When I first read this article, I didn't think it was any different, but I thought it was very good. However, after studying the textbook, appreciating it carefully and taking this class, I think this article is really well written, and this kind of love is really fierce. Every word, every word!
At the beginning of writing, the author said that "Egret is an exquisite poem" and compared it to a poem. We know that poetry is beautiful in language, form, rhythm, artistic conception and emotion ... it is short and pithy, with endless implications! Then why does the author compare it to an exquisite poem? The full text is answering this question. Paragraphs 2 to 8 are all about its beauty and can be divided into two layers. Paragraphs 2 to 5 are the first layer to write about its beautiful appearance, and paragraphs 6 to 8 are the second layer to write about the beauty of egrets in different scenes. Obviously, in the author's eyes, he likes the egret very much and thinks it is as beautiful and exquisite as poetry.
So in the second paragraph, he said, "The combination of pigments and the size of graphics are appropriate." What is beauty? Beauty is appropriate, that is, it is appropriate and appropriate. In order to further illustrate, the author compares it with crane, ibis and heron in the third paragraph, which shows that the size of egret is appropriate and exquisite, highlighting his preference for egret, saying that "the crane is too big and a little stiff, and ibis is a little big and unusual." Next, I wrote in detail about the pigment of egrets and whether their bodies are suitable. He said: "Snow-white fur, streamlined structure of the whole body, long iron beak, blue feet, one point longer, one point shorter, one element too white, one element too black." It is too big to say that the egret is bigger, and too small to say that it is smaller. The white color of egrets is too white, and the dark color is a little black. It means that in his eyes, the egret is the most beautiful, with just the right color and size and just the right beauty. This sentence is quoted from Song Yu's description of the son of the landlord in "The Disciple", saying, "The son of the landlord, adding one point is too long, and subtracting one point is too short; The powder is too white and Zhu Shi is too red. " This story is about a disciple who slandered Song Yu in front of King Xiang of Chu, saying that he was handsome and lewd. Song Yu retorted that there are the most beautiful women in the world, and the most beautiful women in Chu belong to my hometown. In my hometown, this woman next door is the most beautiful. How beautiful is this woman? She said that she was a little taller and a little lower, and her figure was just right. She said that such a beautiful woman wanted to associate with me, and I was not tempted. How can you say I'm horny? ..... The author quotes this sentence to write an egret, which shows its beauty and love.
Then paragraphs 6 to 8 describe the beauty of egrets in different scenes, the beauty of language and the beauty of environment, which is even more picturesque. The sixth paragraph is about egrets foraging, but the author doesn't write it like this. It's too vulgar. He said, "In a clear water field, sometimes there are two egrets standing fishing, and the whole field becomes a picture embedded in a glass frame. The size of the venue seems to be a dressing box designed for egrets. " When talking about this paragraph, I asked the children, what kind of pictures come to your mind at the moment, and what do you seem to see? The child said, I seem to see an egret standing in a paddy field fishing ... Can you expand it and describe it more specifically? Pieces of rice fields are clear and clean, like a painting. Egrets stand among them, which is the finishing touch. It's leisurely, waiting for the fish to bite ... please give this painting a name. Did the child say "Egret Fishing Map" and "Fishing"? Not beautiful enough, not too leisurely, can you change the word? Children immediately said "egret fishing map", and some children said "fishing in rice fields" and explained the reasons.
? In paragraph 7, the author writes, "On a sunny morning, I often see it standing alone on the top of a small tree, seemingly unstable, but actually very leisurely. This is a hobby that other birds can hardly express. People say it's a lookout, but is it really a lookout? " The children began to imagine pictures and gave them names, such as "Lonely Heron Habitat Map", "Egret Ornamental Map" and "Top Station Map", and gave their own reasons. Which do you think is better? Do you think it's on sentry duty? What do you mean by lookout? Some students said, I don't think so. I think the egret is standing alone at the top of the tree at this time, as if watching the distant scenery. Some people say it seems to be waiting for its friends to come back, others say it's thinking about its relatives and where it's going ... I say it's isolated on the top of a small tree, very carefree, and I regard it as a hobby! Birds like to live in groups. Is this egret the same as other birds? Obviously, it is lonely, elegant and reserved, elegant and refined, which is why the author likes it.
In the eighth paragraph, the author says, "The egrets that occasionally fly low in the evening sky are the gospel of rural life. It is clear and vivid, and it has life. " A child said that he seemed to see the sunset, an egret flying low in the field, and the afterglow of the sunset hit him, adding color, vitality and enjoyment to the village, which was a gospel for rural life. Then why is it clear visualization? What do you mean, be clear? Clear and clear. Here, it is said to be pure and beautiful, giving people a feeling of purity and tranquility.
In order to express the author's love for egrets more deeply, the author finally said: "Some people may think that egrets can't sing. But isn't the egret itself a beautiful song? No, this song is too loud. Egret is really a poem, a prose poem that rhymes in the bones. "
This writing is more brilliant. First, deny others' view that egrets are "a fly in the ointment", and then deny their own praise. "Song" is not enough to explain the beauty of egrets, giving people a loud feeling. It is more appropriate to compare it to poetry, because it is as exquisite and charming as poetry. So the author says that Egret is really a poem, a prose poem with rhyme in its bones. Take care of the beginning, affirm your feelings, and strongly express your love for egrets with the word "reality".
The whole article revolves around "Egrets are Poems". Write the beauty of Egrets' appearance by comparison, personification, quotation and parallelism, then write the beauty of Egrets in different situations in poetic language, and finally emphasize it to further sublimate your feelings!
To understand the writing intention of the article, there are only two big problems that run through the classroom. The first question is, where do you feel that egret is an exquisite poem? This question is the overall perception of the beauty of egrets and the author's love for it. The second question, "paragraphs 6-8 depict three beautiful pictures and give each picture a name", is to understand the posture of the egret in different situations and the enjoyment it brings, which is as beautiful as poetry. This question is very good, because it is about egrets foraging, perching and flying, but the author describes it picturesque, creating three different scenes for us, which makes us have rich associations, makes the image of egrets more deified, brings endless imagination, and shows the author's appreciation, which shows that he has carefully observed egrets and understood their different modality in different periods, showing his deep affection!