Poor me, like a "prisoner bird", was mentioned to the barber shop. Mother let me sit in the chair while I read magazines on the sofa. A chubby and evil figure came to us-a barber. He appeared, with a smirk and sometimes a little greasy. He talked or discussed with my mother for a while, then turned and left. I thought my mother was suddenly open-minded, secretly grateful and complacent, and couldn't help but sit still. After that, the hateful+evil barber appeared again. He came to me with a big smile on his face. I glared, pouted and sat in a chair, full of gunpowder. Suddenly, the barber said, "Your mother asked me to cut it short, and it's better to cut it short." Jesus Christ. Oh, my god Want my hair short or kill me! Then I calmed down for a while and thought, short hair should be, maybe, maybe fun. Try it? I nodded with a grain of salt and waited quietly.
2. Look at the picture and write about Xiaohua Mall and hedgehog loving beauty in the forest barber shop.
One day, there will be a beauty contest in the forest. Flower cat and hedgehog also decided to go. They walked and walked and met a peacock on the road. Peacock proudly said, "You are so ugly. One is like a ball with thorns, and the other is like a wax gourd.". Are you uglier than me? " The flower cat and hedgehog shed tears sadly.
Finally, they found the forest barber shop. They were very happy and thought, "I must dress up as the most beautiful animal in the world."
An hour later, the flower cat cut off her long beard and sharp claws on her feet. It feels beautiful. The little hedgehog burns long spikes, like a beautiful flower and a big star.
The flower cat and the hedgehog went out triumphantly and happened to meet the clever little monkey. The little monkey said, "How can a cat catch a mouse without a beard and sharp claws?" Hedgehog, how can you resist the enemy's invasion without hard thorns? "
Xiaohua Mall and Hedgehog blushed.
3. How to write a summary of barbershop activities and emphasize the importance of service, inspection and management?
There is no model essay.
The following is for reference,
Mainly write down the main work content, how to work hard and the achievements, and finally put forward some rationalization suggestions or new efforts.
Work summary is to let the superior know what contribution you have made and reflect the value of your work.
So you have to write a few points:
1, your understanding of the position and work 2, what did you do specifically?
3. How did you work hard and what things did you solve with your brain? Even if it's nothing, write something difficult. How did you solve it through hard work?
4. What abilities or knowledge do you need to improve in your future work?
5. The superior likes people who take the initiative to work. You should make all the preparations in your work, that is, the preparations in advance are as follows for your reference:
Summary is a comprehensive and systematic overall evaluation and analysis of the situation over a period of time, and analysis of achievements, shortcomings and experiences. Summary is a kind of applied writing, which is a rational thinking about the work that has been done.
Basic requirements of summary
1. Summary must have an overview and a description of the situation, some simple and some detailed.
2. Achievements and shortcomings. This is the main content of the summary. The purpose of summing up is to affirm the achievements and find out the shortcomings. What are the achievements, how big, how to use them and how to achieve them; How many shortcomings there are, what aspects they are manifested in and how they are produced should be clearly written.
3. Lessons learned. In order to facilitate the future work, we must analyze, study and summarize the previous work experience and lessons to form theoretical knowledge.
Summarize the precautions:
1. We must seek truth from facts, the achievements are basically not exaggerated, and the shortcomings are basically not narrowed. This is the basis of analysis and learning lessons.
2. Clear organization. This sentence is fluent and easy to understand.
3. Be detailed and appropriate. There are important things and minor things, so when you write, you should highlight the key points. The problems in the summary should be divided into primary and secondary, detailed.
Basic format of summary:
1, title
2. Text
Introduction: overview, overall evaluation; Summarize the full text.
Subject: analyze the shortcomings of achievements and sum up experiences and lessons.
Conclusion: Analyze the problem and make clear the direction.
Step 3 sign
Signature and date.
4. How to write a composition at the beginning? First of all, cut to the chase and get straight to the point.
Narrative written mainly by characters can directly explain the characters or directly enter the theme by describing the dialogues and actions of portraits; Narrative narrative can point out the time, place and related background of the event from the beginning. For example:
1. Her name is Wang Qianqian. I am the monitor of grade two. Although we have been apart for more than a year, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable. ("With such a good monitor")
Teacher Tang is ill. At the end of the party, the students all sat in their seats sadly. The classroom is as silent as stagnant water. (True Love)
Second, write landscapes and render the atmosphere.
