high summer
The land is very thirsty in hot summer. As soon as water touches the soil, it will make a squeaking sound. Thin and clear, not flowing at all. It was immediately sucked dry, leaving a small circle of faint shadows around the fibrous roots. The shadow in front of me quickly faded away, and soon only a little trace was left that was almost unrecognizable.
A blazing sun
The sun in spring has lost its tenderness, shining on the earth like a fireball, and seems to give off all the heat. It softened the asphalt road, dyed the faces of pedestrians red, made the trees dare not sway at all, and even cracked the earth. Throw a basin of water on the ground and the thirsty earth will be sucked up at once. The streets are full of vests and shirtless, and people can't wait to get into the refrigerator.
Summer night
In the summer night, stars, a little, two o'clock ... flickering, like a pair of naughty and naive eyes, but full of wisdom. They seem to have seen us, so they play hide-and-seek with us. Their dexterous bodies, hiding from Tibet, dazzled us. Suddenly, a meteor came and attracted our attention. In the blink of an eye, it disappeared from our eyes again.
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The first bright cloud emerged from the breezy blue sky, penetrated the first green leaf evenly from the bright sunshine, and danced in the bushes from the first dragonfly. The pigeons returning from the air were filled with the smoke of sunset. In this way, summer came gently with heavy steps, breaking a pool of spring water, and the spring breeze and spring rain were gone, and the flowers were already thousands of trees, although I was very sad.
In the early morning of dawn, the pond side of willow is reflected, and the grass buds are sprouting on the leaves. In summer, people are flushed, people are coming and going, striding noisily, pushing open the pink door and willow green window, and the call of tide drowns the birdsong and willow flute. The breeze carries the desire of the season and shows it selflessly and fearlessly at the highest place in summer. Gu Teng is still wrapped in lush acacia, moss is still dancing with time, and girls in red are flowing in the field of vision. Her beautiful image embodies the aura of things and walks as lightly as a swallow.
2. To describe a scene with more than 300 words, three figures of speech are needed to standardize the figures of speech. I like my beautiful campus very much, very beautiful. This is a beautiful campus.
There is a small bamboo forest, which is very lovely. We can enjoy the cool here in summer. There is a green lawn next to the small bamboo forest, where the grass is lush and there is a rockery! There are many red morning glory in the flower bed, which is very beautiful!
When we walk into the school, we can see green white orchids. There is also a huge playground, where there are artificial lawns and red runways. There is a French phoenix tree on the playground, guarding our school like a famous soldier. There are many pear trees in the toilet. Flowers bloom in spring and pears mature in autumn, like lanterns hanging on trees.
3. Rainy scenes in summer, with various rhetoric about 300 words. Suddenly, dark clouds appeared in the sky, one piece, two pieces ... bigger and bigger, more and more. They gathered in the air, as if driven by giants. The strong sunlight is blocked, ah, it's going to rain!
Just then, with the sound of "Didi Dada", scattered raindrops fell. Raindrops fell on the mud, splashing clouds of dust; Falling on the concrete floor, it seems that small flowers suddenly bloom on the concrete floor. Before anyone could see it clearly, the sound of "whoosh whoosh whoosh ..." followed, just like a huge sprinkler suddenly opened in the sky, and dense rain came. The "blooming flowers" on the concrete floor disappeared instantly. After a while, the ground was flooded. Raindrops hit the stagnant water, splashing one after another. I remember that Mr. Lao She compared rain and splashing water to arrows, which are very similar. It's raining harder and harder, with rain curtains hanging on the eaves, and thick rain falls to the ground, splashing more arrows. Looking around, there are many raindrops and jumping arrows everywhere.
Rain hits the leaves and "poops" straight; Hit the roof and make a "da da" sound. Suddenly, a flash of lightning flashed, followed by deafening thunder, boom, boom ... like a huge roller, it rolled and gradually rolled away. The sound has not completely disappeared, and with a bang, another big thunder exploded ... high voice, low voice, long voice and short voice, mixed together, as if accompanied by heavy rain.
