1. Teeth rattled, eyes glistened with uncontrollable anger, like an angry lion.
2. Hatred, like a monster, devours my heart and makes me restless.
3. The spicy taste makes my eyes roll. I hate my roots and my fingers itch. I want to beat him.
He growled angrily, and his voice rolled like a heavy thunder and spread far and far.
Looking at this scene, the angry crowd suddenly burst the bank and roared into the hall like a flood filling the river.
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He turned pale with fear and his tongue froze, unable to speak.
As cold as ice, it is daunting.
I was flushed with embarrassment and didn't know what to do.
Concentrate on thinking hard
Flush with excitement
I saw his face flushed, his eyebrows twisted into a knot, and even the veins stood out on his arm could be seen clearly.
After seeing the problem, the teacher frowned and habitually put the thumb of his left hand on his lips and moved back and forth, thinking.
When he used to go out to play, he would beat his head with his hands and make a few screams like Mount Tai.
His face was pale and his eyes were wide with fear.
She smiled with a round face like a blooming sunflower.
(1) A word that describes the appearance of a character.
Looking dignified and strong, with fine eyes, red ears and white, soft and red face.
Silver hair, bright eyes, eyes like a pool of fire, eyes like gold, thick eyebrows.
Good-natured, majestic, tall and burly, spirited and well dressed.
(2) Words describing the expressions of characters
Laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh.
Proud, cheerful, carefree and radiant.
Aggressive, depressed, sad, listless, tearful.
(3) Words describing the emotions of characters
Be elated, full of joy, anxious to return, relaxed and happy, ups and downs.
Convinced, preoccupied, worried and heartbroken.
Anger, fear, panic, anxiety and depression
Excitement and excitement poured out of his mind like a flood that burst its banks, and he could no longer hide his gentleness.
Run, run, run! His heart is excited, and his happiness can't be expressed in simple words. It seems that every hair on his body has the joy of beating.
The most important thing in describing characters' movements is to pay attention to observation. In daily life, we should pay special attention to the behaviors and actions of people around us, pay special attention to the characteristics of different people's actions, and grasp the characteristics to observe them carefully and repeatedly.
For example, the following paragraph:
Xiaoli sipped her mouth, bowed her waist and approached it step by step. Approaching, approaching, I saw her quietly reaching out her right hand to the butterfly, and her open fingers closed and caught the butterfly's wings. Xiaoli jumped and jumped with joy.
He bent down, the basketball kept flapping back and forth, left and right under his hand, and his eyes turned around, looking for a chance to "break through". Suddenly, he quickened his pace, then turned left and right, rushed through two layers of defense lines and came to the basket. After a tiger jump, he turned to shoot, and the basketball drew a beautiful arc in the air and landed in the basket impartially.
Catching butterflies and playing basketball are common activities, and some students even take part in them in person. But the writing is not specific. Due to careful observation, the author described the movements and demeanor of catching butterflies and playing basketball vividly.
Second, we should grasp the action description that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters.
Please look at the following example:
He is over 50 years old. Wearing a pair of glasses with high myopia. He carefully took off his glasses and wiped them with the hem of his clothes. "Uh-huh ..." He was about to speak when he suddenly remembered something. He fumbled in the plate, then quickly reached into his pocket and took out a box of matches. Only then did he say "uh-huh" again, stood up straight and said in a particularly loud voice, "Now start watching the teacher do the experiment!"
There is an unpleasant smell of smoke in the classroom. Teacher Mao stood at the door panting. His head was steaming, and there were several glistening beads of sweat on the tip of his nose. His eyebrows were raised angrily, but his mouth smiled. Seeing this, he blinked in surprise, and the muscles on his face suddenly froze and did not move, just like the "freeze" in the movie. Several of them were nailed there like wood.
The old man's hands are dexterous. In just a few minutes, a clay figurine was born in his hands. Watch him pick up another lump of mud, knead it into a circle first, and then rub it gently with his hands to make it soft and slippery. Then, rub on it and gradually separate the head, body and legs. He held a clay figurine in his left hand and fiddled with his right hand on his head. Soon, the clay figurine put on his hat.
The above three paragraphs all capture the movements that can best highlight the characteristics of the characters.
