Hello ~
Distant Altair, Jiao Jiao River Han female can not be changed to "distant Altair, Jiao Jiao Vega"
There are two reasons.
1. The revised poem repeats the previous sentence without rhyme.
2. Hehan refers to the Milky Way, which means the Weaver Girl on the other side of the Milky Way. It can intuitively give people a feeling of facing each other from a distance, but the revised poems can't show this artistic conception ~