In our daily study, work or life, everyone has written stories, so you must be familiar with all kinds of stories. Stories are a narrative way in which people express the relevant knowledge, experience and thoughts stored in their memories in written form. Do you know how to write a story properly? The following is the story of Sun Quan's persuasion, which I compiled. I welcome you to learn from it and hope it will help you.
The story of Sun Quan's persuasion
Lv Meng, whose word is Zi Ming, was born in Fupi County, Runan County (now southeast of Funan, Anhui Province). When he was a teenager, he crossed the river with his brother-in-law Deng Dang. Lu Meng's brother-in-law, Deng, was the Ministry of Sun Ce, and Lu Meng went to war with the army when he was only fifteen or sixteen years old. After Deng Dang's death, Lu Meng led his people and went to various places with Sun Quan. When fighting Huang Zu with Liu Biao's Ministry, Lv Meng was the pioneer, and he was appointed as Yoko's corps commander, giving him tens of millions of money. In Battle of Red Cliffs, Lv Meng, Zhou Yu and Cheng Pu defeated Cao Jun, surrounded Coss in Nanjun, and Coss failed, and entered Nanjun. He was promoted to a partial general and served as Xunyang county magistrate.
Lu Meng didn't learn Chinese at first, so Sun Quan enlightened him and another brave general, Jiang Qin, and said, "Now you are all in important positions and in charge of state affairs, so you should read more books and make continuous progress." Lu Meng said, "I often suffer from many things in the military camp, so I'm afraid I'm not allowed to study any more." Sun Quan patiently pointed out: "Do I want you to study the classics to be doctors? Just ask you to browse more books, learn about the past and increase your knowledge. Who do you think can have as much business as me? When I was young, I read The Book of Songs, Shangshu, Book of Rites, Zuozhuan and Guoyu, but I didn't read Zhouyi. Since I came to power, I have carefully studied the "Three History" (Historical Records, Hanshu and Dongguan Hanji) and the art of war of various schools, and I feel that I have gained a lot. Like the two of you, you have a bright mind and temperament, and you will certainly get benefits from your study. How can you not study? You should read Sun Tzu, Liu Tao, Zuo Zhuan, Mandarin and Three History first. Sun Tzu once said,' It's no good dreaming without eating all day and staying up all night. It's better to study.' Emperor Guangwu of the Eastern Han Dynasty shouldered the heavy burden of directing the war, but he still couldn't put it down. Cao Cao also said that he was old and studious. Why can't you just encourage yourselves? "Lv Meng began to learn from now on, and he concentrated on it. Even the old Confucian scholars couldn't catch up with the books he had read.
the source of sun quan's exhortation to learn
sun quan's exhortation to learn is selected from zi zhi tong Jian, which is a narrative created by Sima guang, a historian and politician in the northern song dynasty, with the title added by later generations. This article not only narrates the story that Lu Meng began to learn under the persuasion of Sun Quan, but also praised the spirit of Sun Quan and Lu Meng, and warned people about the importance of learning. This article is concise and vivid, focusing on expressing the characters through dialogue. The dialogue is concise, vivid and expressive, and there is no redundancy. It also uses the method of side contrast and contrast to shape the characters and highlight their elegance.
At the beginning of the original work
, the right said that Lu Meng said, "You must learn when you are in charge today!" There was a wide variety of excuse in the army of lvmengyong. Quan said, "Do you want to be a doctor when you are alone? But when dabbling, see the past. If you talk too much, who is lonely? I often study alone, and I think it is of great benefit. " Lu Meng began to learn.
Lu Su tried to find Yang, discussed with Meng, and said in great shock, "You are a talented person, but you are not going to return to Wu to be a monk!" Lv Meng said, " the people of integrity have been looking at it again for a few days, and you know how late it is for you to see things so late. ” Lu su met LV Meng's mother, and LV Meng became friends.
Vernacular translation
At first, Sun Quan said to Lv Meng, "You are now in power and in charge of political affairs, so you can't help studying!" Lv Meng used a variety of reasons for military affairs to evade. Sun Quan said, "Do I want you to study Confucian classics and become a scholar who teaches them? You should just read it roughly and understand history. You said that there are many affairs in the military. Who can compare with me? I often read books and think it is of great benefit. " Lv Meng then began to study.