Example 1 is about an old teacher with high myopia. Through the description of actions such as "wiping glasses with the hem of clothes", "scrambling in the plate" and "rushing into the pocket", the characteristics of an old teacher with high myopia, clumsy movements and a little "confused" are written. Example 2 mainly describes the characteristics of facial expressions and actions of grumpy people when they are angry. Such as: "standing at the door panting", "steaming head", "raising eyebrows angrily", "grinning down" and "muscles motionless". When angry, the facial expression is vivid and lifelike. The third example is to grasp the action characteristics of clay figurines and write an image of an ingenious old artist.
Third, we should use verbs accurately and appropriately.
Read the following examples to see what the dotted words in each paragraph do.
It's too late to say now, but it's too soon. The athlete who fell to the ground stood up suddenly with his hands propped up and tiptoed. The left foot points to the starting line, and the knee bends and squats firmly. Hands are like two wooden pillars stuck in the ground, and the whole body leans forward slightly, like an eagle spreading its wings.
In these short sentences, 65,438+00 verbs are used to accurately and realistically describe the starting posture of athletes.
She squeezed into the gate and put the burden on the ground; He stepped forward, grabbed the grass on the ground, held it down with his knees, leaned forward, tied his waist with his hands, lifted it up and threw it into a corner of the courtyard wall.
These dotted verbs in the paragraph are appropriate. Wrote the image of a capable, agile, energetic and skilled rural girl.
She saw grandma stand up and lift the lid with both hands. I struggled to open it several times before I opened a crack a little. A thick smoke rushed out of the stove mouth and almost smoked grandma's face. Grandma casually brushed her wrinkled face with her sleeve, shook her head again and said to herself, "It's no use getting old!" " "
This passage describes the actions of an old woman doing housework. With verbs such as "uncovering, rushing, pulling, brushing and shaking", the characteristics of the old people's work movements are accurately and aptly written. The above examples show that in order to write the dynamic image of the characters vividly, we must use accurate and appropriate verbs to describe the actions of the characters. Describe good words and sentences learned by dancing.
(1) Words describing learning attitude
Diligent, diligent, earnest, dedicated, practical, diligent and open-minded.
Study hard, be down-to-earth, be shameless, seek perfection and blame, get to the bottom of it, forget all about eating and sleeping, starve and be persistent and meticulous.
(2) Words that concentrate on learning
Concentrate, concentrate, hold your breath, stare, concentrate
Cover up with relish, meditate and concentrate.
(3) Good sentences describing learning
Xiao Fei sat in his seat, writing and writing. There seems to be a steady stream of spring water flowing out of his pen. In less than one class, I actually wrote a composition.
Xiaohong just sat facing the window, and the afternoon sun shone on her round face, making her cheeks more rosy; She holds her chin with a pen, her eyes are wide open, her bright eyes are swimming slowly, and her plump chin is slightly upturned-this is the expression that the math teacher is familiar with and loves whenever she thinks of a more ingenious way to solve a math problem.
Whenever doing homework, the pen tip rustles, as if a bird is singing at it, and as if encouraging: "Don't be afraid of difficulties and climb the peak bravely."
She stood up and answered so accurately, so naturally, so smoothly, as if she had been prepared.
She recited in cadence, with beautiful tone, beautiful expression and moving seat.
He is a naughty boy. He reads too fast and crackles like a fried peanut.
Juanjuan read the text in Mandarin, and her voice was crisp and nice. Even the sunshine is fascinated. She sneaked into the classroom through the window and left it on her book, which she didn't want to leave for a long time.
Read the book greedily, like a hungry lamb rushing into the green grass.
She got into the sea of books, like a fish in the sea, and forgot the passage of time.
He managed to pull himself together and opened the book. From the beginning, he felt that lines of words were moving on it, like flying; Later, I thought it was just a blur, like a nest of ants crawling around on paper.
He buried himself in his homework again, and the room was quiet, except for the rustling of pens on the paper.
Students sit in the classroom, listening attentively to the teacher's lecture, just like dozens of flowers blooming quietly under the watering of hard gardeners.
Lang Lang's reading voice flew out from all the classrooms, like a touching children's chorus, with notes all over the sky.
Good words and sentences describing labor
(1) labor action
Finishing, drying, sewing, cleaning, wiping, rubbing, frying, washing and washing.
Show off your skills, wash and choose, clean and tidy.
