In recent years, the composition of fragments has gradually been favored by students. It is typical in material selection and concrete in content, which is beneficial to concentrate pen and ink, reproduce wonderful pictures in many aspects and reflect the theme of life in all directions. If you give these fragments a concise and eye-catching subtitle, the article will be more clear and clear. So, how can we draw up a novel and eye-catching subtitle?
first, a few words, showing the concise beauty of refining.
subheading is a special concise summary form of the article, which needs to be carefully refined after repeated scrutiny. First of all, the subtitle must be concise and grasp the main points of the content, so that readers can get a rough idea of the text at a glance. For example, the article Pursuit refines three antithetical subtitles: cruel reality, strong performance and brilliant touch, and reproduces the bitter course of a blind little girl who is physically disabled and determined, perceives the world with her hands instead of her eyes, and finally succeeds. The concise wording and close deduction are admirable. Secondly, the subtitle must be concise, appropriate and alert, and intriguing. For example, "I am in Grade Three" is a competitive, competitive and joyful "I", and the subtitle only uses two words: "open struggle", "in-fighting" and "having fun together". There is only one word in each episode of "The joys and sorrows brought by modern technology": "Joy" is speeding up the train, making it easy to travel; "Anger" is hateful in the virus, attacking the computer; "Sadness" is obsessed with the game, and his grades are declining; "Joy" is interesting and vivid in audio-visual teaching. Similarly, there are four-word phrases such as "sweet and sour", "spring, summer, autumn and winter" and "rise and fall, honor and disgrace", which are short and powerful. Making full use of them often gives people the beauty of simplicity and conciseness.
second, combine clever quotations and pursue striking novelty.
on the basis of sticking to the main idea, we can also open the wings of imagination, open the treasure house of accumulation, and create a group of novel and clever subtitles by combining clever quotations. You can choose music, such as "Sonata for Dormitory", which is a kind song to enjoy relaxation and peace, an exciting song to listen to the football match, a homesick song after the teacher reprimands you, and a serenade to review your lessons after lights out. What a group of youthful dance music full of vitality and romance! Situations can be used, such as Three Colors in the Dormitory, starting with the atmosphere. The three subheadings of "Red-sleepless night with excitement", "Gray-always helpless" and "Black-in the dead of night" give people an orderly and situational aesthetic feeling. Poems can be quoted, such as "I deeply feel the call of the environment", which describes three fragments: "A faint crow with a withered vine", "A small bridge with flowing water" and "a thin horse with an ancient road and a west wind", respectively revealing "Give the old crow a beautiful lush green!" "Let's clarify the river!" "Return the promised land of the old horse!" These are full of yearning for green, and generate has a far-reaching theme of calling for environmental protection; Cleverly using terms, such as "Math House" describes three interesting things, namely "direct ratio → inverse ratio" between "I" and my father's age and rice bowl, "circular inequality" in which three people in my family restrict each other, and "linear function Y=KX" in which prices rise and shopping increases, which tactfully reveals "metabolism, generation after generation" and "impossible absolute freedom". You can also borrow the original words in the text, clever use of nicknames and other attractive methods to win with novelty and win with beauty.
Third, it has distinct levels, showing internal logic.
Subtitles should also show the internal logical relationship of each part of the article, so that these relatively independent fragments can depend on each other and concentrate on serving the theme. Generally speaking, it can form two kinds of relations: juxtaposition and stratification. Reflect the juxtaposition of all aspects of things at the same level. For example, in the Sonata for Life in Junior One, the three subtitles of "Joke Big Bang", "Football is Crazy" and "Fierce Sprint after School" change the venue, and select a group of detailed and vivid shots from the classroom, the playground and the way home, so that a group of naughty, cute, energetic, intelligent and studious boys can jump to the paper and make people laugh. Another example is the Six Faces Rubik's Cube, which compares the six faces of the Rubik's Cube to six teachers. They are humorous, witty, serious and rigorous, or serious and cheerful. Reading it is as if they are standing in front of you, talking with you and teaching you. In the article Searching for the Lost World, for example, "I" compared with my aspiring sister in the spring of meditation, "vaguely realized that I had lost something": I was ashamed to pick up nickels in the scorching summer, "my face was very hot", but I didn't know what I had lost: I cheated in the autumn of anguish. The four broken sentences are constantly broken and advanced step by step, which lays a good foundation for pointing out the main idea at the end. Of course, students who are good at conception can also skillfully use creative methods such as step by step, suspense and playing hard to get. In a word, readers should be moved at the sight of the subtitle, and they can't put it down.
in addition, what other topics should a good composition pay attention to?
