Excerpts from beautiful articles and appreciation 1
Emotion is such a subtle word. Love is born from feelings, and feelings are born from feelings. Just because we have different emotions about things, our perceptions of things are different.
There is a fable in "Han Feizi". There was a rich man in the Song Dynasty whose wall was damaged by the rain. His son said, "If you don't repair it, someone will steal it." The neighbor also said the same, and the result was that It was indeed stolen. The rich man thought his son was smart and his neighbor was suspicious. This fable also illustrates how emotional closeness affects our perception of things. In the same sentence, why is the son smart but the neighbor is suspicious? It is precisely because I feel that my son is closer emotionally, so I feel that I am thinking about myself; and the neighbor's words may be almost a curse.
Lin Qingxuan has an article "Falling in the Wind, Not Because of the Wind", which tells that when she fell while walking when she was a child, her grandmother always blamed the wind, "Why did it trip my good grandson?" Because she loves herself so much. His grandson, so he always feels that his grandson is right and it is the wind that is abominable. Grandma’s kindness and kindness are vividly reflected on the page. This also shows that emotional closeness determines our understanding of things.
The same song sounds different to different people in different situations. It was "The Song of Colorful Clothes and Feathers" composed by Emperor Xuanzong of the Tang Dynasty. What he heard from it was a world of flowers, while what we heard from it was the sound of a subjugated country.
Because of our love for Yue Fei, we say, "Auspicious mountains bury loyal bones." Because of our hatred for Qin Hui, we say, "Innocent white iron casts innocent servants."
I remember a poet once said: "The state of mind comes from the heart." To a great extent, it expresses the relationship between emotion and cognition.
So, let us look at the world with kind and beautiful feelings. Since a world can be seen in a flower, then let us sit and watch the clouds roll, see a beautiful world, put infinity in the palm of our hands, and collect eternity in a moment.
Because we are close, it is beautiful!
Appreciation
This perfect composition is full of affection, both emotional and elegant, and beautiful in both quality and quality. The candidates poured out their true feelings from the heart, which has touching power.
The title of the article clearly puts forward the view that "because it is close, it is beautiful." The full text closely revolves around the "topic", with citations and quotations, and the arguments are powerful and can be read through the back of the paper. From ancient poetry to today's beautiful essays, from fables to historical facts, the content is rich and the language is resounding. The article ends with "Because it is close, it is beautiful", which corresponds to the title of the article, deepens the power of the article, and leaves a deep impression on people.
The article is full of literary talent. For example, whole sentences like "Emotion comes from feeling, and feeling comes from emotion" can be found everywhere in the article, and they are scattered and intertwined in a well-proportioned manner; For example, "Looking at the flying stream flying down three thousand feet, we feel a kind of heroism; looking at the proud snow and green pines standing in the north wind, we feel unyielding. Looking at a bright moon hanging high in the sky, we think of hope for people "For a long time, thousands of miles away, the beauty of the moon" is such a pleasing parallelism that makes people feel fragrant and have endless aftertaste after reading it. The exquisite and elegant language makes this examination essay charming and dazzling.
In short, this is a masterpiece that is profound and full of literary talent. Excerpt and appreciation of the beautiful article 2
At dusk in autumn, a fallen leaf stirs up people's mood and stirs up the family of four under the tree.
The daughter said: "Emotions are the most perfect and beautiful things in life."
The son said: "Emotions are mixed with reason to make life perfect." Their sister One of the two brothers stared deeply at the fallen leaves falling on the ground, while the other raised his head high and curiously looked at the scattered yellow leaves on the treetops.
Mom said: "Emotions can often create miracles!"
Dad's disapproving eyes clearly said: "Reason is more important than emotion!"
Then They were all lost in thought.
Only the autumn wind hovered gently over their heads, not knowing whether to inject emotion or support reason.
Dad said: "Since ancient times, there has been a saying: 'Don't kiss your relatives alone, don't treat your children like their own children'. Even though family affection is valuable, it cannot be used as a standard to judge things."
The daughter is a little dissatisfied: "'What is love in the world, it can make life and death mutually agreeable'. If emotions are indistinguishable from severity to depth, why do they always make people want to leave them?"
This season , is a confusing season. I appreciate the "father"'s "not only kissing his own relatives, not only his children", but I also acquiesce in the "daughter"'s "asking what love is in the world".
Think of a letter from a friend far away in the north. He said that he was standing under a big tree. Autumn was also autumn. He felt that in a moment, autumn seemed to have passed through his fingers. ——He said, autumn is so short!