Clever, clumsy, confused, clumsy
(2) Words to describe work emotions and feelings
Hard work, hard work, easy work, hard work, liberation, happiness and pride.
I was overjoyed, elated, satisfied and exhausted.
(3) words to describe the fruits of labor
You're finished. The smell is fragrant and the food is clean and spotless.
In good order, clean and tidy, bright and orderly.
(4) Beautiful sentences describing labor
She held a stack of wonton skins in her left hand, picked a little stuffing with chopsticks in her right hand, wrapped it in the skin, and then pinched it left and right, and a wonton was "born" in her hand.
Pick up the dough, pick up the stuffing with chopsticks, carefully put it on the dough and squeeze it with both hands. I just feel sticky. Take a closer look and say, "Oh dear!" I couldn't help but shout it out-it turned out that the dough was broken and the stuffing came out. Hurriedly "first aid", it came out from the other side. Hurriedly wrap each other with another piece of dough, which is considered as blocking the "loophole". Finally, a jiaozi was wrapped with three pieces of dough.
When she washes her dirty clothes with soap, she rubs them together. Small soap bubbles emerged from the clothes and soon turned into many white bubbles.
She sighed at the window glass and rubbed her nails. A series of actions were clean and neat.
First, pour a small amount of oil into the pot. When the oil smokes, quickly pour the eggs into the pot. With a click, the egg quickly appeared in the oil pan. Its edge is like lace on a little girl's skirt.
Rinse the mop in the pool, then wring it out, then bend down, arch your front legs, stretch back and "hum" the floor.
A very light needle seems to be heavy in your hand. It takes a lot of effort to sew every stitch. Just after a few stitches, you are so tired that you start to sweat.
It's the nail's turn. I can't wait to soak the thread in saliva and then twist it. But once it is twisted, Xiaomao is twisted thin and long, and when the needle goes in, it just can't be inserted. I had to pull my hair down before I put it on. Then, tie a knot at the end of the line. Because there is saliva on the thread, I always stick my fingers to tie the knot at the end.
Good words and sentences describing characters
(1) A word that describes the appearance of a character.
Looking dignified and strong, with fine eyes, red ears and white, soft and red face.
Silver hair, bright eyes, eyes like a pool of fire, eyes like gold, thick eyebrows.
Good-natured, majestic, tall and burly, spirited and well dressed.
(2) Words describing the expressions of characters
Laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh.
Proud, cheerful, carefree and radiant.
Aggressive, depressed, sad, listless, tearful.
(3) Words describing the emotions of characters
Be elated, full of joy, anxious to return, relaxed and happy, ups and downs.
Convinced, preoccupied, worried and heartbroken.
Anger, fear, panic, anxiety and depression
(4) sentences describing characters
Her face has a pair of beautiful eyes, dotted with childish long eyelashes, like two crystal grapes.
Hei Hu, the child, has a strong head and two big eyes, and is very energetic.
His brow wrinkled tightly from time to time, forming a question mark between the two; Sometimes I stretch happily, like an exclamation point.
His red face sparkled like an apple ripe in September.
His ears are white and red, his helix is distinct, and his outer ring and inner ring are very symmetrical, like a carved work of art.
Her small mouth contains rich expressions: when you are happy, tilt your lips and make a face; When you are angry, you can catch a small oil pan by pouting. Words from this mouth sometimes make people angry and choke, but sometimes people can't help laughing.
Miss Li has beautiful hair, black and bright, thick and dense. When she stands in the sun and shakes her head gently, her hair will flash with colorful rings.
Xiao Hong, a classmate, is wearing a big braid, bright and black, with a pair of big black eyes embedded under her thick eyebrows. She looks beautiful, smiling, dancing like a treasure, smiling at each other, smiling from the sky.
Laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh, laugh.
Proud, cheerful, carefree and radiant.
Aggressive, depressed, sad, listless, tearful.
Her small mouth contains rich expressions: when you are happy, tilt your lips and make a face; When you are angry, you can catch a small oil pan by pouting. Words from this mouth sometimes make people angry and choke, but sometimes people can't help laughing.
Miss Li has beautiful hair, black and bright, thick and dense. When she stands in the sun and shakes her head gently, her hair will flash with colorful rings.
Classmate Xiao Hong is wearing a big braid, which is black and bright, with a pair of big black eyes embedded under her thick eyebrows. It looks beautiful.
