If you want to get high scores, you should write down your own characteristics and "highlights" based on "correct" expressions.
1. Vocabulary selection - novelty
The use of "higher vocabulary" in writing mainly refers to the use of words that are not in the "Outline" and the use of new words through changes in word formation. words, use synonyms or antonyms to replace common words.
1) This house is on a building on Fangcao Street.
A: The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street.
B: The flat situates in a building on Fangcao Street.
Analysis: is in is Common words, while situations in are not in the "Outline" and are advanced words.
2) We do a lot of homework on weekends.
A: At weekends, we have a lot of homework to do.
B: At weekends, we have endless homework to do.
Analysis: B The sentence does not use the overly direct "a lot of" when expressing it, but uses "endless". Endless is a change from the "Outline" vocabulary end plus the suffix -less.
3) The bathroom and kitchen are both very good.
A: The bathroom and the kitchen are good.
B. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished.
When expressing the main point, sentence B Use well furnished, which has a stronger tone than good and also appears lively.
When making sentences, if you can use "higher vocabulary" appropriately and naturally, even if you only use one in the entire article, your composition will be different.
2. Structure of Sentences - Different
When constructing sentences, you should not only make them vivid but also concise.
1. Use expressions that are different from others, especially sentences that advocate breaking the constraints of Chinese sentence structure and reorganizing it are more popular.
1) A major earthquake occurred in Tangshan in the 1980s.
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
Most students It is correct to use the there be structure, but sentence B abandons common sentence patterns. It is commendable to find a new way and use the "subject + predicate + object" structure, and use words like terrible, hit/strike.
2) I received your letter of August 15th this morning.
A: I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning. (the method used by most people)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/got to me this morning .(Different from the way most people use it, concisely)
2. Use some strong sentence patterns, such as emphasis, exclamation, inversion, etc., to enhance the expressiveness of the statement. Such as:
3) Ah Fu saved my sister.
A: Ah Fu saved my sister. (General sentence pattern)
B: It was Ah Fu that saved my sister. (Emphatic sentence pattern)
4) We are very happy to see that the crops and vegetables are growing well.
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well. (general declarative sentence)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well. (exclamation sentence)< /p>
3. The sentence patterns are diverse, complex and appropriate. In writing, you should avoid using the same sentence patterns of the same length, but pay attention to changes in sentence patterns, such as combining long and short sentences, using simple sentences, parallel sentences and compound sentences, and using simplified sentences; some more complex structures Such as independent nominative case, participle structure, etc. can also be used.
In the following expression, Sentence A has many simple sentences and uses the there be structure in many places, which makes it appear monotonous and boring, while Sentence B has its own characteristics (please analyze it yourself).
5) This is a 25-square-meter house. The house has a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen. The bedroom has a bed, sofa, table, and chairs.
A: It's a flat of 25 square meters. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa , a desk and a chair as well.
B: It's a flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
3. Layout and planning - originality
In writing, we can arrange the key points according to time, space or other logical order. At the same time, in order to make the theme stand out, The structure is rigorous, and we should pay attention to learning and using explanatory sentences and topic sentences of paragraphs. In terms of layout and planning, the NMET2002 sample essay is a model. Please see:
Opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of ??entrance fees. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.
On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardens and other workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggested, however, fees should be charged low.
1) This article uses Opinions are divided... as the explanatory sentence, getting straight to the point. The following two paragraphs use topic sentences (see the bold text), making the full text compact and rigorous in expression.
2) When expressing the main points, the sample article also adjusts the order of the key points, such as "40% of the students believe that tickets should be collected, but they should not be too high." The first part is placed at the beginning of the sentence as a topic sentence, Then put a new sentence at the end of the sentence: They suggested, however, fees should be charged low. In this way, the priorities are clearly defined, the theme is highlighted, and the organization is clear.
3) The sample article uses conjunctions such as and, what is more, however, and on the other hand between paragraphs (indicating that the two views before and after are contradictory). The use of these connecting means strengthens the The connections between sentences and paragraphs make the article coherent and coherent.
4) In the second paragraph, the sample article adds details such as Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. This also solves the lack of coherence between sentences. Common methods of sex.
In short, if you want to make your articles bright, attract readers, and get high scores in exams, you should work hard on word choice, sentence construction, and article planning. Even if you have one specialty, it will be "highlights." "Points are all worthy of recognition.