When writing in the examination room, you must write the opening paragraph well, hold the reader's eyes tightly, and let the reader follow your thoughts involuntarily. Generally speaking, there are many ways to start, and one of them is the most important, that is: concise and clear, and quickly get to the topic. Please look at the opening skills of the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in recent years.
Tip 1: Cut to the chase and be straightforward.
It refers to the method that the beginning of the article should be closely related to the theme and slightly explained. This is a common and effective composition method. This method of solving problems first is widely used. For example, writing a person's article can start with the main characters; Write an article about something, just grasp the beginning of the main event and deduct the topic. However, the topic should be flexible, not that the first sentence of any composition should be deducted from the topic, but that the beginning part should enter the topic as soon as possible.
My friend, how do you feel when you see mountains of garbage, streams and rivers stinking and harmful gases poisoning people? At that time, I was so angry that I wanted to shout loudly: "Please pay attention to the living environment of human beings!" (selected from the full text of Guangdong senior high school entrance examination "I pay attention to human living environment")
Tips: You must clearly express your opinions when writing argumentative essays in the examination room. It is a common but practical method to come straight to the point and make a clear attitude when writing. At the beginning of this paper, the way of asking questions and answering questions is adopted, which is concise and powerful, and clearly shows my own views, laying the foundation for the later development.
When you are in pain, you will go home and vent in tears; When you are upset, you will go home and let the warmth of home dispel the dark clouds in your heart; Home-what melts in is sadness, and what melts out is happiness; Home-accept sadness and release happiness. What a nice home! (Selected from the composition "Home, It's Good" in the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province)
Tip: Narration can also come straight to the point. You see, this article uses parallelism to express the feeling of "home" without any cover. Set the tone for the full text.
Let's look at some good starting examples:
1) Everyone has his own memorable memories. I did a novel and interesting thing, and it can surprise people to say it. That's roasted grasshoppers. Roasted grasshopper
2) Brother, what a kind name! Whenever I see those innocent children walking hand in hand with his brother on the road; Whenever I see someone else's brother tutoring my younger brother and sister in their studies; Whenever other children call me brother, I can't help thinking of you, my dear brother. Miss you, brother
3) Kaifeng, the ancient city, is the capital of the Northern Song Dynasty, and Long Ting in Kaifeng is a dazzling pearl in the history of ancient architecture in China. I'll believe that when I see it. Last summer vacation, I was lucky enough to visit Long Ting with my mother. Travel notes of long ting
4) I didn't know the beauty of Taiwan Province Province until Alishan; I didn't know the greatness of Taiwan Province Province until Alishan. Mountaineering railway, forest, sea of clouds, sunrise and sunset glow are indeed the characteristics of Alishan, which can be called "Five Wonders of Alishan". (Yang Yifeng's Five Musts of Alishan)
5) Looking for an autumn dress, I accidentally saw the scarf at the bottom of the box. It is made of black velvet rope with wide stripes ... in this simple wool fabric, I will never forget the story. It was more than ten years ago, on a stormy day, my father came to see me at school from his hometown. ..... (The student's composition "Father and Daughter" was changed to "A Black Scarf")
Tip 2: design suspense and fascination.
Create a puzzle in a certain way from the beginning, suspend the reader's mind and thoughts, make others want to find out the details, and attract others to continue reading. This is a better way to start. In fact, this kind of opening form is very rich, such as: ① Ask an unsolved question first. (2) intercept a wonderful event first. (3) first explain an object that plays a clue role. (4) First, arrange a scene that triggers the story. ⑤ Introduce the characters closely related to the story first.
Example:
1) A sentence "Oh, my God! What should I do? What should I do? " It's midnight and I still can't sleep. Thinking of Dahua's nervous and disappointed expression this morning, my conscience constantly condemns myself. ("What should I do")
Dad, it's two o'clock in the morning. Do you know that your daughter has been standing by the door for a long time? Recalling the "civil war" that happened during the day, I feel so sad. ("Say sorry")
C "Dad" is a kind name that students don't know how many times to call every day, but I can only call "Dad" silently in my heart. my father and I
2) "The battalion chief fought." "The battalion chief was taken away by the police." The news blew all over the campus with the morning breeze and blew into everyone's ears. The battalion chief is Li Daming, a famous good student in Class 2, No.4 Middle School. "His nose is bleeding, and so is the person who fought with him." Students who went to school in the morning said that they saw Li Daming being taken to the police station on their way to school. The news spread more and more, and the whole school suddenly became lively. My Deskmate
3) Suddenly received a small package. I opened it gently and was shocked. Isn't this the rain flower stone collected by Lei Lei? Did she give it to me? She doesn't blame me anymore? I want to know ... (Rain Flower Stone) one.
