First-person rewriting composition

1. A mythical composition adapted from the first person

Emperor Yan, the sun god of Jingwei's reclamation, had a little daughter named Nuwa, who was his favorite daughter. One day, Nuwa drove a boat to the East China Sea to play. Unfortunately, there was a storm on the sea, and the boat was overturned by the waves like Xiangshan, and the Nuwa drowned in the sea and never came back.

Emperor Yan certainly misses his daughter. But none of them can bring her back from the dead with his light and heat, so they have to grieve alone.

The girl was not content with her death. Her soul changed and became a bird named "Jingwei". Jingwei, with a flowery head, a white mouth shell and red claws, is a bit like a crow, and lives in Fagushan in the north.

She hates that the heartless sea has taken away her young life, so she often flies to the western hills to grab a pebble or a twig. Spread your wings and fly to the East China Sea. She bounced back on the rough sea, throwing stones or branches to fill up the sea.

The sea is rushing and growling, revealing snow-bright teeth. Laughing viciously, he said, "Little bird, forget it. Even if you work for one million years, you will never fill up the sea."

Jingwei replied to the sea at high altitude: "Even if you work for ten million years, ten million years, until the end of the universe and the end of the world, I will fill you up!" "Why do you hate me so much?" "Because of you-you took my young life, and there will be many young innocent lives to be taken away by you mercilessly in the future." "Silly bird. Then do it-do it!" The sea laughed.

jingwei wailed in the sky, "I want to do it! I want to do it! I'm going to work forever! This is a sad sea, and one day I will fill you to the ground! " She flew and screamed. She left the sea and flew back to the western hills. Take the stones and branches from the western hills and throw them into the sea. She flew back and forth like this, never resting, until the story of the goddess of the moon in Greek mythology. There are many legends about the sadness of the moon, among which there is a fairy story that impressed me the most ... Artemis, the goddess of the moon in ancient Greek mythology, is the sister of Apollo, the sun god, very beautiful, and also a very powerful archer, in charge of hunting. Every day, she drives a silver carriage in the night sky, representing the night together-cold, loneliness and the undead.

Orion, the son of Poseidon, likes archery very much. He is a good hunter and likes to run wildly on the sea every day. By chance, he met Artemis. Because of their common interests, they quickly fell in love with each other, often hunting together in the jungle and running wildly on the sea.

But Apollo, the goddess' brother, hated Oreon and didn't like her being with Oreon, so he decided to get rid of Oreon. One day, while Oreon was flying on the sea, Apollo covered Oreon with golden light to hide him, so that no one could see Oreon's true colors, and then he encouraged his sister Moon Goddess, who likes archery, to take golden objects in the distance as targets.

Of course, the goddess didn't know it was her brother's plot, so she shot an arrow right in the head. When she learned that it was her sweetheart who was shot dead, she fell into despair and cried day and night.

In order to cherish her love for Oreon forever, she asked Zeus to lift Oreon to the sky, hoping that she could see it when she was running in the sky in a silver carriage. Zeus accepted her request and turned Orion into a constellation in the sky.

The goddess swore that she would never marry, and that she would always accompany Olion in the night sky. The beautiful moon goddess, the guardian of the faithful girl, is like the bright and beautiful moon. Are you snuggling up with your lover now? Ganjiang and Mo Xie are two swords, but no one can separate them.

The general and Mo Xie are two people. Similarly, no one can separate them. Ganjiang and Mo Xie are two swords cast by Ganjiang and Mo Xie.

The cadre is the male sword, and Mo Xie is the female sword. A good husband and Mo Xie a wife.

The generals are hardworking, and Mo Xie is gentle. When the lieutenant made a sword for the prince of Wu, Mo Xie fanned the fan and wiped the sweat for the lieutenant.

three months later, the general sighed. Mo Xie also shed tears.

Mo Xie knows why the generals sigh, because the gold and iron extracted from the five mountains and six rivers in the furnace can't be melted, and the sword can't be cast without Tie Ying. The lieutenant also knows why Mo Xie shed tears, because if the sword cannot be cast, he will have to be killed by the prince.

The general still sighed, but one night, Mo Xie suddenly laughed. Seeing Mo Xie laughing, the lieutenant suddenly became afraid. Knowing why Mo Xie was laughing, the lieutenant said to Mo Xie, Mo Xie, you must never do it.

Mo Xie didn't say anything, she just laughed. When the lieutenant woke up, he found that Mo Xie was not around.

A general is like an arrow through his heart. He knows where Mo Xie is. Mo Xie stood on the towering sword-casting furnace wall, her skirt flying like a fairy.