The beginning begins with writing the scenery, rendering the atmosphere, setting off the characters and unfolding the story. For example:
1, in the blooming season, the fragrance is everywhere, but I have no intention to watch it, because at this time I lost my classmate and friend-Qiang ("classmate")
2. The morning sun came out and the lake clothed it; The new moon has come up, with the stars as companions; Spring blossoms, green leaves set it off; Birds sing, crickets play the piano for them ... Everything in the world tells us the story of love. (Forever Love)
On a summer night, it was deep. Occasionally, I hear frogs in the water and cicadas in the trees, and the breeze blows, bringing coolness. I meditated and couldn't sleep for a long time. When I was a freshman, it happened that my first novel was published in the newspaper. At that time, I was so happy that I even forgot everything. I was so excited that I wasted my time. It was not until tonight that I realized that I seemed to be missing something. (Love, Invisible)
Third, lyrical discussion, determine the tone.
Use a few short comments and appropriate lyricism to start the article, or infect readers, or point out the main idea and lead to the following. For example:
1, the summer vacation is finally over. Like a long-awaited bird, I suddenly rushed out of the "birdcage" and flew to my grandmother's house in the country to relax my muscles and breathe fresh air. I decided to learn roller skating this summer vacation. ("I can do it")
Grandpa is my favorite relative. I spent my childhood with my grandfather. Grandpa took my hand and taught me to walk; It was my grandfather who taught me a lot since I was a child. I regard my grandfather as a crutch for my childhood growth. ("I Love Grandpa")
Fourth, set up suspense and lead to the following.
Setting suspense at the beginning can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's thinking and produce fascinating results. For example, 1, the wall clock is walking leisurely and rhythmically, and it's almost 4 o'clock. Why doesn't mom come back? ("worried")
2. What will my tomorrow be like? I often ask myself this question when I am running around in my life at two o'clock and one line, when I am struggling in the boundless ocean of problems. (Facing Tomorrow)
V quoting poems and highlighting the center
Starting with poetic quips and famous sayings can not only stimulate readers' imagination and interest, but also improve the taste of the article; It can not only reveal the main content, but also highlight people and things. For example, "man, his greatest enemy is himself." As long as you believe you can do it, you are the winner. " This is my favorite sentence. Every time I see it and the report card that is no longer clear before bed, the dreamlike past comes to my eyes. ("The Past")
5. One of the first ways to write a good composition is to come straight to the point. Honesty and trustworthiness are the fine traditions of our Chinese nation.
For thousands of years, people have emphasized and respected honesty. The wind of good faith is simple and mellow. The longer the history, the more the spirit of good faith fills China and the more the light of good faith shines on China.
Honesty has long been integrated into the blood of our national culture and has become an indispensable part of cultural genes. "Honest" youth is beautiful flowers in March, colorful sun rain in July and burning red leaves in October; It is the rising sun of the spray, the hundred ge of competition, and the eagle fighting the sky; It is playing the strings of joy, it is a bumpy stream running all the way to the sea, it is a tall and straight trunk, stretching lush green, warmly embracing the blue sky.
The second method at the beginning: quoting famous sayings and literary talents to highlight that if the cause is mixed with emotional factors, the cause is doomed to fail; Managers in our company are determined to have similar faces. -Ford's "2003 college entrance examination composition to straighten the heart" is the eye of the heart, and the rain is also the eye; When I am in my heart, it is also rain in my eyes.
-Wang Guozhen Hamlet once shouted: "Man, see yourself clearly!" And I want to say, "man, see the world clearly." Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said, "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not the lack of beauty, but the lack of discovery. "
"Eye of Wisdom" Mark? Twain said, "One foot weaves violets, but it leaves fragrance on your feet." . This is tolerance. "
The third method at the beginning of tolerance begins here: arranging literary seeds and breaking through the imprisoning influence of rock strata; Facing the light; The cloud influence of eagle storm flew into the sky; The steed broke through the influence of the reins and ran for vilen; Haiyan rushed to a more violent storm. What is "freedom", which comes quietly, leaving no trace, but arouses all kinds of light dances? What is it, leaving no trace, coming quietly, leaving a season of singing? What comes gently and goes quietly, leaving golden color in the harvest season? What is it, leaving quietly and coming gently, spinning a white dream for the silent earth? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time."
