1. How to write a composition by looking at multiple pictures
When writing a composition by looking at multiple pictures, you must clearly see the changes in the environment, the changes in the characters, the main characters and the minor characters in the consecutive pictures. The relationship between the two pictures must be analyzed, and the internal logical relationship between multiple pictures must be analyzed. For example, "Good Neighbor" *** has four pictures. The first picture: There are several pieces of clothes hanging in a yard, and the clothes are fluttering in the strong wind. The second picture: It is raining heavily, and a boy is taking long steps, running out of the door and rushing to the yard. The third picture: The boy has several clothes on his arms and wrists, and is walking into the house. In the yard, the rain It is still raining heavily. The fourth picture: In a room, a boy is handing over folded clothes to an aunt. These four pictures are obviously in chronological order, showing the development process of one thing. From the middle It can be seen from the two pictures that the plot develops rapidly due to changes in weather. From the first and last pictures, it can be determined that the characters are neighbors. It is guessed that the weather must be good in the morning, and the aunt took the time to wash the clothes and hang them in the yard. Go to work. After considering the whole process, when writing the content of each picture, you should pay attention to the detailed description. The first picture: a clear sky, clean clothes hanging on the rope. The weather suddenly changed and the sky became dark. As we came down, the wind got stronger and stronger. Second picture: It started to rain. Did the raindrops hitting the window make the boy notice the situation in the yard, or did the strong wind remind him? What did he think when he saw the rain? How did he rush into the yard in three steps and two steps at a time? How does he take off his clothes? Detailed descriptions should use continuous verbs to describe the action of taking off clothes: standing on tiptoes, stretching out arms, reaching, picking, and pulling. The rain soaked his hair and poured into his neck. He didn't care whether there was another small piece of clothing. It was hung too high, so he jumped up and pulled it off... These details must be reasonably imagined according to the picture and combined with our actual living conditions. The third picture: The boy returned with wet clothes House. We can imagine that maybe he hung all the clothes to dry in the house; maybe he washed the rain-soaked clothes again with clean water, dried them in the washing machine and then hung them in the house. The fourth picture: looking at From the actions of the two people in the picture, we can imagine that the aunt must be praising and thanking the boy. Is the child saying: "You're welcome, we are all good neighbors?" In short, pay attention to the pictures when looking at multiple pictures. Changes, connections between each picture, association while looking, and attention to details. Only in this way can the composition be flesh-and-blood, vivid and touching. 2. Look at the pictures and write an essay (300 words)
Mother’s love is like the warm wind of spring, blowing your heart; maternal love is like continuous drizzle, gently patting your face and moisturizing your body. In my heart; maternal love is like a furnace in winter, giving you sunshine that warms your heart in the harsh winter.
I remember when I was young, one winter, the weather was very cold. My father was on a business trip, and my mother had to take care of both the store's business and me.
However, my mother didn’t let me go out to play and told me to stay at home for fear of catching a cold. But being disobedient, I sneaked out while my mother was busy. As a result, in the early hours of the night, I developed a high fever. My mother was frightened. You said that my father was not here, and it was only me and my mother, and we encountered this. What should I do? My mother immediately carried me to the hospital.
It was pitch dark on the road. I was so frightened that I called my mother. My mother said: "Lulu, don't be afraid, lie on your mother's back and we will be there."
When I arrived at the emergency room of the hospital, I met the doctor. The doctor took my temperature and saw that the fever was 41 degrees Celsius. The doctor said to my mother, "How did you become such a mother? How come your child has such a fever?" "I just sent him here? I need to be hospitalized. Go and go through the hospitalization procedures!" Mom just said silently: "Yes."
But maternal love can be harsh when it comes to my studies. Relax. It was in the first semester of fifth grade, and I scored 76 on the English test.
When I handed the paper to my mother uneasily, and when my mother saw the score, she walked to the bedroom alone without saying a word to me, and closed the door with a "squeak" sound.
