This article "Zhaozhou Bridge" uses the name of the building as the title of the article. The title is concise and clear. People will know through the title that the content of this article is to introduce Zhaozhou Bridge, and I have made some guesses about the content. It is estimated that it will talk about the history of the building, the origin of the name, the characteristics of the building, and maybe something related to the building. knowledge and increase the cultural heritage of architecture. With these guesses, the reader is led to read on. This provides us with a direction for writing titles in the future, using such a concise and clear title.
On the Mihe River in Zhao County, Hebei Province, there is a world-famous stone arch bridge called Anji Bridge, also called Zhaozhou Bridge. It was designed and built by Li Chun, a stonemason from the Sui Dynasty, and it has been more than 1,400 years ago.
[Note: 樨 pronunciation xiáo, this is the name of a river. According to the Zhaozhou Bridge has a history of more than 1,400 years, then the history of this river must be It has a longer history than this bridge. There was a river first. Because the river brought inconvenience to people's lives, the bridge was born. Therefore, this river is also an ancient river. Maybe in history, nearby residents should have suffered from this. Despite the disasters caused by the river, the bridge has facilitated and improved people's lives. To a certain extent, it is also a powerful testimony of mankind's transformation of nature and its victory over nature. World Famous: This bridge is famous all over the world. It can also be replaced with: world-famous, famous at home and abroad. In this paragraph, I also learned that another name of Zhaozhou Bridge is Anji Bridge. This text is titled "Zhaozhou Bridge", which means that Zhaozhou Bridge is the scientific name and famous name of this bridge. Zhaozhou is Doesn’t it just refer to Zhao County? For example, Zhuozhou in Baoding is also called Zhuoxian, and Xiongxian is called Xiongzhou in history. Most people probably only know the name Zhaozhou Bridge. In the lyrics "Who will build the Zhaozhou Bridge?" the Zhaozhou Bridge is used. I think the locals of Anji Bridge know more about it. In ancient times, people named it There is a kind of beautiful sustenance and blessing. Anji means comfort and relief. It should be the local people using this bridge to express their best wishes for comfort and relief. They hope that this bridge can block floods, facilitate transportation, and allow the people to live and work here in peace and contentment. The origin of the two names of Zhaozhou Bridge is that one is based on the place name and the other is based on the simple and beautiful wishes of the people. The first paragraph introduces the location of Zhaozhou Bridge, which has a long history and is world-famous. The first paragraph of the text briefly and clearly tells us some important information about Zhaozhou Bridge, giving us an overall preliminary impression of Zhaozhou Bridge, and making us feel that Zhaozhou Bridge has a long history, is world-famous, and is worthy of our visit. Getting closer to her and understanding her in more detail captures the reader's interest. I am also a Hebei native, and I feel proud that our land of Yanzhao has such historical and cultural heritage. In my impression, Zhaoxian County is quite famous for its snowflake pear. I guess the Zhaoxian County where the snowflake pear is famous is the same place as the Zhaoxian County in the article, but I have to check the information. ]
Zhaozhou Bridge is very majestic. The bridge is more than fifty meters long and nine meters wide, with carriages and horses passing in the middle and people walking on both sides. Such a long bridge is entirely made of stones. There is no bridge underneath, only an arched bridge hole, spanning the river more than 37 meters wide. There are two small arched bridge holes on the left and right sides of the top of the bridge. Normally, the river flows through the bridge holes. When there is a flood, the river water can still flow through the four small bridge holes. This design is a pioneering work in the history of bridge construction. It not only reduces the impact of running water on the bridge body, making the bridge less likely to be destroyed by floods, but also reduces the weight of the bridge body and saves stone materials.
[Note: Majestic: magnificent. Finding synonyms is also a good way to understand words. Zhaozhou Bridge is very majestic and is the central sentence of this paragraph. The following content is all about this central service. This is also a way of writing, summarizing first and dividing later. This way the organization is fresh and easy to highlight the center. The second sentence uses two numbers to tell us specifically the size of Zhaozhou Bridge, more than fifty meters and more than nine meters. The two words "more than fifty meters" in these two phrases show that the author's word choice is accurate and expresses the author's rigorous writing attitude.