Children clap their hands with kites: "It's the wind." The tramp said, "This is just a dream."
("Happiness with Answers") Method 4 begins: the fable is fresh. A mother always thinks her son is a genius. Even though he dropped more than a dozen plates when he was a waiter, he lost his wallet when he was a conductor for the second time and sealed all the letters sent by others when he was a postman.
Finally, my son went to the army. Three years later, the mother proudly attended her son's review ceremony.
When people looked at the passing team and laughed, mother shouted excitedly, "Oh, dear Paul! They are all wrong, only you are right! " Emotion influences the cognition of things 1987, 75 Nobel Prize winners met in Paris. Someone asked a Nobel Prize winner, "Which university and laboratory did you learn the most important thing?" Unexpectedly, the white-haired scholar replied, "It was in kindergarten."
The scholar's answer was recognized by the participating scientists. The fifth method at the beginning of "The Starting Point of Wisdom": It is better to quote poetry than to say that I don't think about whether I can succeed/since I have chosen a distant place, I only care about hardships.
-Wang Guozhen "2002 college entrance examination composition selection heart" flowers in the corner! When you admire yourself, the world becomes smaller. -Bing Xin, you/look at me for a while/look at the clouds for a while/I think/you see me far away/you see the clouds very close-"Far and Near" Gu Cheng for example: the omnipotent phoenix head ● Youth is the nectar will and hard work made of blood drops-lasting Mika; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness.
Faith is the pillar of towering buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame. Standing on the coast of history, tracing back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on both sides of the Zehe River and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice.
Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. ● Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap.
Only by pursuing can we taste honest people. ● If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart.
How much laughter friendship has aroused and how many tears friendship has dried. The harbor of friendship is warm and affectionate, and the breeze of friendship sails.
Friendship is not an emotional investment, and there is no need for dividends and dividends. (Friendship can be changed into other words) ● Yingying Moonlight, I have the clearest glass; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; Long life, I want to pick the most important thing in the world-perseverance.
If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird. Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings.
Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear. (The lines can be changed in other words) ● Perseverance is the condensation of a stone and a sand on the levee of a thousand miles. Only by accumulating little by little will there be grandeur without seeing the head before and the tail after; Perseverance, surrounded by silkworms. Only by persisting one by one can we break through the cocoon and see the light again.
6. Write a composition about going to the barber shop for a haircut alone. Today is a sunny day. I want to go dancing and my mother wants to get a haircut. My mother asked me to go dancing first, and then I went to the barber shop to find her.
After dancing, I ran to the barber shop as fast as I could and saw my mother still ironing her hair. I said to my mother, "Will my mother cut my hair?" Mom replied, "Sure, do you want to cut bangs?" I said, "Cut it, cut it."
"Well, that's settled." I waited in the shop for a long time, but no one cut it for me.
Finally, my mother asked my boss to have my hair cut. Mom is still awesome, and sure enough, someone will come soon.
My aunt washed my hair first, and then cut my hair. My aunt cut my hair carefully, slowly, layer by layer.
Finally, it's time to cut bangs. Auntie, cut it slowly layer by layer. I worked hard for a long time and finally finished cutting it.
Guess what I thought after I cut it? Tell you what! I look like a good girl after cutting, especially cute. This is my latest hairstyle.
Today is a sunny day. I'm going to dance and my mother is going to get a haircut. My mother asked me to dance first, and then I went to the barber shop to find her. After dancing, I ran to the barber shop as fast as I could and saw my mother still ironing her hair.
I said to my mother, "Will my mother cut my hair?" Mom replied, "Sure, do you want to cut bangs?" I said, "Cut it, cut it." "Well, that's settled."
I waited in the shop for a long time, but no one cut it for me. Finally, my mother asked my boss to have my hair cut.
Mom is still awesome, and sure enough, someone will come soon. My aunt washed my hair first, and then cut my hair.
My aunt cut my hair carefully, slowly, layer by layer. Finally, it's time to cut bangs. Auntie, cut it slowly layer by layer.
I worked hard for a long time and finally finished cutting it. Guess what I thought after I cut it? Tell you what! I look like a good girl after cutting, especially cute.
This is my latest hairstyle.