And I am also standing under the big tree, it is also autumn, the breath of autumn is floating in every corner, entangled in everyone's heart - autumn is so long, I said.
Later, I finally learned that he was the "Yu Dafu" of the North, and the autumn in his eyes was "the autumn of the North." While I am in the south, for him, I am enjoying a long and lovely autumn. After all, distance makes feelings estranged and makes a tree go to two different destinies under the same autumn sky.
Appreciation
The article is not so much a conversation between a family of four, as it is a unique "sketch" painted. "One leaf falls and the world knows autumn." One autumn leaf "tempers" the emotions of a family of four and friends from the north and the south; different emotions "tone" the same autumn leaves.
As autumn leaves are like this, shouldn’t everything in the world be like this? With the appearance of "Yu Dafu", he is no longer a "person", but a conventional image - those who have read "Autumn in the Old Capital" should feel the same way, and Gu Cheng's poem has a finishing touch. The full text is both clear and implicit, full of poetry and painting. Excerpt and appreciation of the beautiful article 3
When I was eight or nine years old, I often went to the woods to catch praying mantises.
One time, I went to catch praying mantises and unexpectedly found a female praying mantis eating a male praying mantis with relish. I have a question about this: How can the same kind eat the same kind? From this, I came up with the idea of ??studying this phenomenon, so I conducted an experiment: I caught two mantises from the woods, both male, and put them in a box. The next day, I saw two mantises. The mantises are all alive and well. I have another question about this, why don't they bite each other? I did another experiment. I deliberately caught a male praying mantis and a female praying mantis and put them together. The next day, I saw that the male mantis was eaten by the female mantis again. Why? I began to observe the living female praying mantis with doubts. The belly of the female praying mantis grew bigger and bigger day by day. After a while, the female praying mantis actually gave birth to mantis eggs. Why is this? I consulted a lot of information with various questions, and finally got the answer. It turns out that the male praying mantis contains the nutrients that the female praying mantis needs when she lays eggs.
From this incident, I came to a conclusion: life is full of knowledge, and as long as we observe carefully, we will definitely gain something.
Appreciation:
This composition is unique from conception to reasoning. It gets straight to the point and ends with a concise conclusion. The structure of this article is rigorous and clear-cut, especially the second paragraph is clearer, and the process of researching the problem is credible. The young author of this article was able to discover problems while playing. What is even more valuable is that he also started to study this problem. After several questions and experiments, he finally came to a conclusion. This spirit is worth learning.
Excerpts and Appreciation of Essays 4
Jiangnan
On the water, there are ancient stone bridges arched like a graceful eyebrow; under the stone bridge, there are bridges in the water, and there are people. Japanese umbrellas, dogs and gardenias, bamboo hats, and the burdens of selling steamed cakes all swayed in the ripples of light. The two banks of the river were narrow and steep; there were corridors with horses and pavilions on the banks. There are teahouses, bookstores, and wine shops that stretch out to the river; there are also stone stairwells at the back doors of every household. Sisters and sisters squat on the stone stairwells, washing vegetables, washing their feet, and washing rice; their printed scarves, like Blossoming colorful herbs; their soft words are like the return of purple swallows, playing murmuring spring songs; on the bridge, under the bridge, in the bamboo baskets, there are fresh carp, saury, mandarin fish; bamboo In the basket, there are dripping water chestnuts, lotus roots, wild rice, and water chestnuts; although the small streets are paved with stone slabs, they feel like they are soaked in water, like river bays, and they are fishy and smelly. Maybe, this is Jiangnan. A sketch of a corner of Jiangnan.
That Suzhou Pingtan, that soft and pretty sound of strings; that girl who is more beautiful and smarter than Xi Shi; perhaps, this is the image and character of Jiangnan.
Appreciation:
The prose poem "Jiangnan" is a beautiful article: the beauty lies in the poetic and picturesque artistic conception; the beauty lies in its clear and meaningful words and sentences. The beauty of emotion and the beauty of language merge into the special style of this article. "Jiangnan" is a beautiful picture of the water town in the south of the Yangtze River, which is fascinating to read.
Taking "Jiangnan" as the title is somewhat difficult to write: Jiangnan is so vast, and there are so many scenery and customs to write about. How to write and how to choose the angle are all very thoughtful. This article appropriately selects the unique region of "Jiangnan Water Town", and outlines the waterscape and characters in a stretched and concise style. The full text only has 285 words, and it only describes a corner of Jiangnan. But this corner is the epitome of Jiangnan, a typical Jiangnan that highlights the characteristics of Jiangnan. There is indeed one leaf to know the beauty of autumn.