Hui Ruo commented that this work is smooth, neat and full of image. The last two sentences are the finishing touch, which I appreciate very much.
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Guo ting Hua Lian
Zhegutian The Dream of Butterfly
Can you still be a butterfly if you are restricted? Deep in the flowers, wings droop.
A peony once asked to visit, but three branches of Biju were hurt as a speech.
If it is a butterfly, it is also sad. Thousands of bodies will follow forever.
Freedom is nothing but idle time. It is better to look down on it than to deceive yourself all the time.
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1. Words and expressions are fresh, catchy and clear-cut.
2. The opposite is neat.
3. The meaning of "silence" is unknown; Although "weak shadow" is hardly a fabrication, it is a bit deliberate; The meaning of "endless years" is unclear.
The last sentence is well connected with the previous one.
The overall advantage is that the physical environment is fresh, but the disadvantage is that the theme and expression are not brilliant enough.
Don't be surprised by the above content.
Comments on this small day
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D. Pan Wei
Goo Goo Tian Yong Butterfly (New Rhyme)
Why is the figure always soft? Summer breeze is bitter, I don't know how to worry.
I used to drink autumn grass and dew, and asked about spring red and autumn.
Flowers are long, grass is trimmed, and poetry is always long in front of you.
Cultivating a brain without language is not like a bird singing in the forest.
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E, smoke wave fishing
Quail day? Butterfly sigh
Jumping up and down, chasing flowers and herding sheep to tease children.
Wandering in the spring, tossing and turning in the bleak autumn rain.
Old age is easy, but hate is hard to end. The world of mortals is in a hurry.
Zhuang sheng is in a trance, and everything is empty for a thousand years.
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Shi wai mei yuan f
Butterfly in partridge field
Li Ying swooped down like a drunk, chasing incense and dancing with rhyme.
Zhuang and Zhou dream of knowing each other, and cherish each other.
I passed away, sighing about the fleeting time, vaguely thinking about the clouds.
If you have nothing to love, why do you love it? Everything is empty and indifferent.
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Zhong Jingming
The partridge sky and the broken-winged butterfly
Ying Ying's charming attitude makes people feel pity.
Think like a dream several times, and a feather falls.
After being washed and frosted by rain, the world is full of confidence.
A frivolous talent dances freely, and Wan Li knows who it is.
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H, what is not?
Zhegutian butterfly
Pregnant women are born with broken cocoons, who says that clouds and clouds are withered and brilliant.
Powder-packed double feathers dance lightly, and thousands of flowers in the green space are sluggish.
Fly to a few places and look for a lifetime. Meet in the flowers.
What do you want to see when you get together? Mo Wen's infatuation is always sad.
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Zhang Chengyu J.
Butterfly in partridge field
Liang Zhu's clothes are always sad, and different stories are like sadness.
Weave clouds and fly flowers, break cocoons and earn jade dust.
Come and go, go and never come back. Soul into feathers, separation of acacia.
There is no doubt in Zhuang Sheng's dream. Who will fly with him when the dream is broken?
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K, Chang' an old man
Love of two butterflies in the sky (new rhyme)
The winged butterfly split its feathers, leaving a half-dead flower mark.
In the court, the new pistil will be condensed and the empty nest will be twisted under the cluster.
The fate is gone, but the meaning is still there. It was a short spring.
The female butterfly swallows all the male sphenoid bones and binds your soul to me.
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M, China perfume
Butterfly in partridge field
Colorful wings fluttered between heaven and earth, and lingering fragrance chased the pear garden.
The dance is graceful and amazing, and the colorful people are drunk.
Go to * * * and return at dusk. Just touching and partying.
Zhuang Zhou, turned into a butterfly, has a dream of red dust, and his feelings are deep and beautiful.
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There is sunny snow in the western hills.
The love between partridge and butterfly
Flowers cover willows, while Su Causeway Sophora japonica is hidden. Dance skirt Cai Fengcui Lake is beautiful.
Love leads Liang Zhu to bid farewell to the long bridge, and the soul building is full of butterflies and dreams.
He went but didn't come back. After several injuries, I saw the dragonfly born and separated.
Mourning the Emei Garden, and weeping over the Jade Mirror Platform.
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P, seven steps and one frown
Zhegutian butterfly
The fragrance is shallow and long all the way, and the jade makeup comes in spring.
The bottom of the flying leaf is from the flower side, facing the west wall, and the compound north window.
Since the death of Chun, I have been hiding. Different green leaves and yellow flowers.
Now, on the day of reopening, only dragonflies are left in the pond.
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dear
Butterfly in partridge field
Like he lang fu fen Xiang, Luo Lisu dyed yellow flowers.
Yingying brings autumn water and joy, and the pulse pays the sunset.
The flowers fell, the night was cold, and several storms were very heavy.
Poor life is hard to do, and Zhuang Zhou's dream is even harder to repay.