7. How to write a composition at the beginning of the composition? A good beginning can make the marking teacher feel refreshed and have a good first impression, thus initially laying the emotional tone of marking; A good ending can make the marking teacher "maintain" and "refresh" a good impression, so as to "delete" the penalty record left by the shortcomings in the text in the cerebral cortex to the maximum extent. So we should give full play to our talents and write the beginning and the end well.
A good start usually takes several forms:
First, grandma tells stories. Also known as cold water brewing type. This kind of beginning is like an old woman telling a story, "Once upon a time there was a mountain, a temple on the mountain, and a monk in the temple". Its advantages are that the elements of the article are clearly explained, the foundation is solid and the clues are clear; The disadvantage is that the marking teacher "drinks" tea for a long time. "litchi honey" is such a beginning.
Second, the genre of martial arts films. In order to attract the audience, martial arts films usually like to show the fiercest fights, the grandest scenes, the most stylish characters and the most intractable contradictions at the first time. The article can also be like this, giving the most exciting content to the marking teacher at the beginning. Its advantages are that it is quick and attractive, and it can give full play to its talents, giving people a bold and frank impression; The disadvantage is that it is easy to leave unclear secondary factors.
Third, the type of offering Buddha with flowers. That is, starting with famous sentences and songs of celebrities, with the help of prestigious, philosophical and aesthetic social wealth, I skillfully express my thoughtful * *. This is equivalent to asking a great man to help and standing on the shoulders of a giant. Its advantage is that it takes the lead in setting an example and appears rich in knowledge; The disadvantage is that few words are accurate and have the right meaning.
Fourth, the grand celebration type. That is to say, with gorgeous rhetoric, figurative metaphor, clever symbol, moderate exaggeration and extravagant parallelism, a luxurious beginning is created, which makes people fascinated and amazed. The advantage of this kind of beginning is that people think you are brilliant, but if the main content behind you is not substantial, you will feel bluffing and top-heavy.
5. outspoken. That is to say, from the very beginning, I made a clean breast of my views, attitudes, thoughts and feelings. Its advantage is clear-cut, but we should pay attention to speaking our minds and feelings and not getting sick. Praise of Poplar is a model of this beginning.
The happy ending is usually obvious:
First, the melon is ripe. When things are done, they will naturally end. No fancy, no more complications, simple and unpretentious style. This is not the lack of words and the exhaustion of thinking, but a glorious return to nature, in short, the ultimate.
Second, it is difficult to see the type. That's the topic that Zhang Xianzhi discussed. Some articles have been written, but they don't seem to fully show and understand the real intention, so it is necessary to "make the finishing point"; Or if you don't express enough feelings, don't spit; Or there is a distance from the surface of the required "topic", which requires an artistic cycle ... all of them must be skilled in "hand and tail".
Third, it has a aftertaste. As long as the article writes the inevitable trend of the development of things, or obviously implies its own views and fully declares its feelings, it can come to an abrupt end when the article is unfolded to * * *, leaving readers room for aftertaste and imagination. This kind of ending does not pour out, fully trusts and respects the reader, and appears crisp and neat, with general demeanor. However, it is worth noting that the so-called "leaving a aftertaste" is an artistic treatment, which is to delete the foot of the snake, and it is by no means a hasty end because it can't be finished. For example, in the feature film, my powerful police force surrounded the small corner where the fugitive was hiding, and a close-up shot could end, at most, the criminal raised his hand or pointed the gun at his head. If you have to write that criminals are handcuffed and there is no sequel, it is a children's feature film; If you only see that it is not surrounded, it is a power outage.
Fourth, singing and dancing. Also known as the closing ceremony. This is similar to the end of the beginning of "Borrowing Flowers to Offer Buddha a Grand Celebration", which is intended to make people feel that the finale will last for three days. This is the end of the pear flower in Mailu.
5. Type of accident. The foreshadowing of the article has been completed, the story has been basically written, and the reader has almost guessed the ending. However, the author's writing style surprised the readers and produced dramatic effects. For example, write the story of kidnappers taking hostages: the frenzied kidnappers waved pistols, savagely pointed them at the back of the hostage's head and roared: "One, two-!" The air has solidified. "bang!" Its sound tore the hearts of everyone outside the cordon and in front of the TV. Blood flowed from the back of the hostage's head and slowly fell. However, his hand was moving. He touched his head, opened his eyes and looked at the kidnapper's flower head in surprise. He got up and ran outside.
