Dawn broke, and a faint and erratic orange light band from the horizon quietly opened the taupe curtain. We came to Xiqiao Mountain in the South China Sea with the gentleness of the morning light.
Tianhu
Tianhu, a place that shows the charm of the south. The rippling lake is shining like broken gold, as bright as the stars pouring down from the Milky Way. The jewel dragon standing in the middle of the lake, with claws fluttering and double whiskers flying, shows an imposing manner of wanting to fly and dive, as if to show its lofty aspirations to the sky. The lake bank is dark green, and the jumping spots on the lush trees are dancing like elves. The meandering small bridge, the chic Yao Pavilion and the free-flying little white dove are all wonderful and set each other off.
Looking at the heights, you have a magnificent and suddenly enlightened feeling. The whole southern land in front of us is shrouded in a gentle mist. The roads extending in all directions and rows of buildings ... are like a splash-ink painting of mountains and rivers floating on rice paper, giving people the illusion of "and a mist from the Yun and Meng valleys". Everything is so magical!
Skylight
is a light-transmitting well for stone mines in the Ming Dynasty. The rock wall under the well hole is cut straight and unfathomable. Standing at a height of more than ten meters and looking down at the skylight, the gap below is like a bottomless pit, and the dark hole is chilling. Suddenly there was a light spot shaking in the dark, and there were clusters of weeds at the bottom of the cave, such as greedy children, greedily absorbing the essence of the sun. Occasionally, a noisy human voice echoed brightly in the cave, which only slightly added the breath of grass survival. Standing for a long time, I felt dizzy. The cave was steep and dangerous, which was really daunting and unstable.
further on, I saw a "stone screen" rising in the air, like a long sword piercing the sky, which was amazing! Shi Yanyan is a masterpiece of the ancients. Look, the huge rock outside this cave, with a knife and axe, is majestic and steep, rugged and abrupt, like a huge set wrapped in tin foil, and is rolling towards you heavily. Walking into the cave, it is dark and refreshing; Boating among them, as in a dream; Whispering softly, the echo is buzzing; Water drops dripping, cold and penetrating, just like entering a cool world.
gradually, we are in danger and don't know it! On the left of the narrow mountain path is a bottomless deep pool, on the right is a cliff, on the back is the beautiful scenery of the misty South China Sea water town, and in front is a long road without a trace.
after several hundred steps, the clouds return, but the rock points end. Maolin xiuzhu, flowers and trees help sparse; Wild flowers are fragrant, and birds return to the forest; The beautiful environment is elegant, and it washes away the dust. "There is no way for mountains and rivers to be suspicious, and there is another village." When the twilight was heavy, a touch of setting sun suddenly appeared, and the voice grew stronger. Everyone was relieved and smiled at each other. In laughter, I found the valuable spirit I need to face difficulties and succeed in the future. Composition 2: [Excellent Composition] Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain 4 words
In spring, Xiqiao Mountain is full of flowers: there are azaleas everywhere, various kapok flowers, and some peach blossoms in the peach garden are in bud, while others are in full bloom. It looks like a huge pink carpet from a distance. The unique fragrance of peach blossoms attracts many bees and butterflies. They are busy among the flowers. As Du Fu said, "Peach blossoms are blooming without owners, and lovely deep red loves light red. "
In summer, Xiqiao Mountain is covered with trees. Look: the litchi tree and longan tree are lush; The unripe fresh fruit is covered with branches. Look at the pool full of lotus flowers. It's really red and green. This scene is really beautiful and spectacular. I can't help but sing: the lotus leaves are infinitely blue in the next day, and the lotus flowers are different in red in the next day. Look: even the fish can enjoy it and play in the shade of lotus.
In autumn, flowers fade, but chrysanthemums stand upright in the wind, and Ao Shuang is in full bloom and competing to open. Autumn is a harvest season, and Xiqiao Mountain is no exception: the big round orange bends the branches and looks like small lanterns from a distance. The thin-skinned oranges, heavy grapes and green oranges make people drool. As Su Dongpo wrote:'' A good year must be remembered when it is orange, yellow and green''.
In winter, when other places are made of powder and jade, and the cold wind is howling, our Xiqiao Mountain is still full of green, full of vitality! It's fascinating
The charming Xiqiao Mountain is really a veritable tourist resort! Composition 3: Journey to Xiqiao Mountain Composition 8 words
Journey to Xiqiao Mountain
Not long after the holiday, my father and I went to climb the mountain in Xiqiao Mountain. We climbed a long way and saw many things.
at first, my father and I went to the place where we ate. My father and my uncles put beer away first and then started climbing the mountain.
let's walk across a small bridge and come to a lotus pond. This lotus pond is very beautiful, with a large green lotus leaf and some lotus flowers in full bloom. Everyone stopped to take pictures and see the scenery. This reminds me of "the lotus leaves are infinitely bright in the next day, and the lotus flowers reflect the sun in a different color."
