In our daily study, work or life, we will always come into contact with composition. According to the characteristics of writing proposition, composition can be divided into propositional composition and non-propositional composition. Then the question comes, how to write an excellent composition? The following is a successful composition I compiled for you. Welcome to read the collection.
At that time, my successful composition 1, a bright pearl, must have endured numerous peristalsis of mussels and polished by numerous waves before it was brilliant; The eagle soaring in the vast sky must have experienced the pain of falling off the cliff countless times before tempering a pair of volley wings; Similarly, a truly successful person will stand up again after countless falls.
I remember that during the summer vacation, one day the weather was very hot, and the burning sun jumped on our heads, making you sweat like a yellow river, like taking a hot bath.
"Son, let's take a hot bath, shall we?" When I heard my father say that I was going to take a hot bath, I immediately refreshed myself and said excitedly, "Really?" Great, take me there quickly! "I hurried to prepare clothes, and then followed my father to the swimming pool. At first, crystal clear water came into view, and many children and adults were swimming happily.
At that time, I immediately took off my clothes, jumped hard, and then jumped into the water, but I couldn't swim. I suddenly sank into the water. I accidentally opened my mouth and was welcomed by a lot of water. I drank a lot of water at once. My father looked at me and said, "swimming is not like this. You have to keep paddling with your hands!" " Try again. I took my father's advice and really got better.
Finally, after a period of practice, I learned to swim this time, and I finally succeeded.
I succeeded that time. There are many moments in composition 2, which let me taste the joy of success. I have had too many successes in my life. But this success made me feel different.
It was an autumn in the third grade, and the red leaves were falling. Completely different from this scene, there is a fierce sports meeting on the playground.
The host said, "Please let the basketball team out, please let the football team out ..."
I, a "lightning superman", was naturally assigned to the relay running group.
Listen, "win!" "Too handsome" and so on, I heard that the group reported by the host was getting closer and closer to the relay run, and a bean-sized sweat ran down my head.
"Please run the team by relay!" A word interrupted my thoughts, and my legs suddenly went soft. Leave? No, no, no, even if I lose, I have to understand that I am not a coward!
My body seems to be infused with new strength. I walked behind a classmate.
With a loud cry, my hand caught the stick. I crossed my legs and ran out.
I suddenly forgot to go back and crossed the loop. It's over! We're losing! I'm so nervous that I don't know what to do.
"Stick to it! Strive for victory! "
As soon as I heard it, I found that my classmates were encouraging me. Yes, I will try my best to win the final victory!
I ran out like lightning. I only hear my own footsteps and heartbeat. ...
"Win-win-!" The students were ecstatic. I stood at the starting line, panting.
This time, I won a different victory and gave me a different taste.
That time, I succeeded. ...
I succeeded that time. Success will bring happiness, increase knowledge and enhance self-confidence. That time, I succeeded!
It was a skipping competition in grade five. I participated in this activity on behalf of the whole class. My goal is to strive for 120 jump. When I arrived at the stadium, I became nervous, my heart was pounding and jumping like a naughty rabbit, but I calmed down immediately. Beep, whistle sounded, I threw up the rope and jumped up. "One, two, three ..." The students counted aside. The rope passed through my head and drew an arc in the air. "Seventy, seventy-one, seventy-two ..." The students counted for a while and let out a cry: "Ah! Yan Jiangyan, hurry up! " It turns out that my speed has slowed down. As soon as I heard my classmate's cry, I quickly threw the rope up. Gradually, I felt my heavy breath, my arms were sore, and my feet were like a hammer weighing 10 tons, so I couldn't lift it. My throat is dry and unbearable, and my mouth is open and closed, panting. I saw that Zhang Zhuoxin, the general of our class, was still jumping very hard. I didn't give up, but I got up the courage again, lifted my 1000 kg "thigh" and struggled one after another ... but after a while, I "fell down" like a deflated ball and fainted. At this time, the ear came the frequent "insist! Hold on! Yan, you can do it ... "I suddenly bulged my cheeks, gritted my teeth and threw it out with all my strength. I saw the students counting with the rhythm of skipping rope: "12 1, 122, 123, ... 129." Suddenly, there was a beep and the whistle sounded. I saw in Teacher Shi's notebook: Yan 129. ……
That time, I succeeded! My secret is: persistence is victory!