At this time, I remembered the tunnel in "Cricket's House" in the first volume of the fourth grade. The tunnel curved along the terrain, and was no more than nine inches deep and one finger wide. This is how the tunnel in "Cricket's House" was no more than nine inches deep. It has the same purpose. These imprecise figures better reflect the author's accurate wording and the author's rigorous and serious research attitude. The third and fourth sentences introduce the design characteristics of Zhaozhou Bridge in detail. There is a large arched bridge opening, and there are two small arched bridge openings on its left and right sides. The author observes carefully and expresses it clearly. Let us readers who have never seen Zhaozhou Bridge accurately picture the appearance of Zhaozhou Bridge in our minds. I think if children read these words carefully, they will be able to draw what Zhaozhou Bridge looks like. Reading this aroused my question: Why did designers and builders design it this way? It seems that the author can guess the reader's mind, and the last sentence of this paragraph solves this question. This design has two benefits: 1. Reduce the impact force and make the bridge stronger. 2. Save stones and resources. This also echoes the first paragraph of "Zhaozhou Bridge has a history of 1,400 years." It is precisely because of this ingenious and intelligent design that Zhaozhou Bridge can still stand tall after more than 1,400 years of baptism. On the Ming River. "When there is a flood, the river can still flow through the four small bridge holes." In "When there is a flood", it can be seen that this place must have had floods before, and probably many times. People must have suffered. The disaster caused by floods. After the floods, houses were washed away, posing a threat to the lives and property of the villagers. Because of the suffering, the designer came up with such a unique design. It also confirms my previous inference that Anji Bridge entrusts people's good wishes for comfort and relief. The Zhaozhou Bridge has truly achieved this. Its solidity allows floods to escape safely from the bridge, allowing people to live and work here in peace and contentment. Innovation: A great idea or approach that has never appeared before. This keyword accurately summarizes the important role of the design of Zhaozhou Bridge. After reading this, I thought of the world-famous part in the first paragraph. It is precisely because it is a pioneering work that it is world-famous. This bridge was designed by the Chinese more than 400 years ago. It embodies the efforts and talents of the Chinese people and shows their ingenuity. I remember what was written in "The Great Wall": stepping on the square bricks under my feet and holding on to the stone strips on the wall, I naturally thought of the working people in ancient times. I think if I stood on the Zhaozhou Bridge and saw her intelligent design, I would also think of her designers and builders, and I would be convinced at that time. At that time, there were no modern mechanical tools like today. How did we Yanzhao people build such a strong bridge that is more than fifty meters long and nine meters wide? There is no pier in the middle. Such a long-span bridge has experienced more than 1,400 years of history and is still so strong. After the baptism of time and the erosion of floods, can it still safely span the Mihe River? I can’t help but admire and admire us Chinese descendants even more.
This bridge is not only strong but also beautiful. There are stone railings on both sides of the bridge deck, and the railings are carved with exquisite patterns: some are carved with two dragons intertwined with each other, spitting beautiful water splashes from their mouths; some are carved with two flying dragons, with their front paws touching each other, each Looking back and looking into the distance; some are engraved with two dragons playing with beads. All the dragons seemed to be swimming, as if they were alive.
[Annotation: solid: firm. Beautiful: refers to beautiful appearance. Yuanwang: looking from a distance. "Not only... but also..." is a related word in a progressive relationship. The related words in this relationship are: not only... but also..., not only... but also..., not only... but also.... The first sentence of this paragraph is connected with not only... but also.... It is a transitional sentence and plays the role of connecting the previous paragraph and the next. It is not only a summary of the previous paragraph, but also a general guide for this paragraph. If the previous paragraph could be summed up with one keyword, it would be solid, and this paragraph would be beautiful. This section mainly introduces the exquisite earthenware tables carved on the railings to explain the characteristic of beauty. The fence is engraved with exquisite patterns followed by a colon, indicating that the author will explain the exquisite patterns in the following content. Correct punctuation can also help people understand the meaning of the words.