While enjoying the rain scene, the rain stopped. As if suddenly received an order to retreat, the wind stopped and the thunder disappeared. It's a sunny day, but it's getting cooler and cooler. At this time, although the sun was shining brightly in the sky, I still felt the cool breeze blowing gently, and the fragrance of the soil was fragrant and refreshing.
4. The 300-word fragments of people's notes should use two description methods and three rhetorical devices, that is, vivid language is used to describe and imitate the specific state of the existence and change of people, events and scenery, giving readers an immersive feeling. Description methods include character description and environment description.
Character description: 1. Appearance description (portrait description), the description of appearance, posture and clothes is called appearance description or portrait description. 2. Action description is a description method to reveal a character's character through his personalized action and action description.
3. Language description is a description method to describe a character's personality through personalized character language. 4. Psychological description is a description method to describe the inner personality characteristics of characters by analyzing their inner activities (such as inner feelings, intentions, wishes, thoughts, ideological struggles, etc.). ) and tap their thoughts and feelings.
5. Expression description: different from appearance description. Expression description depicts people's facial expressions, which can highlight people's personality characteristics. Environment description: 1. The description of natural environment is a description of the place, season, climate, time and scene of people's activities.
It has the functions of setting off the emotions of characters, promoting the development of stories, pointing out and highlighting the center. 2. The description of social environment generally refers to the description of social background, flavor of the times and regional characteristics. In addition, according to the narrator's expression, description (including character description and environment description) can be divided into frontal description, side description, scene description and detail description.
1. Positive description (direct description) is a direct description of people or environment. 2. Profile description (indirect description), through the description of other people or environment, sets off the characters and scenery written from the profile, thus receiving the effect of "holding the moon in the clouds". 3. Scene description is a description of large-scale social activities or scenes of life, fighting, labor and entertainment in which many people participate. 4. Detail description refers to the detailed description of some small internal or external transitions, which plays a special role in showing the development of characters and plots, including movements, expressions, objects and environments.
[Edit this paragraph] Classification by features ● The so-called "line drawing" refers to a writing method that grasps the main features of things and outlines the image of things in concise language. Mr. Lu Xun is very good at using line drawing techniques, such as an introduction about Mr. Fujino in Mr. Fujino: "At that time, a dark-skinned gentleman came in, wearing glasses and holding a stack of books, large and small. As soon as I put the book on the platform, I introduced myself to the students in a slow and cadence tone: "My name is Fujino Genkuro.
The language is concise and impressive. ● Detailed description.
Fine description refers to the meticulous carving of things, also known as meticulous painting, which is relative to simple painting. For example, A Lei's One Side describes Lu Xun in more detail than Lu Xun's Fujino: "His face is yellow, black and white, thin and worrying, like a person recovering from a serious illness, but his spirit is good and there is no sign of depression. Hair is about an inch long. I haven't cut it for a long time, but I stand briskly one by one.
The beard is striking, like words written in thick ink. The newly written "Silly Brother" is even more delicate, portraying the characteristics of a worker who sells medicine and sugar to the fullest, from the clothes he wears, the utensils he uses, the preparation before shouting, the tone of shouting, the content of shouting to his attitude towards customers and poor brothers in the neighborhood, and writing a lively, kind, diligent, optimistic, poor and ambitious young man's character and character.
Low foil, foil refers to the process of writing notes, in order to highlight the main object with another person or thing to foil or contrast. People often say: "safflower is good, but it needs green leaves to support it."
The foil can be from the front, from the back, from the scenery to people, from people to people, from things to people, but these should be used according to the needs of the performance content. Lu Xun is a literary master who is very good at contrasting brushwork. His On Restaurants is so well written that students can read it again and again.
Here are two paragraphs, please enjoy them: "There are only colored walls and dead raspberries outside the window;" This is a leaden sky, white, absolutely wonderful, and light snow is flying. " The scenery sets off Lu's lazy and nostalgic mood from the front.