4) The little beggar who used to wander around turned out to be a college student. When Xin Wang began to tell me about his extraordinary experience, tears welled up in his eyes before he could say it. How many memories did he remember ... ("Unusual Encounter")
5) Professor Su Lin, a famous vocalist, found an incredible thing: among the more than 200 candidates who took the entrance examination for the Conservatory of Music, there was a 20-year-old girl, Chen Yiling, who got excellent results in the initial examination. This is the first time that Professor Su Lin has met such a young and talented candidate. However, in the second interview, Chen Yiling's performance was very disappointing. ("Second Inspection")
Typical example:
I'm dying-I'm lying in a hospital bed, surrounded by darkness and very quiet, and I can only hear my weak breathing in such a big room. Nurses only come in when taking medicine or giving injections, and seldom talk to me. I'm used to it. I won't complain too much, because I know I'm dying. I stared out of the window and told myself to face death calmly. (Feel the Beauty of Life, the perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province)
Tips: There is a suspense at the beginning of this article: "I'm going to die". So readers can't help but be attracted and think, how could he die? What happened to him? What will happen next? This series of questions naturally brings your eyes to the following, making you eager to know the following. This way of opening captures people's curiosity when reading, and it is well designed to attract readers to read.
Tip 3: Associative memory and clever narration.
Independent small courtyard, moonlight like water, quietly flowing around me, I feel the coolness of my heart sinking into the bottom of the water, causing endless thoughts of you! I remember it was a moonlit night, and I put you on the train to a foreign land. ...
At an early age, you struggled alone in a foreign land. Is everything all right? (Selected from the perfect composition of Henan senior high school entrance examination "When I Face" Dissolved Moonlight ")
Skills counseling: In the senior high school entrance examination, there are often recall questions, which ask candidates to recall an event that happened in the past. At this time, you may wish to associate memories and cause thinking. This method is introduced at the beginning of this paper. This article first wrote the moonlight, which triggered the association of "I" and reminded me of the story that happened on such a night. This kind of beginning is filled with a strong emotional atmosphere, which is conducive to expressing emotions.
"Go home often, go home ..." This song echoed in the room. Dong Zi took the letter from his father, and tears welled up in his eyes. Dong Zi has been away from home for three years. For three years, my father's letter erased the hatred in Dong Zi's heart. Dong Zi hid his thoughts, which went back to three years ago. (Selected from the full text of Gansu Provincial Senior High School Entrance Examination "Always Go Home and Have a Look")
Tips: This article starts with a well-known song, which makes the characters think, makes their thoughts go back to the past, and skillfully explains the time when the story happened.
Tip 4: Highlight contradictions and render the atmosphere.
"Don't be a secretary early, it's useless!" Travel-stained from school, 100 meters away from home, I smelled a strong smell of gunpowder. I heard my mother yelling at my father, and a feeling of "dark clouds cover the city" came to my mind violently. Mom is also nosy. She has to interfere in everything her father does, or she will go into a rage. Fortunately, my father's prime minister can hold a boat in his stomach. Every time I let my mother make a storm, I only use a few words to clean up the mess. I don't know why today. (Selected from the full text of the "Democracy Wall Storm" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao, Hubei)
Tips: Narrative writing should be good at creating contradictions and unfolding stories in contradictions in order to attract people. There is a contradiction at the beginning of this article. The purpose is to quickly grasp the reader's heart and arouse the reader's interest in reading.
"It's too hot this summer. I'll buy an air conditioner tomorrow!" Mom said while eating.
"Buy air conditioning, buy air conditioning, you only know to enjoy! You should save some money for your children to go to college in the future, and you will never have this plan. " Grandma nagged without a smile on her face.
"Your family should enjoy it. You are 70 years old this year. How long can you live? " Mother casually replied.
I wonder in my heart: sometimes they talk like lovers, but there are few contradictions. The atmosphere today is very tense. People often say that there is no blood relationship between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, so it is difficult to get along well. (Selected from the full text of "Responsibility" in Chongqing Senior High School Entrance Examination)
Tip: Only if there are contradictions will the story attract people. In the process of resolving contradictions, the cadence and readability of the article will be greatly enhanced. This article shows the contradiction between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law from the beginning, which lays a solid foundation for the further development of the story.
Tip 5: Use rhetoric skillfully to show literary talent.
Love is a ray of sunshine in winter, which dispels the cold frost; Love is a shower after a long drought, nourishing a broken heart; Love is a bright light in Wang Yang, which indicates the hope of a new life. (From the full text of "Bringing Love to Others" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)
If I were a bird, I would remember the nest when I was born; If I were a sapling, I would never forget the land that nourished me. If I were a river, the snowy plateau would be a brand in my memory; If ... no matter what I am, no matter how I exist, I can forget everything around me and even abandon myself, but one thing is indelible-that is, reward. (Selected from the full text of "Regression Interpretation" in Guiyang Senior High School Entrance Examination)
Yingying moonlight, I hold the clearest one; In the afterglow, I hold a ray of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked the brightest bouquet; Be kind to others, be kind to others, be kind to others. (selected from the full text of Jiangxi senior high school entrance examination "Treat people kindly")
I often hear the old man say, "I have crossed more bridges than you!" " "At that time, I was thinking, what is a bridge? Is it just a "bridge" where two old locust trees overlap in the west of the village, and we still have to go to school? (Selected from the full text of "Beautiful Bridge" in the senior high school entrance examination in Shanxi Province)
Skill training: Rhetoric is an indispensable part of language use. Clever and appropriate rhetorical devices can often add a lot of elegance to the language. In the exam composition, if candidates can skillfully use rhetoric to dress up their own language, they will get good results. In the above cases, the first case uses metaphor and parallelism, the second case uses analogy and parallelism, and the third case uses parallelism. The method of overlapping words vividly expounds his own views and expresses his true feelings. The language is bright and colorful, which is refreshing to read. The fourth situation is to ask questions, which is very attractive and easy to arouse readers' interest in reading. Such an extraordinary beginning will naturally leave a good impression on the marking teacher.
Tip 6: describe the environment and set off the background ~-
The composition begins with a description of the scenery, and then describes people or events as the main body of the article. This is also a common way to start.
The scenery at the beginning should be closely related to the narrative content of the article, not for showing off or writing about the scenery. When you begin to describe the scenery, you must think clearly about what scenery to write about. What is the purpose of writing about scenery? Is it to set off the characters? To render the environment? Create an atmosphere? Or is it to hint at the central idea? If the scenery description at the beginning has nothing to do with the main content, then the beginning is redundant.
1) Outside the classroom, the whistling north wind slammed on the wall with dense raindrops, making a "cha, cha" sound. In the classroom, an all-around competition exam has reached a white-hot stage. (selected from the full text of "Building a wall in my heart" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao, Hubei Province)
2) Purple clouds filled the whole sky, including a bloody sunset. Such a warm picture shows the warmth and calmness of The Most Beautiful Sunset, which is intoxicating and fascinating. (Selected from the full text of "Bringing the Beauty of Dawn to Lost Me" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)
3) The evening breeze blows the last wave of ripples on the river, the sunset puts away the last afterglow, and the autumn frost watches the last goose return. We stood quietly, our eyes wandering on the distant door of memory. When many have withered, we can at least say to ourselves, "Don't be sad, I have experienced that feeling, although only once." (Selected from the full text of "Once Owned" in the senior high school entrance examination in Anhui Province)
Tips: All landscape words are sentimental words. In the writing of narrative and prose, environmental description is essential. Environmental description can render the atmosphere, contrast the characters and promote the development of the story. A brief description of the environment at the beginning of the article can not only provide a specific background for the article, but also form a special atmosphere for the article. At the beginning of the above three paragraphs, the first paragraph is about the arrival of a sudden rain, in order to set off the background of the exam in the classroom and create a tense atmosphere. The third paragraph is about the sunset, which mainly lays the foundation for writing your own life feelings below and is an emotional trigger. In the third paragraph, through the descriptions of "evening breeze", "sunset glow" and "autumn frost", the mood of the characters at this time is set off. The three paragraphs are simple but practical, and the effect is good, which can greatly stimulate readers' interest in reading.
4) The moonlight is hazy, the stars are sparse, and the wind carries the depth of the night and quietly drills into the window. On such a dark night, the desk lamp gives off soft light, giving people a warm feeling. There is a white card on the desk, which says "I wish you a bright future". I can't help but recall some past events between me and her ... ("I can't forget her")
5) On a hazy and cold winter night, the air seems to have solidified. Suddenly a loud cry woke me up from my sleep. A premonition touched my chaotic state of mind like an electric current, and I don't want what happened to it to finally happen.