After crossing the lotus pond, we turned several corners, walked a long way, crossed a wooden bridge and went to a temple to have a rest. I see a big mountain on the left, and a high Guanyin statue in the South China Sea on the right. We looked at it and went down the mountain.
We really enjoyed going to Xiqiao Mountain this time!
Writing Guidance: How to Make the Writing Language "Live"
As the ancients said, "Words without words are not far away." Language is the "shell" of thoughts and the "skin" of articles. An article with a beautiful and appropriate "shell" and beautiful "skin" will be vivid, touching and radiant. So, how to make your article language "live"? You should start from the following aspects:
First, the language should be concise and accurate.
In 1986, a foreign newspaper organized a "Shortest Reporting Competition" for a football match. Reporters from various newspapers flocked to the city, eager to win the first prize. As a result, the first prize was taken away by a report with only three words. This report is: "── : ." It fully embodies the concise beauty of language. There is really nothing to report because the two teams were mediocre in technology and finally played in a draw. Only the final referee's flute announced the result of the game to people. It is this shot that the author captured and wrote this report in three vivid words, which is really a masterpiece of concise language. To make the language concise, it is necessary to be flexible, concise, powerful and just right in choosing words and making sentences. Another example is Wang Anshi's seven-rhythm "Boarding a Boat and Guazhou", which has been told for ages. It is said that Wang Anshi changed the word "green" in the poem "Spring breeze and green Jiang Nanan" four times in his writing, first as "to", then as "full", then as "into" and finally as "green". The words "Dao", "Man" and "Ru" are not bad in terms of poetic content, but compared with the word "green", they are still abstract and cannot arouse people's association. And the word "green" vividly shows the spring to the south of the Yangtze River, a scene full of spring and vitality, and causes people's infinite reverie. A concise "green" word makes the artistic conception of the article more beautiful and full of flavor.
second, the language should be appropriate and standardized. Composition 4: [Excellent Composition] Xiqiao Mountain 4 words
Xiqiao Mountain
My hometown is Xiqiao Mountain Tourist Resort in Foshan City, Guangdong Province, where the scenery is beautiful, especially Xiqiao Mountain.
Xiqiao Mountain is a good place to visit because of its lush trees and fragrant flowers.
One summer vacation, my father took me to Xiqiao Mountain to play. In the morning, my father and I kept going to the top of Xiqiao Mountain. After a heavy rain, the clouds were aroused, and my father and I broke through the clouds and set foot on the mountain path. The mountain road is lined with Chinese fir and bamboo. Looking from a distance, Xiqiao Mountain is high in the clouds, just like a silver sword piercing the sky standing in the clouds. While we were on our way, we enjoyed the scenery along the way, and soon we came to Xianhu Lake, which was green and crystal clear. There is a dragon lying in the middle of the lake, as if to rush out of the water and fly into the sky. When you get out of Xianhu, you will arrive at the Peach Blossom Garden. When we walked into the Peach Blossom Garden, we saw peach blossoms falling one by one, pink, white, red and purple. It's like a fairy tale. After a while, we left the Peach Blossom Garden and went straight to the top of the mountain. I looked up at the top of the mountain, and the mountains were winding and winding, like a ribbon falling from the clouds. Tourists scattered on the ribbon like white dots one by one, and slowly moved up.
After a while, I finally reached the top of the mountain. I looked around. The top of the vast Xiqiao Mountain was like lotus flowers looming in the sea of clouds. The grass on the ground stretched, lifted its little face with dew, and smiled sweetly. It was even more vivid to look at the word "non-human" on the stone wall.
My hometown is really beautiful. I love my hometown.
XXX Grade 4: He Jiayi Composition 5: "Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain" 4 words
Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain
This spring, my mother took me to climb Xiqiao Mountain, which is well-known in Xiqiao. There are many scenic spots in Xiqiao Mountain, such as Tianhu Park and Feiliu thousands of feet Tea Garden, among which I like Tianhu Park best.
let's go by the path. It's only over a meter wide, and it's full of steps. On both sides of the step road, there are many dense trees, which are really shady! We managed to walk the stairs to Tianhu. I stood in the distance and saw that the lake was very quiet, as quiet as a bright big mirror. The lake is very green, as green as a flawless jade. There is a water stage on the lake, just like a huge ship moored there. Mom told me: If it is a holiday, there will be a wonderful lion dance performance on the stage, and there will be a sea of people on the lake with a golden dragon beside the water stage. It is lifelike, as if watching whether there is a lion dance on the stage on the water.