How to start and end is actually the choice of writing order and language style. Try to write a different beginning and ending with "diligence" and "reward" as the topic.
8. How to write [train of thought analysis] at the beginning of the composition
There are generally the following methods at the beginning of a composition. You can choose different startup methods according to different articles.
[Problem solving process]
Five ways to start writing:
The beginning of an article, if novel and original, can often be fascinating, and some can also play a role in opening up ideas.
1. Don't beat around the bush and say it directly.
Cut to the chase is to put pen to paper and directly deduct the topic. For example, a passage at the beginning of Bing Xin's ode to cherry blossoms sets the tone of the whole article, which is to praise the cherry blossoms and the friendship between the Chinese and Japanese people. I began to use two "firsts" to write that people who go to Japan always "think of cherry blossoms" and "speak of cherry blossoms". Japanese friends always take cherry blossoms as an emotional bond when they receive guests' regrets or retention. Cherry blossoms, like Mount Fuji, are a symbol of Japan and a bond of friendship between the Chinese and Japanese peoples, which is also the theme of this paper. The article is described around this theme from beginning to end.
To write a composition with this opening method, we must accurately grasp the theme of the article, that is to say, we must not only determine the performance center according to the materials, but also accurately summarize it. The advantage of this opening method is that when you are writing a composition, you can always consider describing around the center, so that the center of the article can easily stand out. It is also convenient for readers to grasp the essentials, grasp the basic content and deeply understand the theme of the article.
2. Lyric disclosure method.
For example, Wei Wei's Who is the cutest person reveals the theme from the beginning. But it also has its own characteristics, which is to introduce the center step by step in expressing feelings. At the beginning of the article, I wrote down my uncontrollable thoughts-I want to tell my friends in my motherland all my feelings. A word "Dan" not only writes a turning point in the meaning of the article, but also highlights the key point to be expressed: the important experience of thoughts and feelings. At this point, although the article said "I feel more and more deeply who is the cutest person", it did not point out who is the cutest person. Then use the rhetorical question "Who is the cutest person?" To further attract people's attention. But there is still no direct answer, but who is "extremely cute" first, and then who is the cutest person. This opening is full of emotion, gripping and thought-provoking, which makes people have a deep understanding of the theme of the article from the beginning. Another outstanding feature of this starting method is to move from the general to the individual, and to set off the individual with the general: writing a friend who is moved by everything and wants to tell everything to the motherland is to highlight and set off the "important experience of thoughts and feelings"; Writing "extremely cute" is to further highlight "the cutest".
3. Flashback method
This kind of beginning, starting from the present situation, evokes the past and causes memories, and narrates the past along this line of thought, forming flashbacks.
When writing in this way, we should pay attention to several problems: first, we should describe what we see in front of us and give people a strong impression; The second is to reveal the meaning of what you see and summarize it in accurate and refined language; The third is to write something related to it, which leads to a series of vivid memories.
4. Place and time method
For example, the opening paragraph of Xianglinsao describes the social environment of Xianglinsao's life, including the gloomy scene at the end of the year, the grand introduction of the family's preparation for blessing, and the description of the hypocritical, reactionary and conservative Master Lu Si and his study, which reveals the typical environment of Xianglinsao's life and provides the background for the development of Xianglinsao's tragedy. This opening is a prelude to the development of the plot. Although it doesn't directly touch the theme of the article, it renders a suitable atmosphere for the full text, and explains the place and time of the story, which is closely related to the theme of the whole article.
5. Scenery description method
For example, at the beginning of Sun Li's Lotus Lake, the scenery of Lotus Lake is depicted with light colors and sparse brushstrokes. The article writes from the moon in the sky to the fog on the water surface; From a white world in the distance, write to the cool and clean yard in front of you; From the vision-the night view of Lotus Lake, I wrote the smell-the fragrance of lotus leaves. This description of natural scenery from different angles is beautiful and poetic, which makes people feel a mellow local flavor. This is the beginning, that is, it exaggerates the beauty of the natural scenery of Lotus Lake, sets off the beauty of the inner world of working women in the liberated areas who love new life and new labor, and naturally introduces the article into the text.