I succeeded that time. Everyone will succeed. Some successes are learning a skill, some are solving a problem, some are overcoming a difficulty, and some are achieving a goal ... I also succeeded.
One day, my mother and I went to the skating rink to play together. I put on my skates happily. I just stood up, but somehow, as if a force pulled me down, I sat on the ground, stood up and sat down again. Others laughed when they saw me, and my mother hid and snickered, but I stood up slowly, walked slowly to the handrail and slid up bit by bit, but after one step. My poor ass is swollen from falling today. I kind of wanted to give up, and then a big sister slipped away. He looked at me and said, "When skating, put your feet in a figure of eight, let go and slide slowly.". Don't give up the child. " I skated bit by bit according to the method my sister taught me, and finally I learned to skate.
After the storm, I can finally see the rainbow. I deeply realized from learning skating that as long as you persevere, challenge yourself and work hard, you will succeed. While persisting, we should also pay attention to skills!
I succeeded at that time. The perfect diamond must be tempered to shine in the sun. People, too, can only be useful through hard work, and I have such an experience.
I began to learn piano when I was in the second grade of primary school. Once, the teacher asked me to perform, and my mother nodded again and again. I said, "Mom, can I not go?" I don't want to go. "My mother told me" no "with her eyes. My heart thumped and I thought it was no good. If I go to perform, I will only fail. This will make them think I'm just kidding. On the day of the performance, I was placed in the tenth place. It's my turn, and I think like "fifteen buckets to draw water-seven ups and downs": "Come on! I'm sure I can do it. " I secretly cheered myself up. When I stepped onto the stage, my palms were sweating, my face was red and my feet were soft. I am so nervous that I can't breathe. My heart is like a heavy stone, and I can't hold my breath. I started to play, and I tried to stay calm, but when I saw so many people in the audience and a pair of eyes looking at me expectantly, I hardly knew what I wanted to play, and my mind went blank, thinking, "What should I do? What should I do? "Why? How is the score played? " At this time, my mother held up the music score for me, implying that I didn't need to relax. I took a deep breath and suddenly remembered. I played the whole song completely. I felt relaxed when I stepped down. At this time, warm applause rang out from the audience. I really want to shout "I succeeded!" " "My mother also gave me applause excitedly.
So through this incident, I feel that as long as I work hard and have confidence, I will succeed.
I succeeded that time. Jay Chou became the focus of the music industry because of her persistence. This reminds me of the success of my first science fiction novel.
I like to fly freely in the fantasy world since I was a child. When I heard that Mr. Chen asked us to write novels, I came to a fantasy world with excitement. Before, I read all the memories of science fiction and immediately began to play them in my mind like a movie. I don't like others' stereotyped "sets", and I prefer to use "chapters" to express them. So, a chapter will be very long.
"Two pages a day, accumulate over time, persevere." That's what I asked myself. In this way, I persisted for a year. I watched fewer and fewer students around me insist, so I sensitively accelerated the speed.
"Hey, it's so boring, I really want to rewrite one!" This idea has appeared in my mind hundreds of times, but every time it is a firm answer: "No! This is not a waste product, this is the crystallization of my earliest wisdom! "
Finally, one day, I finished my first book with a tragic ending. In retrospect, it was the crystallization of more than 80 thousand words. This is my ideal first step to become an author in the future! And around me, only a few people are insisting.
This is only the first step, and life is still long. This step, let me know myself, but also let me believe in myself more. Can do better!
Isn't this the first step to Jay Chou's success?
At that time, my composition 7 was successful. In science class on Friday, the teacher gave us an assignment, "Soak two fingers in cold water and hot water respectively, and then press them on the table quickly.". Does it feel the same? "
I began to do my homework as soon as I got home. On Saturday, I finished my homework in the morning and began to do this experiment. I prepared in advance: a cup of cold water and a cup of hot water. At the same time, I put my left index finger in the hot water cup, my right index finger in the cold water cup, and put both index fingers heavily on the table. "Hey, how come only the left index finger feels, and the right index finger doesn't feel? I said. Dad said, "use ice water instead of cold water, because the temperature of ice water is much lower than that of the dining table." "I put that cup of cold water in the freezer of the refrigerator again. After more than ten minutes, when I took out the cold water, it had turned into ice water. My hands are frozen stiff. I think it worked this time? It really worked this time. My feeling is: put your finger in ice water and put it on the table, it will feel very hot; Put your fingers in hot water and put them on the table, you will feel very cold.
After my discussion with my father, the conclusion is that the temperature of the table is the same. The reason why two fingers have different feelings is because the original temperature is different. Two fingers, one is cold and the other is hot. In ordinary environment, it will change from cold to hot and from hot to cold.
I made it! This success is due to my efforts and my father's help. It feels good to be successful!
I succeeded that time. The success of composition 8 is hard-won and beyond everyone's imagination. Success is both sweet and bitter. On that special day, I succeeded.
/kloc-The day in March of 0/6 impressed me deeply. I worked hard to get this!
In the previous paragraph, Mr. Ding suggested that we can judge who can use a pen by describing the position. Suddenly I was very excited. On the same day, the teacher asked the students to draw a copybook. Because I draw slowly, I haven't finished painting, and students such as Wu unfilial and Zhang Naiyuan proudly show it to the teacher for inspection! Most students are allowed to use pens except me. I feel bad in my heart
The second mapping is two or three times faster than before. But at that time, I was eager for success, my handwriting was too fast, and there were several typos. I watched my classmates happily return to their positions. I really envy the students who can use pens! I secretly made up my mind that I must seize the next opportunity and use my pen well.
One night after school, I was surprised to hear the teacher say that there was a copybook in my homework at night. I think this is my chance! I must finish this task with high quality. When I write my homework, every time I write a word, I feel that my proud pen is one step closer to me. I am more serious!
Finally, when I asked the teacher to check, the teacher was concentrating on his homework. The teacher's face turned from cloudy to sunny, and his eyes showed satisfaction. Finally, a few words popped up in the teacher's mouth: you can use a pen. At that moment, I felt the joy of success.
Success and failure are often just moments, but as long as you work hard. You will succeed one day!
I succeeded that time. Every summer vacation, I will take the piano exam.
study for a test
As soon as the summer vacation comes, I have to be busy practicing the piano. I practice piano for 2-4 hours every night and recite music. Really too busy! Of course, this effort has not been in vain.
Go to the exam
I remember my first piano exam. When I arrived at the gate, I was a little nervous when I saw all the people. There are parents, classmates and teachers. Some students have answers, while others are very sad. Seeing this, I am even more nervous. My heart is pounding and my feet are shaking. I sat in a chair at the door in fear and trembling. Mom saw it and asked with concern, "What's wrong with you?" I replied with trepidation, "I'm a little nervous." Mother comforted: "don't be nervous, have confidence, you will pass!" " "My heart suddenly relaxed and my feet stopped shaking. The teacher who can be named reports: "Wu Yuezhou, get ready! "At that time, I was nervous again, and my palms and foreheads were sweating all the time. Mother encouraged: "Be confident, don't you usually play well?"? "? Come on! "My heart is no longer so nervous. ( )
Passed the exam
"Wu Yuezhou!" It was my turn, and my mother encouraged me: "You can do it!" " "I walked into the examination room, and the wonderful voice of Tintin Dongdong flowed through my fingers. I successfully completed all the tracks and looked at the smile on the examiner's face. I smiled. After the exam, when I walked out of the examination room easily, my mother greeted me and gave me a big hug!