"A few old plum trees are struggling with snow and are full of flowers, as if there is no meaning of deep winter; ..... Hawthorn trees show more than a dozen red flowers from the dense dark green leaves, which are as bright as fire in the snow, angry and arrogant, as if they despise the heart of a traveler. " Use "plum" and "flower" to compare Lu's lazy mood.
Description is one of the basic skills in literary creation. Description is description, and writing is imitation.
Description is the author's concrete description and description of people, things and environment. Authors generally use description, narration and other methods to create images.
From the description object, it can be divided into character description and environment (scenery) description. Character description includes portrait description, psychological description, action description, language description and so on.
Scene description includes scene description, static object description and dynamic object description. According to the different description methods, it can be divided into direct description and indirect description.
Portrait description is an important method to reveal a character's character by describing his appearance, expression, clothing, posture and tone. Language description expresses characters through monologues (monologues) or dialogues (dialogues with others).
Action description is a skill to express a character's character through his actions and behaviors. Psychological description refers to the description of the psychological activities of characters in a specific environment.
The main function is to reveal the inner world of the characters. Express the thoughts and feelings of the characters, portray their personalities and deepen the theme of the works.
Scenery description refers to the description of natural scenery, dynamic objects and static objects.
5. China's composition about describing the winter scene, combining reality with reality, positive description and rhetorical devices. After the heavy snow, everything was wrapped in silver.
Snow is still floating in the sky, gently and carefully scattered on everything on the earth. The roof turned white, the car turned white, the trees wore white clothes, the grass wore white hats, and the big ground was covered with white carpets. Everything is white, everything is so spectacular and beautiful. It's really beautiful. This little snowflake falls on your hand, cold and comfortable, but this kind of beauty is short-lived and worth cherishing.
Slowly come to the embrace of mother earth and cover the sleeping grass with a thick quilt; Dress the tree in pajamas, and the footprints on the ground are signs of winter. On the snow, you will find that the snow in winter is so interesting. You can play with snow everywhere. You can make a snowman, have a snowball fight and enjoy the beautiful white scenery in winter. Of course, you can also go sledding and skiing. This is very interesting.
Fun, everything is white and beautiful in winter.
6. There must be at least five kinds of rhetoric in the composition describing the scenery, with about 300 words. Thank you, Chun! There you are at last, alternating with Dong Mei. When we were in the Spring Festival, your beautiful image appeared unconsciously and asked your sister to come back. The leaves were falling all over the ground, and the wind was biting. These sights and feelings disappeared without a trace because of your appearance.
Spring! When you arrived, everything was moved by your warmth. Snakes are no longer hibernating in caves, dogs are no longer lazy, the ice in rivers has melted, streams are trickling, trees are no longer withered, green leaves are new branches, and the world is full of warmth because of you. As soon as I breathe in, flowers bloom everywhere, red and green, and grass is no longer everywhere in winter.
Spring! The campus is beautiful with your company. I want people to lie on the ground, listen to beautiful birds singing, enjoy the sky like a painting and enjoy everything you bring. When I walked into the street and looked at the crowd, everyone was talking about New Year's plans and where to enjoy flowers. I know that only your arrival can arouse people's excitement.
Spring! You are the beginning of a year. I have also listened to music praising you and read some essays, poems and words about you. I once read a Yuefu poem, saying, "The mountains and waters surround the corridor, and the dancers return to the spring. Branches are good birds and good friends, and falling flowers are articles. " It not only mentioned the scenery you brought, but also wrote that you can study with us and enjoy the scenery at the same time. what do you think?
Chun, you're here! Brought color and new hope!
Spring music is playing on the earth, and the arrival of rosy clouds sweeps away the splendor in front of us, but it will still show a more exciting side in the dark night. I love the warmth and purity of spring, and I am attached to the splendor of spring. I left with the beauty of spring and sighed: beauty is short-lived, but as long as I once owned it, I will never regret it.