The author uses three "some" to list the various forms of carved dragons. The dragons on the railings must have other forms. Some are soaring into the sky, leaping into the sky, and some are swimming in the sea and dancing with the waves. Playing, some closed their eyes and enjoyed their leisure, and some bared their teeth to show the majesty of the dragon. I especially want to know how many dragons there are on this fifty-meter-long bridge. It would be great if there was an exact number. Regarding the forms of dragons, the author only lists three types, leaving room for imagination. Children can imagine as much as they want during class. Since there are many other forms, why does the author use periods instead of ellipses? Is it related to the colon used after the beautiful pattern in the front? The last sentence of this paragraph is the writer's feelings when seeing these exquisite patterns. The ancient people were wise and ingenious, so the dragon seemed to be alive. It really looks like it is alive, which means that the shape of the dragon is lifelike and lifelike. These are all made by the hands of ancient working people. In fact, it is also a tribute to the working people. When I first read the text, I thought this could be replaced with "all the dragons seem to be swimming, lifelike.". When I thought about it later, although the meaning was the same and the idiom "lifelike" was used, it felt very awkward. It seemed that with this change, the text became even more inappropriate. It seems that writing is not about writing well if you use more good words and sentences. articles, but choose appropriate and appropriate words. Sometimes simple language can express clearer meaning. The working people in ancient times were able to build this bridge not only strong, but also beautiful. It not only brought convenience to people's production and life, but also enriched people's lives. When you walk on this bridge, you can also enjoy the beautiful scenery. Such a beautiful pattern is sure to be pleasing to the eye. These exquisite patterns give Zhaozhou Bridge rich cultural connotations. We Chinese have been a nation full of wisdom since ancient times, which demonstrates the craftsmanship of the Chinese people. We are able to carve such an exquisite and exquisite dragon. It is really ingenious! Generally speaking, this paragraph also uses the form of total score, allowing us to truly feel the beauty of Zhaozhou Bridge. ] Zhaozhou Bridge embodies the wisdom and talent of the working people and is a precious historical and cultural heritage of our country. [Note: This paragraph is a summary of this article, reflecting the main body of this article's praise of the ancient working people. I am proud to live in such a Chinese nation, which can inspire people's patriotic feelings. Zhaozhou Bridge is a precious cultural heritage of our country and a precious cultural heritage of Hebei. As a Hebei person, I feel sincerely proud. There are many precious cultural heritages in our land of Yanzhao, such as the Zhili Governor's Office in Baoding, the Lotus Pond in Baoding, and the Yaowang Temple in Anguo, Baoding... These are the crystallization of the wisdom of working people, and we must protect them. . Children can also be let in at this time]
[General approval: From the content point of view, this is an article introducing the Zhaozhou Bridge. The article mainly introduces the Zhaozhou Bridge. The strong and beautiful features of the state bridge.
From the perspective of the theme, this article expresses the author's admiration for the working people. The author's deep feelings can be felt throughout the article. The words "world famous" and "has a history of more than 1,400 years" at the beginning reflect the author's affirmation of the status and history of Zhaozhou Bridge. In the second paragraph, "Zhaozhou Bridge is very majestic", we can also feel the author's praise of Zhaozhou Bridge. The author introduces the exquisite patterns on the bridge. It is because of his love that he can observe them so carefully and write them so vividly. The last paragraph is the best summary of the theme of this article, and the summary is the finishing touch of this article.
From the expression point of view, this article as a whole belongs to the structure of total points. This is also the method used in general articles. This structure is clear and organized, making it easier for readers to understand the article. The second and third paragraphs adopt a total score structure.
The text of this article is concise and not difficult to understand. Difficult words like pioneering are not difficult to understand based on the context. It allows children to get close to Zhaozhou Bridge and learn about it. The concise and clear structure of the article is helpful for children to understand the article. During class, attention should be paid to guiding children to apply it in writing. When studying the second and third paragraphs, you can set aside time in class for children to introduce an object in the form of total scores. This can also help children to have clear thinking and organization when writing.
This article is a fourth-grade text. Considering the age and psychological characteristics of the children, I think it would be more effective if a story related to Zhaozhou Bridge could be added to the content of the article. It increases the interest in reading and also increases the cultural heritage of Zhaozhou Bridge. If the Forbidden City has no story, it is just a bunch of houses. I feel that my suggestion makes sense. When I teach this text, I will definitely let the children collect short stories about Zhaozhou Bridge in advance.
After studying this text, I will guide the children to use the structure of this text to complete the article "My School", to combine reading and writing, and to be good at finding writing training from the text. Points, one lesson, one lesson, effectively improve students' writing level.
Connect with the students’ real life. The children have never seen Zhaozhou Bridge, nor have they seen a dragon, so this lesson requires children to collect pictures and videos about Zhaozhou Bridge before class. , let them have a preliminary impression of Zhaozhou Bridge. Teachers must choose few valuable pictures and videos, but they must be precise. Let pictures and videos serve the article properly.
This is the first time I have done a text interpretation. As a pure reader, these are the only things that come to my mind. Sometimes when I think of something while eating, I immediately go to the computer to add it. It’s really It is indeed a very brain-burning thing to rack my brains, but this is also the first time I have done such an assignment. It is troublesome and hard-working, but it is also rewarding.