the air first, then flocs, then smoke, and finally there is no fog yarn, only dawn, apes and birds singing, and all the sounds are full of vitality. In the evening, the red sun sets in the west, the mountains are covered with dusk, birds return to the forest, and apes rest in the trees as far as the eye can see. At this time, the fish that used to be downstream of the water jumped out, moving silently and ringing silently, which was very interesting. The author's observation is extremely fine, and his pen is extremely delicate. He grasps the characteristics of things and describes the modality of mountains and rivers, which makes people's eyes turn with essays, their feelings follow, the morning scene is warm and jubilant, and the evening is quiet and lonely, giving people different aesthetic feelings. Fourth, the beauty of dynamic and static contrast. The objective scenery will not be monotonous, and the prose writing should not be dull. The author pays great attention to the change and collocation of motion and static. First, the form is dynamic: the peak is static, and the running water is moving; The second is the movement and quietness of light color: the bamboo is quiet, and the five colors are moving; The third is the movement and quietness of sound: the sunrise is foggy and the apes and birds are singing; The sun sets, the mountains are quiet, and the fish jump into the water. The above scenes interact and influence each other, forming a pleasing landscape painting axis.
Rigorous structure. Although this article is a sketch, the author still writes it carefully, and the full text is divided into three parts. "The beauty of mountains and rivers, talk about * * * from ancient times to the present" always leads to the full text. From ancient times to the present, everyone likes to use "talk about * * *" and "beauty" to point out the center of the full text. Some describe the beauty of mountains and rivers. Finally, the temple said, "I really want to be a fairy capital. Since it was rebuilt, there is nothing like it." First, I summed up the previous article with sighs, and then confirmed this statement with celebrities. In this way, the echo from beginning to end, the combination of discussion and narration make the main part of the article more distinct and prominent. In the part of scenery writing, first look up at the "peaks and mountains into the clouds", then look at the "Qingxi to the bottom", and then look at the "stone walls on both sides of the strait" and "green forests and green bamboos". Finally, we write in two layers: dawn and dusk. In a word, a scene, a meaning, second-order order is very rare.
Simple language. The language of this essay is very distinctive and concise, without any empty or superfluous words. Speaking of "peak" first gives people an impression, and then "entering the cloud" gives people a concrete image. Similarly, the feeling of "cleaning up" first is the first, and the feeling of "bottoming out" is real. The use of adverbs such as "five colors meet", "apes and birds sing wildly", "sinking scales and jumping", "crossing", "chaos" and "competition" fully reveals the state of color, sound and movement. This paper mainly consists of four sentences, especially in order, and finally ends with a long sentence, like a torrent, pouring into the sea.
"Thank you for writing a book" embodies the author Tao Hongjing's landscape view of entertaining. During the Southern and Northern Dynasties, due to the political turmoil and sharp contradictions, many literati often lived in seclusion in the mountains and sought spiritual liberation from the natural beauty. Therefore, in their letters, they often describe mountains and draw water to show their interest, and take it as comfort to their friends, such as Wu Yun's "Book with Gu Zhang" and "Book with Zhu", which all belong to this category. Although this kind of works do not show positive political views, they have created excellent works with considerable aesthetic value with their superb artistic brushwork, which has high appreciation significance.