My comments:
Preface to Mao's Poems: "Poets, who have aspirations, have aspirations in their hearts and speak with poems. Emotion moves in the middle and is shaped by words. Sigh if you don't talk enough. If they are not enough, they will sing forever. If they are not enough, they will never know how to dance. "
Mencius on Zhang Wan: "Therefore, poets do not harm their words, nor do they harm their ambitions. This is against your will. "
The poet lies in his will, mind, emotion, speech, body and so on. It is necessary to fight against will with will to reach the world constructed by the poet. Therefore, the vitality of poetry lies in the reader's interpretation of the text world.
Generally speaking, the poem "Rib" is strange in imagination, full of tension, sad but not hurt, restrained and full of emotion, and the image of "lotus root" in the second section is slightly repeated, which can be polished and refined. Generally speaking, this is a good poem with flaws, and there are no flaws hidden in it.
In the myth of creation, Pangu's ribs turned into stones, and in the dream of red mansions, Jia Baoyu's predecessor was a stone abandoned by psychic.
According to the Bible, God took out one of Adam's ribs and turned it into Eve.
The first section of "Rib" is sloppy and rigid, car-scrapping and independent, similar to the experience of Baoyu's predecessor Shi Yutong Ling.
In A Dream of Red Mansions, Lin Daiyu once asked Jia Baoyu, "What is the so-called most expensive treasure and the strongest jade?" What jade do you have? "
Bone and jade are strong, upright and awe-inspiring, and the world is magnificent.
The second section is about lonely bones. Bone white, lotus white and moon white are isomorphic, similar to her jade shoulders and cold moon in Du Fu's Moonlit Night.
Zhou Dunyi's "Love Lotus" said: "Love Lotus never touches the mud, clear but not demon, straight through, not crawling, fragrant and clear, graceful and pure, far away but not ridiculous!"
Lotus, fragrant and fragrant, forms a hazy aesthetic feeling with the flowing lake, similar to the sweetness of her cloudy hair with fog.
The white of the three contrasts with the black of the night, and the stillness of the night and the moon contrasts with the movement of the lotus and the lake. Black is white, white is black, and the movement rotates, thus forming the synesthesia phenomenon of smell, vision and hearing.
Among them, "leakage" corresponds to "dissatisfaction" and "emptiness". What seems to be written here is bones, but in fact it is written about people's hearts. The loneliness of lotus bone lies in the endless demand of lotus root. The flowing lake is a metaphor for insatiable desires and valleys, and the image is appropriate. It also reflects the poet's praise of "noble lotus bones" and criticism of "lotus roots are greedy for emptiness"
"Lotus bone" and "lotus root" are an organic whole, which also reflects the complexity of people's hearts. At the same time, it also reflects the poet's complex psychology of subtle entanglement, contradiction and loneliness, which he wants to stay away from secular intrusion and is troubled by secular triviality.
In the third section, I wrote about the combination of rigidity and softness of fate. "Dust" and "sand" are the weights of life, and bones at this time are no longer the car-scrapping of youth.
The pressure of life and the impermanence of fate are unpredictable, but they have to face it. Too straight in the face of too much pressure, bending down is not only awe of life and fate, but also transcendence of self, just like Sisyphus who has been pushing boulders.
In the experience of life, hard bones are tough, elastic, able to advance and retreat, and advance and retreat freely. When you are straight, you should be curved. In the philosophy of life of straight people, you should surpass yourself and eventually become your own hero.
Romain rolland: "There is only one kind of heroism in this world, and that is to love life after recognizing the truth of life."
The fourth part is about endless love. Evil: "Evil! I want to know you and live a long life. Mountains have no edges, rivers are endless, there is Lei Zhen in winter and rain and snow in summer. Heaven and earth are one, but dare to break with you! "
Feng Yansi's "The Immortal Daughter": "Spring banquet, a glass of sake, one more time, and another respect:' I wish my husband a thousand years old and good health, and wish to meet you like a beam every year. " "
The left chest is where the heart is, emotion is the bone, and tears are the heart.
The Little Prince: "True love will make a person choose only one rose among 5,000."
"A Dream of Red Mansions" sequel: "Jia Baoyu said,' Ren Feng is weak in water for 3,000 yuan, and I only drink with a ladle. " "
Shobury's Stars in the Sandstorm: "Love does not consist in gazing at each other, but in looking in the same direction together."