First, pay attention to formal beauty
Formal beauty is the most intuitive beauty, and a topic that is unconventional in form is the first condition to attract attention. Therefore, we must pay attention to the following points when drafting the topic for the composition:
1. Beautiful posture:
That is, we should pay attention to the beauty of the topic when drafting the topic, like a beautiful girl standing in public, giving people a brand-new feeling of "where, before me, are the ages that have gone?".
① Use a space or a connection number in the topic: for example, Mother? Black land? Little Stone Mill, Inferiority? Conceit? Self-improvement, Whip of God-Motherly Love, Opponent-Model, etc.
② Use foreign fonts in the topics, such as "From Made in China" and "Kara is OK forever".
③ Use antithetical sentences in the topic: for example, "Be determined to speak first, cultivate one's morality first" and so on.
④ Borrow news headlines: For example, some topics are like news topics, with a leading topic before the topic and a subtitle after it.
⑤ use mathematical formulas in the topic: for example, "1+1 >; 2”》、《“7—1=”》、《“1> 6 ",etc., abstract from the simple in the form of equality or inequality, and receive a special expression effect that is difficult to achieve in pure language.
⑥ using blank space: that is, leaving artistic blank for readers to think about and fill. For example, with your gentle flattery and back ...-A letter to Comrade Ah Q, the blank in it is hidden from view, but readers can grasp the main idea with a knowing smile according to the meaning.
2. Lively image:
If beautiful posture only reflects the "figure" of the topic, then lively image reflects the temperament and character of the topic. Just like a person, with a good personality and elegant temperament, he is often lovable.
lively topics are easy to arouse people's interest, which makes people curiously use figures of speech. For example, using metaphors, Honesty is a Bridge of Communication, Opportunity is a Fish, and Friends are Productive Forces.
Use rhetorical questions such as "Is Honesty Out of Date" and "Why Sell Dog Meat";
Use anthropomorphic "Leave some honesty to keep yourself warm", "A self-report of chalk" and "Sunday's face", etc.
Life's Honesty is Precious with puns, etc.
Use exaggerated spring in a vase, etc.
"Little People" and "Great Truth" by comparison;
The anti-theft door doesn't guard against theft (taking "the door" as the topic) which uses the word to loop back but has the opposite meaning.
② Apply, process or transform idioms, poems, two-part allegorical sayings, article titles, film titles and songs. For example, using idioms and homophonic "chess" as the topic, "Happy in Chess" and so on;
Transform idioms such as "Escape in the Fog", "Fighting Vaccination" and "The Premise of Thinking of Officials" to satirize the corruption of several leaders in a certain unit.
Transform the two-part allegorical saying "Innocence" as the topic of "Onion Mixed with Tofu-One Clear and Two White", etc.
The poem "Honesty" as the topic, "If you die, honesty can't be thrown away", etc.
I'm honest, I'm beautiful, and the song of the greedy palace, which takes honesty as the topic;
"Honesty to Cultivate Morality, Faith to Cultivate Self-cultivation" (Zhuge Liang has a famous saying "Quiet to Cultivate Morality, Body to Cultivate Self-cultivation"), etc.;
On the Surprise of My Nation, which imitates the title of the article.
(3) Ironic "Wrong Lecture Notes", "Tofu Maker" and "Contractor", etc.
3. Rich literary talent:
"Words without words are not far away." Articles with strong literary color are often regarded as fine works and favored by people, and the topics with strong literary talent are even more intriguing and charming.
① With the help of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign poems, famous sentences, lyrics, beautiful loose sentences, etc., they are quoted, applied or transformed. For example, the words from Su Shi's Shuidiao Song Tou with the topic of "Moon" are entitled "Children * * * Chanjuan", and the words from Li Yu's Yu Meiren with the topic of "Building" are entitled "Small Building with Spring Breeze Last Night", as well as "Little Lotus Showing its Sharp Corner" and "A Spring River Flowing East". Color advertising color style, etc.
② Use various figures of speech. For example, use the dual "Mavericks Upside the Clippers, Wizards Cover the Sun" and "Being close to life is very commendable, and efforts must be made to improve quality".
It can be seen that such topics not only have a certain literary color, but also leave room for aftertaste.
Second, the skill of writing questions
As the saying goes, "The Buddha depends on gold, and the man depends on clothes", and the composition also depends on the title. This is an era that attaches importance to packaging, like a wonderful book with a good cover, and high-quality products with exquisite packaging. A good title can get a fascinating and voice-grabbing effect, so students should not take it for granted. In recent years, college entrance examination proposers have always provided materials and put forward a topic for candidates to write their own compositions based on the materials, which not only examines the students' ability to choose the angle to establish the center, but also examines the students' general expression ability.
