Composition: What is ignored is the most important (high score!!!)

A letter home

The moon has risen, but the sky is not clear. The tragic moonlight illuminated the messy Tangshan City, and the misty sky was still filled with the horror of the earthquake.

There was a light on in Room 2 of the Eighth Ambulance Medical Team, and nurse Gao Jie was lying beside the bed writing a letter home.

Yang Chen: I am writing to you in the lounge of the medical team. There is no normal electricity here. I feel more moody in the candlelight. It has been seven days since we

arrived in the earthquake-stricken area that day. It was not until tonight that some of the medical staff took a break. Most of us had been fighting continuously for days and nights.

We could only operate during the operation. Drink a glass of water and chew some biscuits in between. At this time, snoring could be heard in the lounge, and they slept soundly.

The wind is blowing and the tent is squirming. Little Danxi turned over and fell asleep again. Gao Jie covered her with the quilt.

There is something special that I want to tell you. Three days ago in the morning, a man hurriedly picked up a little girl under one year old and told us with a cry

that the rescuers found a mother and daughter at the corner of a collapsed building. Open the floor, but the injured young mother has passed away

What a long death, the little girl is still in shock. It turns out that the mother cut the blood vessels in her right arm and used warm blood to replace milk, so that her daughter could survive. The little girl's mouth was surrounded by blood stains, her face was pale, and her whole body was cold. The old dean gave the order in a hoarse voice: "All efforts to rescue..." Artificial respiration, fluid infusion, and doctors and nurses took turns holding the little girl in their arms to raise her body temperature. After two hours of first aid and eight hours of first-level care, this fragile life was finally snatched back from the hands of death. One day later, the little girl unexpectedly called "Mom" with her weak milky voice in a hazy state, and everyone present cried. At this time, I seem to believe the 'motto' in your article; the love between mother and child is first of all a kind of nature, it is a biological engineering stored in the body.

The candlelight flickered. Little Danxi's breathing was steady and she sucked her lips vigorously a few times. Maybe she was dreaming about her mother.

From your article, I learned about your happy childhood because you had a kind mother. Life was difficult in the 1960s. My mother ate wild vegetables and stuffed the saved dry food into your schoolbag. How many years has your mother tried so hard to get you to wear a new top on the school stage? You

said that 'love' is always an insoluble bond among human beings.

Now it’s time to show you my cards. I have been nursing this little girl these past few days. She accidentally called "Mom", and I blushed and my heart beat fast, but there was always an uncontrollable impulse that repeatedly knocked on my heart. I wanted her to be our daughter. I have named her 'Danxi' and hope that her

future will be full of sunshine.

Yang Chen, I have reason to believe that you will agree to me, because maternal love has created kindness in your heart through the transmission of related blood.

Remember the day I signed up to join the medical team? The first thing you said on the phone was to postpone the wedding and take me to the airport immediately. On the day when I return, you will definitely come to pick up our mother and daughter.

At this moment, words are flowing from my pen, and my soul is flying in the boundless sunshine...?quot;

Gao Jie looked out the window, and there was a full moon in the sky.

Return to Mother

Cao Jian

Six years ago, the '7·31' air crash occurred in Nanjing. When cleaning up the scene, people found a man named Gong Hongmei's young mother was still holding a nine-month-old baby tightly with both hands. Among the more than 20 survivors, the baby suffered the least injuries.

When people were clearing the ruins of the Tangshan earthquake, they found a mother who had cut her own blood vessels to feed the baby in her arms with warm blood.

My heart trembles when I read these words.

At a critical moment, the mother's only thought is to protect her children, and she can even sacrifice her blood and life. What else does she have to keep? After being inspired by this great mother's love, I couldn't help but want to ask the world, have we all thought about repaying our mother?

Never forget the kindness of nurturing and repay gratitude. This is the way to be in harmony with nature and human relationships. On the contrary, the author saw several news stories in the newspapers, and the things described were really outrageous.

News 1: There is a landscape in a certain rural area, where small houses are built next to large houses. Most of them provide living convenience for elderly parents. It goes without saying that

The big house has been occupied by their children in advance. I don’t know if these children have thought deeply about it. Your parents have gone through many hardships to raise you as adults. Now that you are old and weak, except for this house that was exchanged for sweat, is there anything else to squeeze out of it? ah!

News 2: A man became prosperous in the city and refused to take on the responsibility of supporting his mother because he gave up the right to inherit an old house in the countryside.

I wonder if such a person ever remembers that mothers discuss bargaining like this when raising their sons? If you have forgotten everything, do you still remember this flesh and blood body that wraps up a dirty soul?

News 3: An international student did not want to return to his country after completing his studies and stayed in a foreign country because his country was not as wealthy as the West. I would like to ask such people, have you ever eaten the milk of rich people in the West? Don’t you have any memory of your hardworking and determined mother in your heart? Don’t you have any impression of the Yellow River or the Great Wall?

Today, there are indeed some people who lack basic conscience, ranging from not shouldering the responsibility of supporting others to forgetting their ancestors. They indulge in the expansion of human desires and

are far away from the true meaning of life. However, such people are despised by everyone, and the traditional virtues of filial piety and love for the motherland are still carried forward in the praises of the Chinese nation. The author also saw a short article titled "Repaying Mother" in the newspaper. The article advocates the implementation of education in primary schools to repay mothers

Let children start from an early age, starting from me, and give care to their mothers. I think this is very necessary, this "basic project of love." Just think about it, if a person doesn’t even love his mother, can he still love the people and the motherland? Noble moral sentiments and a persistent sense of social responsibility

Start from love, and love will always be the lingering and everlasting spiritual bond between me, my mother, and my motherland.