I couldn't bear it anymore, so I walked into the bedroom, stood in front of my mother crying and said, "Mom, please hit me! Please hit me! I am disobedient, and I will study hard in the future."
Mom said with tears in her eyes: "Lulu, Mom won't beat you, but you have to remember that if you want to get ahead in the future and be a person who contributes to the country, you must be down-to-earth and take one step at a time. Start now and study hard! "Mother's love is the greatest kind of love. Children are flowers and plants watered by their mother's love. The growth of children cannot be separated from every drop of mother's love.
Mothers protect their children throughout their lives and silently guide their children’s direction behind their backs. Is our mother's love for us something we can repay in return? Just like: "Whoever speaks an inch of grass will be rewarded with three rays of spring light."
Great maternal love As the saying goes, "The thread in the hands of a loving mother is the clothes on the body of a wanderer..." Maternal love is great. From the moment you were born, God sent you an angel who will always be by your side. Her name is mom.
When I was in the first grade, my father worked out of town and my mother worked as a class teacher in a middle school. She was busy with her work and often came home very late. But her love for me has not diminished at all.
I remember it was a night when "silver beans" fell from the sky. I had a cold and was recuperating at home. My mother was still giving lectures to the students in the classroom, but at this moment, I suddenly developed a high fever and my forehead was extremely hot.
And my mother just dragged her tired body back home. When she saw that I had a high fever, she quickly picked me up and rushed out. There was not a single pedestrian on the street, not a car, only my mother’s thin body. The figure shuttles in the rain. A gust of cold wind blew and I sneezed. My mother seemed to notice something.
She took me in her arms and wrapped me in her furry coat. Then, he ran to the hospital as fast as flying.
When I arrived at the hospital, my mother didn’t even take a breath, she held me in her arms to register, give me injections, and give me infusions. I kept crying during the injection, so my mother held my hand, leaned into my ear and whispered to me: "My dear daughter, stop crying, my mother will always be by your side."
At that time, after hearing this sentence, my body seemed to be filled with power. During the infusion, my mother stayed with me day and night.
When I was hungry, she fed me. When I wanted to sleep, she told me stories. I lost for two days and two nights in one day, so my mother stayed with me for two days and two nights.
My illness has healed and I have gained weight, but my mother’s eyes have become red and have dark circles, and she has also lost a lot of weight. I will definitely study hard in the future and repay my mother with excellent results.
Fatherly love is like a mountain. My father seems to be a dull person. He is usually unsmiling and serious. In my memory, he seems to have never hugged me or said a warm word to me. As time went by, I thought my father didn't like me at all. Every time I saw him, I felt a little inexplicable "fear". Perhaps seeing the development of our father-son relationship, my mother told me a few things, which opened the floodgates of my memory.
My mother told me that when I was born, my mother was in the operating room and my father was waiting anxiously outside the door and kept walking around. When he learned that mother and son were safe, he was happy I jumped up and quickly bought some candies and melon seeds and gave them to everyone I met. Dad couldn't control his emotions. He walked into the corridor countless times and let his tears of happiness flow.
And when I was six or seven years old, one night, my mother was working the night shift, and my father took me to play in the newly built stadium. At that time, the lights in the square had not been installed yet, but people who came to exercise But there were so many. As soon as I arrived at the edge of the stadium, I rushed into the sea of ??people like an arrow. My father called me from behind. I pretended not to hear him, fearing that he would restrict my freedom. After I played to my heart's content for a while, I realized that my dad was not with me. I suddenly felt a little scared. I knew that the trouble was serious and I was worried about bad guys. I didn't dare to call dad, so I suppressed the fear and groped back. When I got home, my father hadn't come back yet, and I knew that my father must be looking for me everywhere, so I sat in a dark corner of the building.
I don’t know how much time passed before I saw my father limping over with his shoes in hand, his face full of anxiety. I thought: This time my grumpy father will definitely beat me hard. . After my father saw me, he gently picked me up and said to me in a hoarse voice: "Don't run so fast when you go out to play again. When adults call you, you must agree immediately. Do you understand?" I nodded. Head, when my father put me down, I discovered that there was a lot of blood on my father's feet. I knew that in order to find me, my father dragged his injured leg for an unknown distance and even bruised his feet.