(1) Requirements for the proposed topic of the composition:
1. The scope of the title should be as small as possible, and it should not be too big and too broad from the perspective of its own establishment; Be reasonable and innovative, not conventional. If the title is too big, it can be limited by subtitle.
2. The title can't be too long. If the title is too long, it will be loose.
3. The title should be implicit, and the thinking should be contained in the title of the image. Implication can play an endless role and deepen the impression and experience of the marking teacher on the content of the article.
4. Draw up a good topic, interpret the topic into a vivid story, and express a novel and unique idea with the story [you can imagine it appropriately, but you should link it with real life ].
5. Be good at association when drawing up the topic. Association is the thinking process in which someone deduces something or something from others, other things or other things related to it. There are three main ways of association:
[1] related association, from table to chair [spatial association ].
[2] similar association, from silkworm to teacher [similar dedication ].
[3] contrary association, from happiness to hardship [essentially opposite]
In short, association should be rich and integrated.
(2) The principle of writing a topic:
1. Clever: The topic of the composition is closely related to the idea and conception angle of the article, which complement each other. Clever ideas and clever ideas will draw up clever topics, and vice versa. The so-called "half the essay is well written" means this. For example, in the composition of the college entrance examination in 2, a candidate wrote "A flower is a world", and a flower is a world. There are countless flowers in the world, and there are ambiguous \ \ \ \ \ "World \ \ \ \". How can the answer be one? It is both relevant and informative, giving people a wide imagination.
2. Qiao: The topic is like the packaging of goods. Unique packaging will win the favor of customers. Similarly, unexpected topics will make people fall in love at first sight. The topic is novel and unique, which will have a strong attraction.
For example, in the composition of the national college entrance examination in 1995, one examinee proposed the following topic: "You accuse him+he accuses me+I accuse you = you can't treat others correctly".
For another example, someone told a story: "Once upon a time, there were two brothers sleeping under a mosquito net, sleeping at both ends. There were mosquitoes in the tent, and no one was too lazy to rush. The two brothers were bitten by mosquitoes and couldn't sleep, so they used the cattail fan prepared by their mother to drive away only the mosquitoes at their own end. Come and go, mosquitoes still bite in the tent. \ \ \ \ \ "If you write an argumentative essay with this story as the theme, you can draw up the following topics from these angles:
From the point of view that the two brothers only care about their own head and ignore each other's head, you can draw up-"Care for others "and" Don't take the lead for a living ".
since the two brothers didn't join forces to fight mosquitoes, they can draw up "Qi Xin works together to eliminate mosquito infestation" and "Separate teams, the consequences are unbearable".
Since neither of the brothers has completely driven mosquitoes out of the account and only cares about the moment of peace, they can draw up "Look farther" and "Stop being short-sighted!
from the consequences of the two brothers driving out mosquitoes, it can be drawn up that selfishness will eventually harm themselves.
Since their mother has prepared a cattail leaf fan for them, but they can't get rid of mosquitoes, we can draw up "Teenagers should cultivate their ability to live independently".
The above topics are drawn up from different angles of discussion, and they are more relevant. But to mark new ideas, these topics are really lacking, which requires repeated thinking and careful consideration. If we think about it this way, the two brothers have no result in driving mosquitoes. This is not 1+1 = 2 in mathematics, but 1+1 = in actual effect. Therefore, it is even more interesting to draw up the title "1+1 = ".
(3) Method of writing a topic:
1. Be original
We in China have attached importance to names since ancient times. "The emperor has given me a good name for my spare time." When we write an article, we should also give it a "good name". People usually read the title of the article before reading the text. The title of the article is not good, which makes people feel disgusted, so people stop reading the text; The general title of the article does not attract people's interest. It is very wrong for readers to lose interest in reading because of the bad title.
Curiosity is people's psychological characteristics. The content of the article is new, and the title of the article should be new. Therefore, being unconventional should be used as an idea to draw up the title of the article.
A female classmate wrote a very good article for a Chinese newspaper. The content was that she went to the tap to get water, and there were many people waiting to get water, so she put her bucket in front. A little girl who went to kindergarten "had a penguin-like breast" criticized her, and when she was embarrassed, the little girl said, "Big Sister, if you have something urgent, you should take the water first, and I will go to your original place." Originally an interesting article, she used "a little thing" as the title, and the editor changed it to "Little Girl Educates Big Girl", which added a lot of color to the article.
2. We often have this experience in our daily life: