In the fourth and fifth sentences, the pounding of horses' hooves and the sobbing of trumpets sang harmoniously and swayed forward in the mountains. The first three lines have spread such a sad landscape layer by layer. In this landscape full of frosty moons, the Long March of the Red Army is as fierce as Xiao's cold. The poet only uses "horseshoe" and "trumpet" to represent the Red Army, and also uses "broken" and "swallow" to describe his mood. The text is concise, accurate and beautiful, and the scenes complement each other. "Shuideng Jiankang Banquet Pavilion", in a piece of rainbow sound, in the bitter wind and rain: "Who is the money, in exchange for a red scarf and green sleeves, crying for the hero? "。 Xin Qiji's ci in Mao Zedong's poems, especially in the first half, got a perfect response, comparable to heroic desolation.
Subsequently, the repetition of the situational sentence of "Frost Moon" is, of course, the stipulation of epigraph, and at the same time plays a connecting role. The words "horseshoe broken, horn swallowed" vividly describe the action of the Red Army. The author uses the "broken" appearance of things to describe the sound of horseshoes and "swallows" to describe the sound of horns, which is accurate and wonderful. "Broken" means that the hoofbeat is urgent and low; "Swallow" not only means that the horn is not very loud, but also means the bravery of fighting. From the description of these two representative voices, we can appreciate the agility of the Red Army. In fact, the Red Army just caught the enemy off guard and captured this great pass that is easy to defend but difficult to attack. The text does not directly describe the process of the battle, but from these two sentences, we can imagine the tension and fierceness of the battle.
Shang Tan's four sentences describing scenery are actually not natural scenery, but the scenery in the author's eyes. As Wang Guowei said, "I am in the landscape" is really a landscape in love, and it is necessary to express the feelings in the landscape and the author's feelings and thoughts. Therefore, the description of the scenery here is actually just an externalized scene of the author's true feelings, which is what the author sees by projecting his own mood onto the surrounding scenery. It is because of the cold that the west wind is strong, and it is because of the difficult road that first frost is heavy; It is because of depression that I heard the geese crying, the hooves breaking and the horns swallowing. This is also a true portrayal of the Red Army's winter night March. Uptown as a whole is gloomy, the sky is not bright, the wind in Leng Yue is bleak, and the March is difficult, which is not bright at all. The tone set by uptown is gloomy and depressing, and the phrase "horseshoe broken, horn swallowed" makes people feel depressed. In the second half, I started with two sentences, one tragic and the other heroic. I didn't write about the fierce battle to seize Loushanguan, but pointed out that even though the mountain is long and the road is difficult, I have decided to start from scratch. According to the general composition, Xia Kun can express the hardships of marching by writing about the hardships of people and roads, and then deepen this tone and write a difficult lyric work about the Long March. But the author didn't do this, but changed a pen, and he was born. The tone of the whole word took a 180 degree turn. At the beginning of Xiatan, although the tone is relaxed, the word "as true as iron" highlights the hardship of grasping this great barrier-the author artistically concretizes and visualizes "hardship" through the hardness and heaviness of the image of "iron", and the conception is very clever, and the word "as true as iron" is used wonderfully, which makes people surpass it. Therefore, it has been widely read and become a good sentence. But the word "rambling" in the sentence shows the heroic feelings of contempt and hardship. The connotation of the sentence "The majestic pass is as true as iron" is extremely rich. "Now step forward from the beginning" is a natural extension of the previous sentence. "One step" is a big step. After the battle, "Xiongguan" has now become a thoroughfare. The words "from beginning to end" have condensed the inner feelings of many efforts and breakthroughs. The strong determination and fearless courage of this revolutionary team to cross the Xiongguan and the obstacles came out. Express your heroism and confidence in winning. The poet feels that even if he has suffered some failures in the past, he can "start all over again".