Now that I think about it and experience it carefully, I realize that my father also loves me deeply, but he just keeps his love deep in his heart. Father's love is like a mountain. My father's love makes me strong and grows with me.
Father's love is like a mountain. I have wanted to write an article for my father for a long time, but I have never started writing it. 3. Composition based on pictures
Guidance on writing composition based on pictures
1. Observe the picture and prioritize.
The key to looking at pictures and composing is to observe the picture. Only by mastering the correct observation method can we accurately understand the meaning of the picture. Each picture is integrated with the author's creative intention. Composition, like composition, must There is a distinction between primary and secondary. Therefore, when observing a picture, you should first distinguish which is the subject, which is the background and accompanying, and you must also understand the inner connection between the scenes on the picture, so that you can accurately grasp the center.
2. Expand imagination and enrich content.
What is shown on the picture is often a "momentary" scene. Therefore, if you are limited to the picture when looking at pictures and composing, your ideas will be restricted. You should expand the scene of the moment, think about the antecedents, and see the situation. As a result, necessary content outside the picture is added in, so as to make the meaning of the picture more complete, and to make static people and objects come alive and make them full of vitality.
3. Grasp the key points and formulate a reasonable idea.
When looking at pictures and composing, after observing the pictures and imagining them reasonably, the main picture and the associations generated by the main picture should be written in detail. The background and foil in the picture should grasp their inner connection with the main picture. Describe and highlight the subject. Only in this way can the articles written in this way have clear priorities and highlighted key points. In addition, when composing, you should pay attention to highlighting the key points and clear priorities while organizing the materials in a certain order. If the picture is not accompanied by a text introduction, then the time can be determined according to the content of the picture. , location, and you can name the characters in the picture yourself. Make the meaning coherent and the language fluent.
In the picture composition, we have grasped these points, which is very helpful to improve our picture composition ability.
Look at pictures and write essays
Look at pictures and write essays, as the name suggests, is to look at pictures or photos to write articles. In order for the article to accurately reflect the meaning of the picture, seeing the picture clearly cannot be ignored. To be able to see the picture clearly, first, take a comprehensive view, see the whole picture, and observe in a step-by-step manner. The second is to observe the background and characters. For example, what does the background of the picture reflect, how do the close-up and distant views work together, and how do they relate to the characters in the picture? There are also the characters’ bodies, ages, activities, etc. The third is to observe details. (Such as character expressions, clothing, utensils, etc.). Why is Leonardo da Vinci's "The Last Supper" so famous? In addition to the moving scene of Jesus and his 12 disciples having the Last Supper together, which constitutes the overall beauty of the picture, I am afraid that the details of this painting are particularly touching, especially the facial details of the traitor Judas who betrayed Jesus. It has to be expressive. This is true for painting, and it is also true for looking at pictures and writing. The most important thing is to be good at seeing the details on the picture and think about the author's purpose of painting these details. The fourth is to understand the author's creative intention. Only by grasping the theme of a painting accurately can you write a good composition by looking at the pictures.
In this way, we must carefully understand the author's creative intention: What does he (she) advocate in the painting and what does he/she oppose? What to praise and what to criticize? What is he trying to explain? How do you dissolve your own intentions into the painting?
What pictures depict are only "momentary" scenes in life. When you look at pictures and write essays, you need to develop reasonable imagination, derive dynamics from static, write the process from "moments", and make the pictures move and make people feel happy. When the people in the painting move, the objects in the painting also move. How to develop reasonable imagination when looking at pictures and writing essays?
To develop reasonable imagination when looking at pictures and writing essays, you can use the method of "looking forward and backward" to think about what the scene composed of this picture was like before and what it will be like after; the people in the picture were doing something before What will you do next? It would be unreasonable to think about it regardless of the content of the picture. Reasonable imagination should be boldly combined with the reality of your own life and put yourself into it. If you were the person in the painting, what would you do and think at this moment? Doing this will enrich the content of the screen.