That time, I really succeeded!
That time I succeeded in my composition 10 "I succeeded! I succeeded! " I cried with excitement. I made it. What? It turns out that a handicraft I made was successful.
At that time, our nature teacher asked us to make a handicraft-handmade flowers. After I got home, I prepared materials: paper, red ink and scissors ... I cut the paper into a pattern similar to petals with scissors, then stuck it one by one, and put a straw under the flowers. The overall shape of hand-made flowers has been revealed. The last step is to dip paper flowers in red ink. I put the other end of the flower in red ink and took out the flower to see "Ah". My flower has become a "drowned rat", red in the east, not red in the west, red on the left and not red on the right.
So, I want to give up, but I think of a sentence that Li Guangdi said: Nothing is difficult in the world if you set your mind on it! His words inspired me, so I looked for the reason for my failure and made another handmade flower.
I re-prepared the materials and did the same thing as last time. Finally, I didn't put the flowers directly into the red ink bottle, but picked up the brush and drew them all. I made it. A bright paper flower appeared in front of me. How beautiful!
I succeeded in writing that time 1 1. Once in a math class, the teacher gave us a "math quiz".
On the day of the exam, the teacher gave us the paper first, and then asked us to write our names on it. Let's start answering questions I looked at the problem first and found it not difficult. Unexpectedly, the teacher said to us sternly, "Whoever doesn't get 90 points this time, let him copy the paper ten times!" " "I panicked as soon as you listen, thinking, it's over. I may have to copy the paper.
But none of the questions on the test paper can beat me. After I finished, I checked it carefully for 5-6 times, ran to the podium with the paper, and carefully put it in a stack of papers on the lecture table. Although the paper was handed in, I always had a big stone in my heart for fear of being fined if I didn't do well in the exam.
In the math class the next afternoon, I saw the math teacher angrily carrying a stack of papers into the classroom. My heart is full of ups and downs: oh, no, I certainly didn't do well in the exam, otherwise the teacher's expression wouldn't be like this! I was on pins and needles in my seat, and I kept chanting in my heart: I must go to 90, I must go to 90! The teacher glanced at the classroom and began to speak: "Four group leaders come and hand out papers!" " "Four group leaders ran to the front of the platform, carefully took the paper from the teacher and sent it to us. The paper was sent out. I couldn't believe my eyes when I looked at the results. How did I get 96 points? Great, great, finally don't have to copy the paper! Not only did I not have to copy the paper, but my floating heart became real and returned to the position of my chest.
Through this incident, I understand a truth: whatever you do, you can do it well as long as you put your heart into it! composition
That time I successfully wrote the composition 12. I'm not interested in learning skateboarding. But I actually learned to skate, and I'm addicted to it.
What's going on here? Because almost all my friends know this fun skateboard, I can't help admiring it. I'll ask my mother to buy me one at once. My mother readily agreed, which surprised me. My mother never bought it for me, but she agreed this time. Anyway, my mother keeps her promise. The next day, my mother took me to the mall, bought it for me and found a coach to teach me. The coach happily told me the essentials of skateboarding: put the center of gravity in the middle of skateboarding, swing the hind feet hard, and control the direction with the front legs.
I tried it first and fell down accidentally. The coach patiently told me to swing my feet hard. I tried again and fell down. I am angry and annoyed. I really want to give up, but I'm not willing. Others can learn. Why can't I learn? I will never waste time on the road. So I got up again, and after many attempts, I finally climbed onto the skateboard.
I learned to skate, and my heart is sweeter than drinking honey. That night, I skated for a while, because I skated too fast and hit someone. The coach told me that it's your real skill not to beat talents. It seems that I have to work harder.
By learning skateboarding, I know that as long as I persist, I will succeed. Is this different from our study? When you are in trouble, you can't back down. Only by bravely facing difficulties and solving problems can we gain something! Do anything, as long as you do it with your heart, you will have no difficulty in getting it. Enjoy the breeze, feel the joy of success, and feel as sweet as honey. I really want to shout at the sky: I finally succeeded!