Mo Xie saw the figure of the general running from a distance in the early morning light. She smiled, and she heard the hoarse cry of the general: Mo Xie ... Mo Xie was still laughing, but at the same time, tears flowed down.

The lieutenant also shed tears. In the misty tears, he saw Mo Xie floating down. He heard Mo Xie finally say to him: Lieutenant, I'm not dead, we will still be together ... The molten iron melted and the sword was successfully cast. A male and a female, named Ganjiang Mo Xie, only dedicated the Ganjiang to the prince of Wu.

The news that the cadre was hiding "Mo Xie" was soon known to the king of Wu. The samurai surrounded the cadre and gave him up. He opened the sword box and asked desperately, Mo Xie, how can we be together? The sword suddenly jumped out of the box and turned into a beautiful white dragon, which flew away. At the same time, the lieutenant suddenly disappeared without a trace. When the lieutenant disappeared, the "lieutenant" sword around the prince of Wu also disappeared.

In the desolate and poor city county thousands of miles away, a young white dragon suddenly appeared in a big lake called Yanpingjin. This white dragon is beautiful and kind, and it calls the shots for the people. The desolate poor city county is gradually in good weather, and the grain is abundant. The name of the county town has also been changed from poor city to rich city.

However, the local people often find that this white dragon looks around the lake in Yanping Tianjin almost every day, as if waiting for something, and some people even see tears in its eyes. Six hundred years have passed.

By chance, Lei Huan, the magistrate of Fengcheng County, dug out a stone box from the ground with a sword on it while building the city wall. 2. Writing in the first person < P > I am a national treasure panda. My head is round, my tail is short, and I am round all over. Don't think my eyes are big. In fact, there is a circle of black hair around my eyes, and my small eyes are hidden in the middle. I only live in the mountains and valleys of the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau in the upper reaches of the Yangtze River, where patches of bamboo grow, especially my favorite arrow bamboo. I like to keep eating every day. I have to eat 12-38 kilograms of bamboo at the end of the day. It's amazing! My ancestor, the panda, existed as early as 2-3 million years ago, so I am also called a "living fossil".

originally, our family has been living a very happy life, and you also like our naivety very much. However, I gradually find life more and more difficult. Because of the deforestation, the area where we live is getting smaller and smaller, with an annual rate of 2. The speed of 5 square kilometers is disappearing; Because I only live in China, many bad guys arrested us and smuggled us abroad for exhibition ... Such a difficult life made me haggard, and I was hiding around for fear of being caught. Fortunately, our country has designated us as a national first-class protected animal, and the area where we live has been designated as a national nature reserve. Our happy life is back, and we are more lovely. Last April, our family's golden couple Tuan Tuan and Yuan Yuan went to Taiwan Province on behalf of the mainland, conveying the desire of people on both sides of the strait for an early reunion. This is the most glorious thing in the history of our family. In retrospect, I am still excited! 3. First-person rewriting of Mulan Poetry

or warm home

-rewriting Mulan Poetry

In the morning, I got everything ready and said goodbye to my parents. In the evening, I stayed by the cold Yellow River, and only heard the rushing sound of the Yellow River, and occasionally heard the sound of wild animals from a distance; The north wind is blowing, and I can't hear my parents' calls. There are mountains on both sides here, and the river is very urgent. If you are not careful, it will be washed away by the river.

Finally, the sun climbed out from the east. I said goodbye to the Yellow River and walked on and on. Before I knew it, it was noon. At this time, I don't have much food with me, so I can only pick a few mountain fruits to eat. After eating a few wild berries casually, I started to set off again. In the evening, I lived in the black hills, and it was dark everywhere. I could only wait silently for the light to come. Suddenly, a few hooves startled me, and I thought to myself: It's still warm at home! At home, my parents must be calling my name.

After more than ten days, I finally arrived at the military camp and became a soldier. At this moment, I have a glorious task: defending my country.

More than 2 days later, the war broke out, and many of my comrades-in-arms and I went to the battlefield mercilessly. Every time we fought, there was a river of blood, and I don't know how many generals and soldiers died. This war has been fought for more than ten years, and every day for more than ten years, I have lived in fear.

The war is finally over, and I haven't died in the battlefield yet. Khan rewarded me with a lot of money and made me a senior official, and I don't want any of this. I just bought a swift horse and sent me back to my hometown.