She held a stack of wonton skins in her left hand, picked a little stuffing with chopsticks in her right hand, wrapped it in the skin, and then pinched it left and right, and a wonton was "born" in her hand.
Pick up the dough, pick up the stuffing with chopsticks, carefully put it on the dough and squeeze it with both hands. I just feel sticky. Take a closer look and say, "Oh dear!" I couldn't help but shout it out-it turned out that the dough was broken and the stuffing came out. Hurriedly "first aid", it came out from the other side. Hurriedly wrap each other with another piece of dough, which is considered as blocking the "loophole". Finally, a jiaozi was wrapped with three pieces of dough.
When she washes her dirty clothes with soap, she rubs them together. Small soap bubbles emerged from the clothes and soon turned into many white bubbles.
She sighed at the window glass and rubbed her nails. A series of actions were clean and neat.
First, pour a small amount of oil into the pot. When the oil smokes, quickly pour the eggs into the pot. With a click, the egg quickly appeared in the oil pan. Its edge is like lace on a little girl's skirt.
Rinse the mop in the pool, then wring it out, then bend down, arch your front legs, stretch back and "hum" the floor.
A very light needle seems to be heavy in your hand. It takes a lot of effort to sew every stitch. Just after a few stitches, you are so tired that you start to sweat.
It's the nail's turn. I can't wait to soak the thread in saliva and then twist it. But once it is twisted, Xiaomao is twisted thin and long, and when the needle goes in, it just can't be inserted. I had to pull my hair down before I put it on. Then, tie a knot at the end of the line. Because there is saliva on the thread, I always stick my fingers to tie the knot at the end.
Character description can be divided into appearance description (portrait, clothes, manner), language description, action description, psychological description and detail description according to the description object. Writing people, you can directly write hair and draw eyes to make them lifelike, which is called direct description; You can also write about people indirectly, such as introducing someone through a third party's report, comparing someone by describing a third party, and comparing someone by writing about scenery. According to the details, weight and shade of the characters described, we can also divide the description of characters into stick figures, comic sketches and detail descriptions.
First, draw a line.
Sketch text is simple, without rendering and contrast, without strong color description, without metaphor, analogy and other rhetorical devices, without or without adjectives, it is still an image description of things. For example, "at this time, a dark and thin gentleman came in, with a moustache, glasses and a pile of books in his hand." (Lu Xun's Mr. Fujino) In a few words, he vividly described the image of a scholar with a simple life and rigorous scholarship.
Second, comedy sketches.
That is to say, with exaggerated techniques and teasing tone, the characters are outlined as grotesque and absurd images to express ridicule, hatred, sympathy and other thoughts and feelings. For example, "if he looks down, he can't see his toes, which are long in the middle."
The rising part will block the view. Sparse gray hair, neatly combed back, dipped in water, no one is messy.
There is no wrinkle on her white face, like steamed bread just out of the pot. Because of fat, the nose and eyes are particularly small; Because it is small, it is particularly wonderful. "(Wang Runzi's Selling Crabs) created the image of" filter tip "through description: old and fat, neat and elegant, rich and superior. The description is permeated with the author's ridicule.
Third, the description of rich colors.
That is to say, with vivid, vivid and vivid language, the characters are portrayed in a multi-faceted, multi-level and multi-angle manner. Such as: "Sitting at the south end is a thin China man in his fifties; Wearing a gown, yellow teeth, a cigarette holder in his mouth, and then a puff of smoke. " "His face is yellow and white, and his thinness is worrying, like a person recovering from a serious illness, but he is in good spirits and shows no signs of depression. His hair is about an inch long. Obviously, he hasn't cut it for a long time, but he stands in high spirits. The beard is very eye-catching, like the word' one' written in thick ink. " "Yellow with a white face, worrying thin, with a few inches of hair on his head; A robe with yellow feather yarn; A beard like a' one' in the official language; Holding a yellow cigarette holder in his left hand, the cigarette end has been blackened. " (A Lei's One Side)
In these three places, the author depicts Lu Xun's mental outlook under difficult conditions through comprehensive and meticulous descriptions, and a great soldier image of "getting older and more tenacious" stands in front of us.
There are many ways to describe people, each with its own advantages, and students can use them flexibly according to the needs of writing.