When Lu Su went to find Yang to discuss state affairs with Lu Meng, Lu Su was surprised and said, "Your talent and strategy now are no longer the Amon in Wuxian!" Lv Meng said: "It is necessary to look at it from a new perspective when you are separated from the scholars for a few days. How can my brother recognize things so late?" So Lu Su met Lu Meng's mother and made friends with Lu Meng before parting.
Creative background
During the Three Kingdoms period, Wu Jun general Lv Meng didn't like studying when he was young. Later, he listened to Sun Quan's advice and read extensively and made great progress in learning. This article is an article adapted by Sima Guang according to historical materials.
appreciation of works
theme thoughts
This article tells the story that Lu Meng started to learn under Sun Quan's persuasion during the Three Kingdoms period, and made Lu Su gasp in admiration and make friends with him, which shows that people should be eager to learn and make progress as long as they are willing to learn, and highlights the importance of learning.
artistic features
Although this article is extremely brief, it is well cut, which not only retains the essence of the original text and the integrity of the story in previous history books, but also highlights the elegant demeanor of the characters with more concise writing, and is a successful rewriting. And its main artistic features are mainly manifested in the following aspects.
dialogue is vivid, and people are molded by words
The article is short, and the whole article mainly records several dialogues of the characters, but vividly creates two artistic images. Look at Sun Quan first. As the head of the State of Wu, he can care about his subordinates and encourage Lv Meng to learn more: "You must learn when you are in charge today!" The tone is firm and powerful. When Lv Meng found an excuse to refuse, he said with no hurry or annoyance: "I don't want you to be a doctor!" But when dabbling, see the past. " First, it is stated that the purpose of asking him to study is not to make him abandon martial arts and become a scholar, but to learn about history through extensive reading, draw lessons from it, and increase his knowledge and intelligence. This kind of persuasive and cordial tone has made people feel very sorry. Later, he further enlightened Lu Meng on his so-called excuse of "doing more things in the army" and appeared to say, "Who is lonely?" This is an obvious fact: "I often study alone, and I think I am of great benefit." Persuade Lu Meng with his own personal feelings. Throughout the conversation, Sun Quan didn't put on the airs of the authorities at all, and didn't force Lv Meng to study by coercion. This eloquent conversation was even more convincing. His conversation is cordial and friendly, with the demeanor of an elder rather than a king. Look at Lu Meng again. Reading makes Lu Meng's speech full of wisdom, so Lu Su's tone focuses on exclaiming: "Only those who are good at today are talented, not to restore Wu to Amon!" Lv Meng only said one sentence: "It's even more embarrassing to say goodbye for three days. Why can't Big Brother see things too late?" There is not only disapproval of Lu Su's fuss, but also a kind of self-confidence with more experience in books and hills and valleys in his chest, which makes people feel a sense of admiration.
Side contrast, showing changes
In addition to the positive remarks, this article also uses side contrast and contrast to the image of Lv Meng. From the side, Lu Meng's achievements in learning are shown, and his pen and ink are very vivid, which is the most wonderful part of the whole paper. From the article, we can know that Lu Su is a bystander who jumped out of Lushan Mountain. The effect of Lu Meng's reading is shown from the side through his words. His amazement sets off the fact that Lu Meng is not what he used to be. In the words "Wu Xia Meng", Lu Meng's past and present are compared vertically, and the conclusion of "change" is drawn, and the core of Lu Meng's "change" is the sharp increase of "talent".
Concise and expressive
This article focuses on dialogue, and the characters' language is concise and vivid, expressive and without redundancy. For example, Lu Meng's learning situation can only be summarized by the phrase "learning only when he is young", but there is no mention of what books he has read and how he studied hard. In the later part, the conversation between Lv Meng and Lu Meng is only explained by a sentence of "discussing with Meng". What topics are they talking about and what opinions of Lv Meng make Lu Su respect are omitted. In addition, other languages outside the dialogue are also very concise and meaningful, such as "Wu Xia Meng" and "scratch my face" which have been spread and used so far because of their brevity and richness. Also, in the development of the plot, Sun Quan's deliberate persuasion finally made Lu Meng go to school, and Lu Su was amazed by his profound knowledge after he went to school. Lu Meng also clung to his sigh and issued a confident language of "saying goodbye for three days, that is, treating each other more". The context was interlocking, connected naturally, and the cause and effect were orderly.