I succeeded that time. Today, my mother bought me a blue bike. Its seat can be adjusted, but I can't ride such a beautiful bike. My face was flushed with shame. Mom said, "Never mind, you can learn to ride a bike!" " "After that, we went downstairs to the community.
The sun outside is burning like a big fireball. I stared at the bike, ready to start practicing. First of all, my mother held the bike, and I sat on it carefully. My mother said, "Be sure to keep your balance and pedal slowly, or you will ride very fast.". You just learned to ride a bike too fast! " I did as my mother said, but I was so scared that I fell down as soon as I got on it.
The second time, I put on my helmet and knee pads to get ready to ride a bike. The second time was much better than the first time. I started riding well, but I lost my balance in the back. I rode up and said, "I can ride." But when I looked back, it turned out that my mother had been holding me in the back, afraid that I would fall.
The third time, after my unremitting efforts, I finally learned to ride a bike. After riding for several times, I found that I rode very well and smoothly. From now on, I can ride a bike!
I succeeded that time! I see, don't give up when you are in trouble. Perseverance will eventually succeed.
That time I successfully wrote the composition 14. I woke up and opened the window. Birds are chirping on the branches and the sun is smiling at me. After breakfast, I walked happily to the three-person bookstore.
As soon as I entered the three-person bookstore, I heard the students talking about it. What seems to be lying on the table? Grill, candles, quail eggs, water cups, lighters? I'm surprised. I don't know what to do today.
The teacher came over with a smile and said, Today we are going to challenge to cook eggs with disposable cups and candles. First, the teacher divided us into three groups. I am the leader of a group. Then the challenge began. The teacher put the grill on the table and lit the candles. The flame jumped up like a salamander. The teacher asked me to fill half a glass of water, and then carefully put the quail eggs into the water. Quail eggs jumped into the water like big men. I immediately put the glass on the grill and the flame tore it like a salamander. However, the cup is not damaged at all. "Why isn't there a hole in the cup?" The students are all monks-all at sea. The teacher told us that this is because there is water in the cup, and the fire must dry the water in the cup before it burns. After a while, crystal blisters appeared in the cup, like gems. Ten minutes later, the cup was motionless and the flame seemed to emit black smoke angrily. Thirty minutes passed and we were very anxious. We fished out quail eggs and peeled off its hot coat, and crystal clear protein appeared in front of my eyes. I tasted it carefully. It's a jelly-like protein, tender and fragrant. It is really delicious!
I finally feel the joy of success. It turns out that success requires us to accumulate knowledge and explore constantly. It feels good to be successful!
At that time, 15 was successfully written. I don't know how many tears are behind success, and sweat is supporting us. The joy after success seems to dissolve all tears and sweat.
I remember that during the summer vacation, my mother signed me up for a swimming class on a whim. I started class today, and I felt uneasy. There are many questions: Is the teacher strict or not? Is it a female coach? ..... With these questions, I came to the swimming class.
Oh! It turned out to be a female coach! I changed my bathing suit and got into the water. The water level is just up to my chin. The teacher told the students to hold their breath first. I just threw it into the water. As expected, I couldn't help sticking my head out of the water for a few seconds. The students all laughed "just for a moment", and I was very sad. The coach said in her soft voice, "Where there is a will, there is a way". After listening to this sentence, I felt confident and listened attentively to the teacher's main points. Ha ha! It's easy to hold your breath now. Now I am addicted to swimming, and I always learn the fastest in every swimming class. However, unexpected things happened, and another major difficulty was placed in front of me. I sprained my foot and couldn't swim any more, but I went on studying despite the pain. You don't know that the pain of swimming can't be described in words, but I persisted. My foot injury has healed. I took the swimming exam, won the first place and became the best in the swimming class. When I stood on the podium to receive the award, my joy and sweetness immediately flowed to every corner of my body.
The joy of success is so sweet that people cannot forget it!
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