When I arrived at the entrance to the village, my parents had already sat under the big tree in front of the village waiting for me, and many villagers also came. I went to my parents, knelt down and said, "Parents, I haven't been filial to take care of you for twelve years, and now I'm here to take care of you!" " I walked back with my parents. My younger brother was killing pigs and sheep, and my sister dressed up for me. In a short time, a table of good dishes was ready, and our family happily sat down to have a reunion dinner. Now, I have already put on my old daughter's makeup, and it's good to eat with everyone and feel the warmth of home. 4. rewrite "the market in the sky" into an essay in 4 words with the first person (I). The market in the sky is quiet at night. The night is expected to be endless, and it is dark all around. There are only gloomy street lamps and few pedestrians left in the whole street. Under a faint street lamp, I snuggle up to a person, like standing and sitting, and the only one who can see clearly. In the darkness of the night, a few bright lights flashed in the sky, like a star and a street lamp. The "star" flickered vaguely, as if it were going out. Finally, it didn't go out, but it still flickered. When a layer of night was opened, there was a sound and a light in front. Look clearly, it was a market, and the market in the sky. There were dazzling items on all kinds of shelves. There is no such thing as a smile on the face. Suddenly, the night fell, and the streets, things and people disappeared for a while. There was a gurgling sound of water, which turned out to be Tianhe. I saw that in the not wide Tianhe, the water flowed gently and slowly, making small waves from time to time. The grass on both sides of the river was just a few flowers and butterflies. Instead, it was replaced. Looking at the other side, there is a girl on the other side, a girl with a sad face. She is the Weaver Girl who was forced to leave the Cowherd. This situation has been interpreted for 999 times. How can this shallow Tianhe be cut off by their lovesickness? Suddenly, the underwater sound disappeared, and it was dark again. Look again, there was a light in the distance, near, near, lanterns, cows. 5. Rewrite in the first person and write a diary

Rewrite in the first person and write a diary

March 16th, sunny Saturday

Today is Saturday, and it is also my mother's busiest day.

in the morning, my mother got up before I got up. Get up and do what? Of course, get up to wash your face, brush your teeth, and make up! Oh! By the way, my mother wears a fragrant hair gel every day. That smell is really delicious! After applying the hair gel, my mother will also blow dry the hair gel on her head. The reason for this is that it has to be fixed! After finishing these things and getting dressed, mom will drive his car to work in the company!

it's almost noon when I get to the company, because my mother goes to work at 9 o'clock! At noon ... Mom's colleagues will start to discuss what to eat! After ordering fast food, mom will start folding clothes, ironing clothes and replenishing goods. An hour later, the fast food finally arrived! However, mom has no time to eat at all, because there are too many guests! Sometimes I'm too busy to even order fast food!

After eating fast food, my mother will continue to work without rest. This kind of work is really hard! Although the hard-working mother is as busy as a bee, she enjoys it. In the afternoon, more and more guests come to the company to shop ... Of course, mom is getting busier and busier.

Although there are fewer people in the evening, there are still many people, and I found that the later it is, the more guests my mother has! Too busy to order dinner! Mom will always stand there introducing clothes until after work! Alas, it's too hard to be a waiter. If I were you, I wouldn't kill myself. After work, my mother will drive his car back to our warm little home ... When I get home, I feel quite sad to see my mother's exhausted appearance. When my mother gets home, it's already 11 o'clock, and I have to wash clothes, take a shower and dry clothes ... It takes more than 2 hours just to finish these things, so my mother always does it at 12 o'clock, 1 o'clock or even more than 2 o'clock in the evening. 6. The story rewritten in the first person is 1 words high.

It is said that there was a highest mountain in ancient China, but it was not Mount Everest. Its peak was much taller than Mount Everest, and the top of the peak stood out and soared into the sky. Therefore, this peak was called Qingtian Peak. A waterfall with a width of dozens of feet hangs on the half slope of the mountain peak, roaring and rushing, magnificent and spectacular. There is a deep pool, unfathomable. Not far from Shentan, there lived a well-known doctor named WU GANG. He practices medicine all the year round, is charitable and has a good reputation. The only fly in the ointment is that Mrs Chang's health has always been sickly, and she can't be cured for a long time. Unexpectedly, she died halfway, and WU GANG was very sad. It's a pity to think that the husband and wife can't leave a man and a woman, so that the ancestral doctors are short of successors.

First, Chiwa was born.

It was a long lonely night. It was a big goose that lived alone with WU GANG. This big goose of Wu Gang's family was as big as three geese, so WU GANG named it Long Goose. Long geese don't lay eggs easily. Every time they lay eggs, one goose egg is worth three ordinary goose eggs. Everyone is very surprised. One morning,