There are two scenes in the Ci collection, "Cangshan is like the sea and the sunset is like blood", which are very affectionate. The previous sentence is about mountains. "Cangshan" is Castle Peak. Not only wrote the color of the mountain, but also vaguely revealed the author's joy. "Like the sea" means that the mountains are endless, just like the blue sea. It not only shows the magnificent mountain scenery, but also shows the author standing on a high place looking out, and a magnificent spirit lingers in the sentence. The last sentence is sunset. "Blood" means that the sunset is as red as blood. It points out the specific time when the Red Army successfully crossed the river, and through this magnificent picture, it reminds people of the great spirit of the Red Army without hesitation and fear of sacrifice. This is also a response to the connotation of "as true as iron" in the first sentence of the first and second sentences. These two vivid metaphors not only describe the scenery, but also are full of feelings. I wrote the scene of dusk, from dawn to dusk. At first glance, it is jumping and undulating, and it is incoherent. However, the author took advantage of this dislocation of time and space to describe such a scene: at dawn day after day, the Red Army had already passed the steep pass, defeated the enemy, occupied Loushanguan and left the difficulties and obstacles behind. After a day of fierce fighting, filled with smoke and blood, the heroic Red Army soldiers fell on the battlefield. Their blood dyed the mountains of Loushanguan red, and the flag of the Red Army fluttered in the fierce west wind, which was especially bright red in the sunset. At this time, the poet stood at the top of Loushanguan, looking at the rolling mountains in the distance, as vast as the sea. The sunset at dusk gradually set and the afterglow was as red as blood. The beauty of the scroll is just in line with the bleak and gloomy realm of freehand brushwork, and this realm of freehand brushwork is one of the beauty of the Han style. Li Bai's Memory of Qin E has "the afterglow of the west wind, the tomb of the Han family." Wang Guowei, a close friend, commented in "Words on Earth": "A few words is a thousand years." Mao Zedong's last two lines are broad and boundless, echoing the spirit of Li Bai. At the same time, Mao Zedong's two lines are even more heroic and magnificent. This word was written after the fierce battle in Loushanguan, taking the battle of Loushanguan as the theme. Although it describes the marching scene across Loushanguan, it describes what it saw, heard and felt after the victory, but it uses a highly comprehensive method and profile description method to condense the two-day battle course into one day. Through the serious and tense marching atmosphere, the omen of fierce fighting is revealed. Through the fierce west wind, the harsh geese's calls, the broken and rapid hoofs and the intermittent,
This poem is a masterpiece of all Mao Zedong's ci works. Throughout the poem, the first half is scenery and the second half is lyrical. Scenery is affectionate, and there is a scene in it. The combination of scenery, water and milk embodies Mao Zedong's talent and skills as a poet. Its structure is also unique, with the upper part gloomy and the lower part enthusiastic. The upper part is cold and the lower part is warm. Color contrast is strong, and emotional contrast is also strong. The sharp contrast between the upper and lower parts just reflects the author's optimism and boldness as a great conductor of a generation. This word is generous and sad, and can be regarded as a boutique. The whole poem only describes a battle of the Central Red Army, but it is a true reflection of the important historical event of the Red Army's Long March. There are only forty-six words in the whole article. Although the length is short, it is magnificent, solemn and stirring, and the momentum is like a rainbow. Only a few strokes, "weight" is very heavy, like a stick figure written by a master. The brushwork is concise and endless, outlining a magnificent winter night March, showing the author's calm tolerance and mind in the face of failure and difficulties. Cheng, a writer who personally fought in Loushanguan, recalled: "This word vividly describes the moving scene of the Red Army commanders and soldiers from dawn to the end of the battle in the evening. The west wind is fierce, the geese are singing all over the sky, and the Red Army marches in the frost morning. The sound of hooves is slight and the horn is low, which is a serious scene before the war. After the battle, Xiongguan was also occupied by us, and everyone strode through and marched bravely towards the rolling mountains in the evening. It's no big deal to write all the words. Despite the difficulties and obstacles ahead, we can still work hard. "
When expounding the relationship between poetry style and personality, Cang Kejia commented: "A person's personality is closely related to his creation. Nowadays, some poets don't go deep into life and write poems indoors. When they make small achievements, they become cocky and extremely arrogant. Poetry is the expression of people's hearts. Can people write really good poems if they don't keep pace with the times and unite as one? In my opinion, we should learn from Chairman Mao and his virtues-modesty and approachability. Some people who write poems have a weak concept of truly serving the people and a strong desire for fame and fortune. Chairman Mao wrote poems and never wanted to publish them. He never wanted to be a poet. When he writes a poem, he feels what he feels. In the war-torn era, he recited poems on horseback, full of poetry, and he would be unhappy if he didn't recite them. This beautiful and noble feeling can only write a good poem if it comes out. "
Commenting on Sidu Chishui, Sun said: "It can be said that it was the success of this battle that laid the foundation for the Red Army's smooth arrival in northern Shaanxi, and also laid Mao Zedong's position as the main member of the three-person military command group to command the military in an all-round way. To this end, Mao Zedong is naturally unforgettable and proud. " The word "recalling Qin 'e Loushanguan" is generally considered by connoisseurs to be about scenery, even Guo Moruo thinks so. Literary and art circles also have different views on whether to write this word once or twice. The author directly responded after reading Guo Moruo's appreciation of this poem on1May 9, 962. Guo Moruo's analysis of this word was completely deleted, and he wrote a descriptive text about this poem in Guo Moruo's tone: "This word was written later, and he walked more than 100 miles that day to command the battle. How can he have time to hum this word? " There are many provinces in the south. There is no snow in winter, or there is no snow for many years, only frost. There are geese in the sky. Abortion is not very cold, just like late autumn in the north, Yunguichuan, that's all. According to the author, the phrase "Cangshan is like the sea, and the sunset is like blood" is an observation of the scenery accumulated in the war for many years. Speaking of Loushanguan, the victory of the war and the sudden encounter of natural scenery make the author feel that these two sentences are quite successful. "