Pictures, like articles, also have primary and secondary content. Generally speaking, it is the main and prominent position in the picture. It is the main content and is the key point; while what is in a non-main or non-prominent position is secondary content. When you look at pictures and write essays, you need to grasp the key points, write the key points in detail and be specific, so as to show the meaning of the picture. Grasping the key points does not mean that you should not write about non-main content on the screen. Focusing on the key points and selectively describing the non-main content on the picture can play the role of green leaves supporting red flowers.
For picture composition, in addition to single pictures, there are also two, three or even more pictures provided. When writing a picture composition with multiple pictures, you must grasp the connection between the pictures and connect the meanings of the pictures to form a whole. This is like a bicycle. It cannot rotate with just two wheels. Only by installing a chain and pedals can the wheels be connected. Once you step on it, the rear wheel rotates and drives the front wheel, and the bicycle moves forward. The pedals and chain are the connection between the bicycle wheels. So, where are the "chains" and "steps" between multiple pictures? Finding it is actually not difficult. The key is to understand the meaning of each picture and connect the meanings of each picture to form a complete story.
4. How to write a picture-based composition
Picture-based compositions include single pictures and multiple pictures, but looking at them is the prerequisite for writing. When looking at pictures, you should think about them in order, or from top to bottom, From bottom to top; or from far to near, from near to far; or from the middle to the surroundings; or from people to scenery, and from scenery to people. Think about what is painted in the picture, and what effect does it have on the picture? First have a general understanding of the main content of the expression. Then look closely at the picture to understand the environment and location where the event occurred. From the scenery and the characters' clothing, you can also analyze the time when the event occurred. Look carefully at the characters' clothing and body shape, and think about it. Think about the characters’ identities, ages and occupations; look carefully at the characters’ movements and think about what they are doing and how they are doing them; look closely at the characters’ expressions and think about their thoughts and feelings. Then think about what the whole picture illustrates. What is the problem, what is the author's purpose of drawing this picture? Finally, write an outline according to the picture. A single narrative picture only shows part of one thing. In addition to the methods mentioned above, we also You must learn to imagine what it was like before and what changes will happen in the future from the content of a picture. Pay attention to writing the beginning and end. If there are multiple pictures, pay attention to the connection between the pictures. Focus on observing the previous one. Things that do not appear in the picture, such as what new characters have appeared, what changes have occurred in the location, etc. Even if it is the same picture, pay special attention to the subtle changes in the picture, such as the movements and expressions of the characters, changes in the weather, etc., so as to understand The development and changes of things. After reading each picture one by one, read it again in a coherent manner so that the occurrence, development process and results of the things on the picture can leave a complete impression in your mind, and then follow the main meaning of each picture. Make an outline, highlight the key points, pay attention to details, and do not use equal effort on each picture. The narrative description of each picture should be coherent and connected with each other, and do not become an explanation of the picture. The picture when looking at the pictures and writing the words is static. , and relatively monotonous, we need to make the static pictures move and enrich the monotonous pictures through careful observation and reasonable imagination, such as making the characters speak, carrying out psychological activities, making the scenery colorful, etc. How to write words by looking at pictures , can be briefly summarized in twelve words: sequential observation, trying to express, and reasonable imagination. 5. How to write a "picture composition" with multiple pictures
1. Observe and analyze pictures
When writing a picture composition, the picture is the basis of the composition, so first of all, the picture should be See the content clearly. Who is painted on the picture, what time, where, and what the relationship between the characters is, must be clear, and no detail can be missed. The method of observation is generally from top to bottom or from left to right, from people to objects or from scenery to people. Only when observations are orderly can the written articles be organized; only by careful observation can vivid plots and touching details be discovered; only by comprehensive observations can the written articles be complete; only by distinguishing priorities can the written articles be focused and detailed. . Especially for compositions with multiple pictures, you need to see the order of the pictures clearly and understand the direct relationship between each picture. Only in this way can you lay a solid foundation for further conceiving and writing.