The crow feeds back, and the sheep kneels to breastfeed. Let us enjoy the warmth of mother's love, learn to repay mother, and heal the trauma in mother's soul. Shakespeare has a famous saying: Once the destroyed love is rebuilt, it will be more majestic, more beautiful, and more tenacious than before.

Keep in mind mother’s hope

Liu Xiaoyan

Hello everyone! The title of my speech is "Remembering Mother's Hope".

In the article "Ancient and Eternal Monument" published in "China Youth Daily" on October 27, 1999, it was written that in the cable car accident that occurred in Guizhou,

When the cable car hit the ground At that moment, Pan Tianqi and He Yanwen lifted their two-and-a-half-year-old son Pan Zihao at the same time. As a result, both the couple were killed, but their son was safe and sound.

Everyone still remembers the Tangshan Earthquake! Back then, when people were cleaning up the ruins, they discovered that a mother had cut her own blood vessels and used her blood to feed the baby in her arms.

When the cable car fell from the sky at a crazy speed, the mother thought of protecting her son. No, maybe she didn’t have time to think about it.

Lifting her son was a kind of The control of subconscious value.

People often praise their mother's sweet milk, but a mother who was squeezed between steel and concrete was seriously injured and had not eaten or drank for several days. When her milk dried up, she The only thing that can be donated is one's own blood, because the son is the mother's hope to continue her life!

Students, although we have never experienced the pain of separation between mother and child, our mother has given us meticulous care. This love is selfless

From the time we were born, to the time we were babbling and learning, to the time we grew up, when did we leave our mother's care and concern? I often hear my classmates talking about their mother: When it rains, my mother waits for me at the school gate and holds an umbrella for me; when it gets cold, my mother rushes to knit a sweater for me under the lamp; When I was frustrated

my mother used her warm words to enlighten me, accompany me out of the gloomy day, help me raise the sail that had fallen, and encourage me to start over again

Although it is a difficult but more promising journey; when I got the school admission notice, my mother’s aging face was filled with a smile. Mother

The warm embrace of mother is our haven to escape the wind and rain. Mother has dug out the inexhaustible source of life for us with her hard-working hands, and teaches us with her simple life

It tells us how we love and hate, and leads us onto the right path of life. Because of our mother's dedication and sacrifice, we can grow up healthily and contribute to the progress of society and the development of science in the future. The mother's life may not have earth-shattering colors, and she may have never thought about the greatness of being a mother, but she built the foundation project of the National Building of Japan!

How did you feel when you took the money from your mother's rough hands? When your mother helped you carry your bags for school, have you carefully looked at your mother's earnest eyes? Classmates, we are our mother’s hope for a successful career!

In the process of learning, many times we have no way to avoid difficulties. When you are afraid of the future and stagnate, use your mother's hope to encourage yourself, and use your progress in learning to comfort your expectant mother. Keep your mother's hope in mind, and you will understand a noble life.

The most unforgettable thing is responsibility; keep your mother's hope in mind, and a warmth and a strong desire to have life will grow in your heart!

Thank you!

[Analysis and Expansion]

"A Letter from Home" condenses the background of earthquake relief under the light of a bean, and expands time and space through letters to connect the characters' childhood

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With the young people, the earthquake-stricken area and the original location of the characters, Zhang Chi gained the right to practice, and many people had an irresolvable relationship with Xiao Danxi, thus forming a touching plot. and typical environments. The flickering candlelight transforms into boundless sunlight, which is cleverly conceived. It may also be due to space limitations

The author only focuses on the exploration of the protagonist's noble soul and lacks description of other aspects.

"Repaying Mother" is based on praising maternal love, and then uses reverse thinking to improve arguments and then criticizes those who lack conscience.

The determination of the angle of expression shows the novelty of the author's thinking. The phenomena listed are of typical significance. From rural to urban areas, the theme is also sublimated in the enumeration. From how to treat the mother to how to treat the motherland, the divergence and fluency of the author's thinking can be inferred from the argumentation process. The language in the middle part is sharp and revealing. The style changes abruptly at the end, echoing the beginning, giving people a sense of goodwill.

In terms of content, the article is a comprehensive reading note, which gives people a sense of endless flow of water.

Answer: Secretary-General - Manager Level 5 12-7 19:26

Father's Love is Eternal

When I was in primary school, I read Meng Jiao's "The Wandering Son" ": "The thread in the hands of a loving mother is like the clothes on a wanderer's body. It is closely stitched before leaving, for fear of returning late.

After that, I don’t even remember what my father said. The picture in my mind became fixed and deeply reflected in my heart. Now that I think about it, if it had been paired with the music "If the Wine Is Sold No," it would have been a tear-jerking movie scene. For more than 20 years, whenever I sing or hear the song "If the wine is dry, I will sell it for nothing" and my father's cries, the image will make my heart ache.

That scene became an eternity in my heart!

My father used the flour at home, fried it into twists, and sold it from house to house for three days, and finally raised enough money for my tuition. In 1981, when I was nearly 15 years old, I finally lived up to my father’s expectations and was admitted to Zhongjiang Normal School. Now that I think about it, it was my father's hard work that made me gradually sensible and successful in my studies.

As a father, I know how to love my children because I have an ordinary but great father.

What makes me happy is that my father, who is nearly seventy years old, is still in good health! What makes me heartbroken is that in order to reduce my financial pressure, my father worked tirelessly to start a wheat noodle business in his hometown!

Although I have never enjoyed maternal love in my life, my father gave me all his love!

My dear and respectable father