"Walter, your grandfather ..." My mother was in tears, but I've never seen her so sad. ("Tears in My Heart")
I like this way of writing best ... it shows a person's sensitivity to the environment.
Tip 7: Clever quotation and get into the topic quickly.
Quote others' poems or idioms, proverbs, allusions, etc. At the beginning of the article, you can get to the topic as quickly as you can get straight to the point. Because the quoted poems and proverbs are familiar to everyone, it is also easy to arouse readers' interest. The quoted poems and proverbs are the products of predecessors' high summarization, and they are philosophical in themselves. Citation can increase the philosophical nature of the article and so on.
1, starting with a poem.
A "Don't be idle, it's for nothing." My father is over forty and his head is white, but he is still very ordinary. ......
B Li Bai, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, once said, "I used to be on Jiujiang overlooking Jiuhua Mountain. Tianhe hangs green water, showing nine hibiscus flowers ... ". During the summer vacation, I was lucky enough to go to Jiuhua Mountain with my father. Visit Jiuhua Mountain
2. Start with a proverb.
A There is a saying in China that "three sticks don't fart." My father is a quiet man. ......
B "August 15, Yun Zheyue, the fifteenth day of the first month, it snows and lights up." This agricultural proverb is really amazing. On the night of Mid-Autumn Festival last year, the moon was covered by clouds! Dad said this proverb, which means it will snow on the Lantern Festival next year. My heart thumped, because I like watching lanterns best, for fear that the lanterns of the Lantern Festival will be scattered by the "snow". Who knows that although it snowed this year, the Lantern Festival is more lively, but I saw a wonderful scene of bright lights in the snow. Look at the lights.
You can also use couplets, starting with idioms and quoting short stories. But these quotations must be selective, relevant to the content of the article, summarize the full text, summarize the content of the article, or remind the topic. Otherwise, it is not easy to quote casually, which has nothing to do with the content of the article.
There is also a special "famous saying"-starting with one voice.
1), starting with a song.
"Smile sweetly, you smile sweetly, just like flowers in full bloom in the spring breeze." It's almost eleven o'clock in the middle of the night, and my father is still singing online with a broken voice in front of the computer. I tossed and turned in bed and couldn't sleep. It's really annoying There will be a Chinese exam tomorrow. ......
2) Start with a noise.
"Pida, Pida." There are dull and lazy footsteps in the quiet stairs at night. Father must have come back from playing mahjong. He may have lost badly this time. ......
You can also use dialogue, piano, wind and thunder. Anything that can make a sound can be a start.
Tip 8: At the beginning of the details,
This means that the article begins with a detailed description. It may be a characteristic action of a character, or it may be a few wonderful dialogues. This is also a common way to start a narrative.
There are many kinds of details at the beginning, and the common ones are scenery details and character details. At the beginning of character details, there are generally two kinds of characters: dialogue or action.
For example: 1) My brother stuffed a piece of rice cake into his mouth with his left hand, and carried his schoolbag belt in his right hand, swinging it in the air for half a circle and throwing it over his shoulder. I jumped and jumped and ran a long way towards the school. Suddenly he stopped, pretended to tie his shoelaces, looked at the house with the cat's waist and side face, saw no one at the door, and ran in the other direction.
This ghost must have played truant. My little brother.
This beginning is about my brother's action of going out, which shows his anxiety, liveliness and intelligence.
2) I came back from hunting and walked along the avenue in the garden. My dog is in front of me. Suddenly, it shortened its steps and began to sneak, as if looking for prey. (Turgenev's Sparrow)
3) A pair of worn-out leather shoes, an old hat, a short beard, a thin crutch, an ill-fitting suit and a figure-eight catwalk, this is the poor image created by Chaplin in the film. Richard is a nobody who is despised and bullied. Chaplin created all kinds of jokes through this little guy's various experiences, with funny actions and expressions, which brought joy to people. In the era of silent movies, Charlie was considered a nobody, whether he was a six-year-old child or a sixty-year-old man.
Chaplin's success is not accidental, but the result of his long-term efforts (Charlie Chaplin, master of film art)
4) When I was a child, I suddenly walked up to my mother and looked up and asked, "Mom, why on earth do you love me?" Mother put down her needle and thread, put her cheek on my forehead and said gently and without hesitation, "Why not-just because you are my daughter!" " "(Bing Xin's maternal love)