In the middle of Tianhu Lake, there is a zigzag bridge, which is like an underwater Youlong, leading us to the other side. Walking through the Jiuqu Bridge, I saw many people. Some of them go fishing, some watch the scenery, and some play chess. You see, they are smiling, talking and laughing, putting all their troubles behind them, and their faces are full of happiness. We quickly found a stone bench to rest under. After a short rest, I played on the grass.
after playing for a while, it's time for us to go home. Only then did I reluctantly leave. Xiqiao Mountain is really beautiful! I would like to be a small fish in the lake, stay with the lake every day, and play games with the water plants. Composition 6: "Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain" 5 words
Beautiful Xiqiao Mountain
Last Sunday, it was sunny and sunny, and our family went to Xiqiao Mountain to play.
standing at the foot of Xiqiao Mountain, looking up, ah, what a green mountain. Mountain peaks are connected with mountain peaks, just like a green ocean. We climbed up the mountain road and saw trees on both sides of the road like tall soldiers and open green umbrellas. Under the tree, colorful wild flowers are blooming, including red, yellow, purple and purplish red, just like a beautiful big flower bed. We enjoyed the beautiful scenery while walking, and we didn't feel tired at all. The mountain wind is blowing, so cool!
We arrived at Tianhu at the top of the mountain. This is a beautiful lake, which looks like a big bright mirror. The lake is green, like a green gem. Around the lake, there are dense flowers and trees, which are reflected in the water and appear greener; The white clouds in the sky are reflected in the water and appear whiter. We walked by the lake and enjoyed the quiet and beautiful lakes and mountains. I also asked my father to take some pictures for me.
We went to the Peach Blossom Garden. Ah, so many peach blossoms, it's really the world of peach blossoms. Every flower has a pink smiling face, laughing and shaking in the breeze. The faint fragrance of flowers attracted a group of bees and butterflies. They danced among the flowers, flying and falling. It was really beautiful. We lingered under the peach trees, and laughter floated in the peach garden.
We went to Baizhu Garden. Needless to say, this is the world of bamboo. Tall, short, thick, thin and densely connected. There are Guanyin bamboo, Buddha's belly bamboo and green bamboo in the golden room. Square bamboo is a specialty of Xiqiao Mountain, and its square body is really different.
We also visited Wuyejing, Nanhai Guanyin and other scenic spots. Every place was so beautiful.
Xiqiao Mountain is really a beautiful place.
(This article is written in the order of place transfer. ) Composition 7: "The Water of Xiqiao Mountain" 6 words
The water of Xiqiao Mountain
There are two firewood mountains in southern Guangdong, which is a 5A-level scenic spot in the country, in the west of Guangdong Province. The scenery there is beautiful and magical, especially those water sources, which are very beautiful.
Let's say "Flying thousands of feet". In front of a steep mountain peak, a huge stream of water rushes down. From a distance, it looks like a giant curtain fluttering. Close-up, the water splashed on the rocks immediately jumped up countless pearls, and the fog in the air formed colorful rainbows. The rumble of water is endless. No less than the feeling of "flying down three thousands of feet, suspecting that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days". Surrounded by mountains, there is a spring water, which is the famous Tianhu Lake. Tianhu is round, just like a bright mirror, reflecting the blue sky, white clouds and weeping willows on the shore of the lake, which is very beautiful. The lake water is clear, and the spinning pebbles at the bottom of the lake are vivid. Several colorful goldfish swam around the lake, which was very interesting. Standing on the top of the lake embankment, a burst of mountain wind came face to face, which really made people feel relaxed and happy, and they forgot all their pet desires.
leafless wells are even more peculiar. Next to a small stream, there is a well built with stones. Not far away, there is a lush camphor tree. The yellow leaves that usually fall down never fall into the well. Even in late autumn, countless dead leaves piled up outside the leafless well, as if unwilling to defile this holy water.
There are many water-related scenic spots on Xiqiao Mountain, such as small lakes closely connected in Baiyun Cave, underground river in Shiyan Rock, and East Lake ... waiting for you to enjoy it carefully!
Comment: The author loves his hometown. While visiting Xiqiao Mountain, he observed the details and described the most common but deepest water, which fully expressed the beauty, beauty and strangeness of the water in Qiaoshan Mountain.
this article has a reasonable layout and clear levels. Sentences are organized in layers and spread out in an orderly way. The words are appropriate, the meaning is clear, and the reader has an immersive feeling when reading aloud. Composition 8: "Night Scene of Xiqiao Mountain" 4 words
Today, the autumn is crisp and with a hint of coolness, and our family drove to Xiqiao Mountain. On the road, the traffic was so busy that people came and went. Of course, the speed of the car naturally slowed down a lot. Although I was a little impatient, I was naturally relaxed because I was almost at Xiqiao Mountain. ? ? This time, we came to Xiqiao Mountain by driving straight, and the road was winding up. After crossing a bay and arriving at another bay, there was a sharp turn, and the climbing angle was large. At first, I was a little worried, and I was slowly attracted by all kinds of trees and flowers on both sides of the mountain road, and I didn't feel worried anymore. When we were preparing to go down Xiqiao Mountain after dinner, we saw the glittering world below from top to bottom. It was really beautiful. I looked to the left of the window and I was attracted by the charming sea of lights. In the distance, it looks like stars, like fishing fire in the river, but it is not exactly like it. It is much denser than fishing fire and uneven. The colors in the sea of lights are goose yellow, white and white.