When looking at pictures and composing, the meaning of the painting is the direction of thinking. Only when the meaning of the painting is accurately grasped can the ideas be different. What should be paid attention to when looking at pictures and composing. The design and layout of each painting has a certain purpose. After we observe the painting, we must also carefully think about the central idea reflected in the painting. To infer the central idea of ??the picture, you should start from three aspects: first, look at the title of the picture, and some titles are the theme of the picture; second, look at the text description of the picture; third, look at the people and things described in the picture. Analyze its relationship. Only by grasping the center can the written article meet the requirements of picture composition.
2. Develop reasonable imagination
Imagination is the core of picture composition, and this imagination should be closely centered on the meaning of the picture. We need to use our brains and develop reasonable imagination to make the static characters and scenes in the picture "alive". We can conceive of the plot based on the facts of life and our own experience, we can imagine ourselves as the protagonist in the painting, and we can arrange the scenes in the painting into real life. Therefore, the characters on the screen not only have appearance and expression, but also movements, language, and psychological activities, so that the scenery on the screen has color and sound. Appropriate names can also be assigned to the characters as needed to enhance the vividness of the article. .
3. Point selection, conception, and writing
Point selection means choosing an angle. After reviewing the topic and looking at the painting, you should then determine the focus of your thinking based on the meaning of the painting. The point selection must be accurate and cannot deviate from the meaning of the painting. It is best to choose only one point. Being comprehensive may sometimes affect the writing. The idea is to establish the central idea and formulate the topic. Because the focus (angle) is different, the idea will not be exactly the same, but no matter what kind of central content you choose to write, you cannot leave the basic meaning of the picture, and it must be in line with the main purpose of the picture. Writing according to intention means that you should conceive, plan and write according to the title and picture. When you start writing, you must connect with the picture and deepen the topic. It is necessary to avoid straying from the picture and going far away from the topic, and it is also necessary to avoid describing pictures without imagination. The reasoning should be concentrated and reasonable, and should not be broad and scattered. We should also avoid being restricted by the picture, which will prevent the development of ideas.
In addition, the language of the picture composition should be lively and lively. Various expression methods such as narrative, description, lyricism, discussion, explanation, etc. can be used to connect the people, objects, and scenery in the picture into a whole. Become a good article with a complete structure, accurate and vivid language, and a prominent center.
We can take a look at the picture compositions of the two young authors below. If you are interested, you can also give it a try based on the drawings. 6. Write an essay around a picture
"Click", one of my favorite photos was born in my mother's camera in an instant.
Whenever I look at When I see it, I will remember the time when I went to Qiandao Lake with my parents. Look, in the photo, I am smiling, my eyes are narrowed, and a small dimple appears on my cheek.
I was wearing a black T-shirt and a pair of jeans, with a big fish-shaped lock on my back. How handsome it looked! Behind me was a dense grove with tall and tall trees and green trees. The scenery of grass, light yellow flowers and low bushes is so beautiful! Looking at this photo, the floodgates of my memory opened automatically. That day, the sun was shining and there was no cloud in the sky. Our family came with the school tour group. Qiandao Lake.
There are beautiful mountains and clear waters, singing birds and fragrant flowers, and there are many small islands. When we came to the "Lock Island", we saw countless small "linked locks".
People wrote messages on the lock, expressing their good feelings.