About the author
Sima Guang (119 ~ 186) was a famous politician, historian and writer in the Northern Song Dynasty. A native of Sushui Town, Xia County, Shaanxi Province (now northeast of Anyi Town, Yuncheng City, Shanxi Province), he is called Mr. Sushui in the world. In the first year of Baoyuan in Song Renzong (138), he was admitted to the Imperial Academy. Song Yingzong succeeded his predecessor, the Doctor of Advice, and at the beginning of Xining, Song Shenzong, he was a bachelor of Hanlin and an imperial adviser. In the third year of Xining in the Northern Song Dynasty (17), he became acquainted with Yongxing Army for opposing Wang Anshi's political reform. The following year, he was sentenced to Xijing Yushitai and lived in Luoyang for fifteen years, specializing in the compilation of Zi Zhi Tong Jian. Zhezong acceded to the throne and still served in the DPRK. In the eighth year of Yuanfeng (185), he served as the left servant and assistant minister of Shangshu, presided over the state affairs, rejected the new party and abolished the new law. Died a few months later. A posthumous gift to a surname, Wen Guogong and Shi Wenzheng. His works are included in Sima Wenzheng's Public Collection.
The author's personal works
Sima Guang wrote a lot. In addition to Zi Zhi Tong Jian, there are 8 volumes of Tong Jian Ju Yao Li, 2 volumes of Ji Gu Lu, and 6 volumes of Bai Guan Gong Qing Table. In addition, he has studied and written in literature, Confucian classics, philosophy and even medicine. His main representative works are Hanlin Shicao, Annotating Ancient Literary Classics, Yi Shuo, Annotating Xuanjing, Annotating Yangzi, Shuyi, Travel in the Mountains, Continuing Poems, Medical Questions and Notes. "Training frugally to show health" is included in high school Chinese textbooks.
The author's character's life
Early experiences
Sima Guangcai is like Song Zhenzong Tianxi three years (119). On October 18th, Sima Guang was born in Guangshan, Gwangju (now Guangshan County, Henan Province). At this time, his father Sima Chi was appointed as the magistrate of Guangshan County, so he was named Guang. At the age of six, Sima Chi taught Sima Guang to read. At the age of seven, he could not only recite Zuo's Spring and Autumn Annals, but also understand the main idea of the book. And made a "smashing the cylinder to save friends" that shocked Jingluo.
In the ninth year of Tiansheng (131), Sima Guang started from Tokyo with his father Sima Chi, passed through Luoyang, Tongguan and Baoji, crossed the Qinling Mountains, and went to Guangyuan, Sichuan, where he served as the transshipment ambassador of Lizhou. On the plank road, he calmly held a sword and plunged into the python's tail, causing the python to shake in pain and roll down the unfathomable plank road.
Sima Guang's erudition comes from many aspects. On the one hand, he is studious and knowledgeable, on the other hand, his father is also interested in cultivating it. He is honest and clever, and very clever and sensible, and is deeply loved by his father. At the same time, whenever traveling or talking with colleagues and close friends, Sima Chi always takes him with him. Hearing and hearing, Sima Guang is "awe-inspiring as an adult" in terms of knowledge and knowledge. Many ministers and celebrities at that time appreciated Sima Guang very much. Shangshu Zhang Cun offered to betroth his daughter to Sima Guang. After the death of Sima Chi, Pang Ji, a former deputy prime minister, raised and educated Sima Guang as his own son. Sima Chi traveled to Henan, Shaanxi and Sichuan as officials and always took Sima Guang with him. Therefore, before the age of fifteen, Sima Guang followed his father through many places, where he visited the ancient times to explore the strange, wrote poems and enjoyed the local customs, which greatly enriched Sima Guang's social knowledge.
Stepping into the officialdom
In the first year of Baoyuan (138), Sima Guang was twenty years old. He took part in the examination, and was admitted to the Imperial Academy in one fell swoop. From then on, he entered Shilin and became a judge in Huazhou (now Huaxian County, Shaanxi Province). At this time, Sima Chi was in the same state (now Dali, Shaanxi), and the two places were close, so Sima Guang often went to visit his parents. In the same state, he met Shi Changyan, a scholar in the same branch, who was famous early. Although he was twenty years older than Sima Guang, the two of them got along very well. They often exchanged knowledge together, talked about the past and visited the present, and became friends who forgot the past. In the same year, he married Zhang Cun's daughter.
In the second year of Baoyuan (139), because his father was transferred to Hangzhou, Sima Guang resigned as a judge in Huazhou and was appointed as a judge in Suzhou. Just as he was ambitious and making progress in his career, his mother died of illness. According to feudal ethics, he had to resign and go home to mourn for three years. During this period, Yuan Hao, a member of the northern Tangut, proclaimed himself emperor (in 138, the first year of Baoyuan) and established the Xixia Kingdom. Xixia fought with the Song Dynasty in order to get rid of its vassal status, and the Song Dynasty failed again and again. In order to strengthen the military defense force, Song Renzong asked the two provinces to acquire archers and command posts. Father and son Sima think it is no good to do so. Therefore, Sima Guang drafted on behalf of his father "On the Inappropriate Pose of Archers in Zhejiang Province", and elaborated on the addition of archers and military attaché s from various aspects.
In December of the first year of Qingli (141), Sima Chi died in Jinzhou, and Sima Guang and his brother Sima Dan returned to their hometown Xia County with their father's coffin. The successive death of his parents made Sima Guang extremely sad. He sighed, "I have been thinking about this for a long time." However, during his mourning period, he turned sadness into a driving force for studying and writing hard to dispel endless sadness and loneliness. During this period, he read a lot of books and wrote many valuable articles, such as Ten Philosophers' Theory, Four Nobles' Theory and Jia Sheng's Theory, and put forward opinions on some ancient things according to his own opinions and feelings.
during his three years in mourning, he learned a lot about the life of the lower class. In the fourth year of Qingli (144), Sima Guang, who was 26 years old, ended his mourning and signed a book as a judge of Wu Chengjun. Soon, he changed to Xuandelang and became the supervisor's main book, knowing all about Fengcheng County. In a short period of time, it has achieved the political achievements of "the political voice is impressive and the people call it".
in his spare time, he read a lot of classics and wrote many papers, such as the Theory of Machine Power, Theory of Talent and Morality, Lian Po's Theory, Waiting for Wu Anjun Soldiers, Xiang Yu's Punishment of Han Sheng, Emperor Gaozu's Punishment of Ding Gong, Gan Luo, Fan Ju and Zhao Jun in Qinkeng.
Sima Guang received an imperial edict in the sixth year of the Qing Dynasty (146). He was transferred to Dali as a judge and a national teacher. On the day he went to Beijing, his current friends went out to buy wine for his farewell dinner. Sima Guang was moved by everyone's enthusiasm and wrote an impromptu poem: "Don't be too drunk to fall forward, will this joy be heavy tomorrow?" I can't bear to say goodbye, and it's not too late to look back at the tower! " At this time, Sima Guang was in high spirits. Although his official career was boundless and unpredictable, he still came to Kyoto with excitement.
In the seventh year of Qingli (147), Sima Guang was twenty-nine years old, and the peasant king of Beizhou revolted and captured Beizhou City, known as the "King of Dongping County". At this time, Pang Ji, a friend of Sima Guang's father, served as a council agreement in the DPRK and was in charge of the national military affairs. Sima Guang wrote "The Book of On-the-spot Pang Shumi's Discussion on Beizhou", offering suggestions and suggestions to Pang Ji to quell the uprising as soon as possible. The specific suggestions are "to break with a plan", to use threats and inducements, to divide and disintegrate, to punish only the "first evil", and not to ask the rest. In fact, the insurgents only lasted 66 days, the leader Wang was killed, and the rest were burned to death.
in the first year of emperor you (149), Pang Ji was promoted to Tang dynasty, and recommended Sima guang as the collator of the pavilion, but he didn't get the permission of the emperor. In the third year of Emperor You (151), Sima Guang was thirty-three years old. He was recommended by the Prime Minister Pang Ji to be a collator in the pavilion, and he was known for his kindness.