Wow! There is a big lock here! Although the appearance of this lock is very similar to our common locks. But it's extremely huge - hundreds of times larger than an ordinary lock! As the tour guide introduced it, he pointed to a key not far away and said, whoever can turn it can open the lock. Curiosity aroused, we walked to the big key, lifted it up with difficulty, and actually opened the huge lock. We all cheered... We walked for a while, and suddenly, a huge lock appeared on the side of the road. The stone carp! When I looked carefully, it turned out to be a big carp-shaped lock! I fell in love with it as soon as I saw it, and I hurriedly pestered my mother and asked her to take a "photo" of me and the "big carp". /p>
This is my favorite photo, and I will treasure it forever in my memory. 7. Please write a picture essay
I am writing in a comic book. I have read a cartoon like this in a book: In a big forest, a man holds a cigarette in his mouth and chops down big trees with a sharp axe, and the big trees are also crying.
A woodpecker stopped. The woodpecker looked at the man's head and said, "There must be worms in this piece of wood." "I don't know if you understand the meaning of this cartoon. There is indeed a "worm" in that man's head, but this worm is not that worm. This "worm" refers to that man's heart worm that destroys the ecological balance. No wonder the woodpecker said that he "There are worms in the head", but in our daily life and in the world, there are countless people with such "worms in the head", but there are only a few woodpeckers.
Usually, many students only make a few strokes on their scratch paper and then throw it into the trash can. You must know that these papers are like trees.
When washing hands, the water Turn it on quite loudly, not to mention, after washing your hands, I left without turning off the water, letting the water flow. You must know how precious water is in arid areas; usually, throwing garbage on the ground casually, both It affects the environment and affects the appearance. . You know, our earth has been greatly damaged now, but those "worm-brained" people have not woken up at all. They destroy the environment for their own interests: deforestation and destruction of vegetation; they use sewage for convenience. It is discharged into rivers, and countless rivers are undrinkable as a result. Our mother river, the Yellow River, has become turbid; the beautiful scenery of Chengdu, the former land of abundance, no longer exists, and the land is heading towards desertification; air pollution is also becoming more and more The worse it is, there is acid rain almost everywhere. . Before such a shocking thing, human beings seemed not to wake up, and the greedy bug in people's heads was getting bigger and bigger, and people were blinded by desire. Ever since they touched the footprints of humans, animals have never had peace. The Tibetan antelope, which used to be docile and comfortable, is exhausted from trying to avoid human pursuit; the whales that used to dominate the ocean are on the verge of extinction. . I don’t know
How many creatures have become extinct under the hands of the greedy bugs in the human brain, and have disappeared in the long river of history.
Now we must protect our beautiful earth, because saving the earth is saving the future, and the first thing we
should do is to kill the greedy bug in our minds, Classmates, please illuminate your inner mirror
: "Do you still have worms in your brain?" 8. Look at pictures and write essays
For primary school students, write and read What are the benefits of picture composition? 1. It can improve our observation ability.
When writing a picture composition, before writing, you must first observe the picture in front of you, so that you can write the article. How to observe? What to observe first? What to observe afterwards? What are the main observations? Which ones are secondary? In this way, after long-term training in looking at pictures and writing, the observation ability can be exercised and improved.
2. It can unleash our imagination. When we look at pictures and write essays, we are not just like a camera that captures the content of the picture without moving. We need to make it an article with a center, organization, specific content, and complete structure, so that the characters in the picture come alive and the people in the picture come alive. The story has a beginning and an end, and must be told through association and imagination.
Picture composition is the basis of proposition composition. It is a comprehensive training of observation, thinking and expression skills. It occupies a very important position in composition training in primary schools. In some provinces, cities, districts and counties, the form of picture composition often appears in the primary school graduation examination, and even in the high school entrance examination and college entrance examination.
Therefore, it is very important to train students to read pictures and write well from elementary school. There are two types of picture compositions: single picture composition and connected picture composition.
Single-picture composition requires expressing around the center of the picture and writing the content of the picture accurately and hierarchically. Picture-based composition requires first understanding the content of each picture and studying the connection between pictures. and changes, and then grasp the main content expressed by these pictures as a whole. Look at pictures and write essays based on the way of expression.
It can be divided into narrative, descriptive, explanatory and rational categories. In the primary school stage, narrative picture composition is mainly trained, but descriptive, illustrative and simpler rational picture composition cannot be ignored.